fanfic by MAria mc mannus
it's about this guy who know the brother and envy them...(sorry if i post it twice, the first have mistakes so ...)


Mickey's Diary: Why i hate the Mc Mannus brothers....


Sunday, 23 may 04.............11pm04

yeah..i know, my life is fucking annoying....how can it be different when we have the "Saints " around?
God...i hate them with so much passion...if I could just shout one of them..., fuck, them and their fucking show off ...they think they're so good than everybody , u know...Wow "we speak differents languages", "they 'll do anything to protect each other" balablabala...Big Woop!!...

Everytime when I'm in the bar...they always there with the other bastard...i don't remember his name...frodo...frodon...rocky....bono.....Anyway...So, some druggy bitch think they're ''cools''...well...I don't think so...they just look like some
"wanabe tough Leonardo Di Caprio and Orlando Bloom",
that all!! Tough ?Cool? My ass! They Suck! And if i was not a fucking chiken, trust me , i 'll go and tell them in their irish face what i think about them, oh yeah!! They just pisses me off with all their attitude, u know... and i'm not exagereted...u want some exemple? THey go to the church!! Tha Hell?people with tattoos and which drink as alcoholics want to make us believes that they pray?
I don't buy this shit!!!Show off!.....

Oh..oh..and they always try to be mysterious....u know, the tattoos......veritas and Royal??.....actually...its......global?? Anyway, yeah....u know, yesterday I was in the bar u know, and of course they were there with others ass ....i try 2 be nice u know, i asked to Connor beetween the 2 , who was the big brother, and guess what this son of the bitch answerd"Is the one with the bigger cock"...and people laugh.....wow, Big Woop....that so funny that i will broke my neck...MY ASS!!!BULLSHIT!!!they suck...people in the district try to make these boys out to be superheroes triumphing over evil...just cos 2 months ago , they helped a woman ....2 men tried to raped her....and wow! Big Woop!!!Badaboom! They were there ....like by magic....My ASS!! i'm sure they paid the men....

And the worse thing is that i can't choose, which one i hate the most...

Connor with his attitude:
"I'm cool, I'm tough....oh look at me!! What 's my name...Who is the master, oh oh....whitout me the world will be NOT THE SAME........I know everything....i'm the serious one...oh oh.....i'm look like the guy in the HUGO BOSS publicity......Back off, cos I'm here.....I'm so cool when I wear my glasses as the same time that my brother..... I enter in the place and it smell so good here, oh sorry , it's just me oh oh .....what's my name?"


And Murphy...this dear Murphy.....this fucking bastard....:
"I'm the tough one....I 'm a kick ass....I'm so cool....i look like the guy in the Prada commercial break...oh oh!!! Back off i'm here....you're the bitch, i'm your pimp.....i'm so ghetto with my cheap fucking irish snob accent....I'm so cool when i smoke as the same time that my borther.Respect!! I do not fear nothing cos i'm a fucking bad ass...............say what??"


Jesus....they are so pathetic.....U know...ok, i'm fucking tired ......i gotta go to my bed.........Damn these fucking pathetic irish .....

GOSH!! write more...lol...

one word.......... LOL

Hey, that the best fanfic that i never read..lol...
Maria Mc Mannus has alot of imagination, i like her fanfic...go, go , go MAria...keep it going....lol...

lololollllllllllll
this guy Mickey, he's a fucking psycho..lol....can't wait for the next part....(i hope she'll write another one).
good job Maria mc mannus.

hOLY SHIT....THAT REALLY FUNNY, I LIKE THIS STORY.....READ MORE...LOL.....

That a good shit!
I was laughing 4 1 hour....lol

lol....nicely done, compared 2 the others story that i read on the web, this one is the bomb....good job!!

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lol, i like this one:


"I'm cool, I'm tough....oh look at me!! What 's my name...Who is the master, oh oh....whitout me the world will be NOT THE SAME........I know everything....i'm the serious one...oh oh.....i'm look like the guy in the HUGO BOSS publicity......Back off, cos I'm here.....I'm so cool when I wear my glasses as the same time that my brother..... I enter in the place and it smell so good here, oh sorry , it's just me oh oh .....what's my name?"

so funny....
Cia

this fanfic is really funny, fucking good!!
'hope u'll write mo'

Not bad, not bad....

I like it, u should send it to troy duffy..lol....

that was not funny at all - you are retarded

Morgan McManus shut your fat ass, if u don't like it 2 bad , nobody asked u to read it, get lost, ok??
i though it 's funny and i hope he'll write more just 4 make u sick...lol...

Morgan McManus i think you're just jealous 'cos i read it, i found it funny...and i'm not retarded so...for me the person who don't like this fanfic, isn't retarded but a pathetic asshole...that just my point of view Morgan...

And Murphy...this dear Murphy.....this fucking bastard....:
"I'm the tough one....I 'm a kick ass....I'm so cool....i look like the guy in the Prada commercial break...oh oh!!! Back off i'm here....you're the bitch, i'm your pimp.....i'm so ghetto with my cheap fucking irish snob accent....I'm so cool when i smoke as the same time that my borther.Respect!! I do not fear nothing cos i'm a fucking bad ass...............say what??"


lol lol...Where did you take your idea?' hope you'll write more, it's genius...cia .
And Morgan sorry if you don't like this fanfic, honestly...nobody give a damn about what you think, plus, you the only retarded in this forum....
Love Ya!

Write more, that is sooooooooooooo funny. I love it!

So, some druggy bitch think they're ''cools''...well...I don't think so...they just look like some
"wanabe tough Leonardo Di Caprio and Orlando Bloom",
that all!! Tough ?Cool? My ass! They Suck! And if i was not a fucking chiken, trust me , i 'll go and tell them in their irish face what i think about them, oh yeah!! They just pisses me off with all their attitude, u know... and i'm not exagereted...u want some exemple? THey go to the church!! Tha Hell?people with tattoos and which drink as alcoholics want to make us believes that they pray?
I don't buy this shit!!!Show off!.....


lol, can't stop laughing ..lol...good job, i like it!

Ah please..it really is retarded.. Probably the person who wrote it who is writing all the "lol-comments" .. tsst.. Get a life

I didn't laugh, it wasn't funny at all. After the first butchered sentence i thought I'd give it a second chance. But then it just all fell apart. I could barely make out what was trying to be writen between all the bad grammar and bad punctuation. In my opinion, this was a true piece of shit.

This fanfic its just a little bit confusing sometimes though...but it's not so bad so... a few errors but, its still good.

that a real piece of shit...
but i like it !

I think this story had a really good gut to it, & a creative piece shouldn't be critized for bad grammar/spelling/etc, but then the style gives it character, Mickey doesn't sound like someone who'd use good grammar of well structured sentences, he seems more ike the person would would write like shit. I enjoyed reading this, & I too would like to see more.