From Here To Eternity

FROM HERE TO ETERNITY




Screenplay


by


Daniel Taradash




(Second Draft - 8/29/1952)




































USE FOR EDUCATIONAL PURPOSES ONLY
FADE IN:


EXT. QUADRANGLE - DAY
LONG SHOT


The quadrangle of Army buildings is quiet and deserted. A
broken-down taxi drives in at one corner and slowly makes its
way around the quadrangle. SUPERIMPOSED over shot is the
legend:


HAWAII, 1941


SIX MONTHS BEFORE


PEARL HARBOR
The taxi pulls up across the street from camera. A soldier
gets out, pulls two heavily loaded barracks bags after him.
He pays the driver, hoists the bags to his back, moves toward
camera. The taxi drives away slowly. The soldier walks toward
steps leading to a low building. He is PREWITT (called "PREW"
for short), 22 years old, well-built, good-looking. He wears
an enlisted man's uniform and on the sleeves are marks where
chevrons have been removed. He pauses, looks up over the
door. CAMERA PANS UP to sign which reads: ORDERLY ROOM - G
COMPANY, 219TH REGIMENT.


MEDIUM SHOT

A small thin soldier in an undershirt and fatigue pants backs
out of the screen door and into shot. He is wielding a frayed
broom. This is PRIVATE ANGELO MAGGIO. He is violent and funny
and sour and friendly. He sees Prewitt's legs but not his
face, speaks as he sweeps a cloud of dust off the porch.
MAGGID
Fine way to pass the time. Good for
the mind.


PREW


Hello, Maggio.
Maggio turns and stares at Prew, astonished.


MAGGIO
Prew...?


PREW


(nods)
I transferred out of Fort Shatter.


Maggio notices the marks on the sleeves where the stripes
have been removed. Prew follows his glance.


MAGGIO
You quit the Bugle Corps...?
2.
Prew nods. Maggio jerks his head toward the sign.
MAGGIO
To here...?
PREW
(shrugs)
That's what the orders say.
MAGGIO
You made a bad mistake. This outfit
they can give back to Custer.
Prew smiles slightly, starts toward door.
MAGGIO
The Captain ain't in yet.

Prew puts down his barracks bags.
PREY
I'll look around.
MAGGIO
(smiles for first time)
Maybe we borrow some money from a
twenty per cent man and take a real
trip to town some night.
PHEW
Maybe.
TRUCKING SHOT ALONG COMPANY STREET
Prew walks slowly down the raised porch alongside the street.
He takes the mouthpiece of a bugle from his pocket, jiggles
it idly, a habit of his. He comes to the Dayroom, glances
through the screen door, goes in.
INT. DAYROOM - DAY
MEDIUM SHOT
The Dayroom has a pool table, ping-pong table, a radio, etc.
Moth-eaten, upholstered chairs line both walls. The place is
empty as Prew enters. He looks around casually, sees the pool
table in an alcove. He moves over to it, puts the bugle
mouthpiece in his pocket, picks a cue from the rack on the
wall. He switches on the light, chalks the cue.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT
The triangle of balls is already racked on the table. Prew
addresses the cue ball, shoots and breaks the rack solidly.
He watches the balls hurry around the table.
3.
WARDEN'S VOICE (O. S.)
What’re you think you're doing!?
Why ain't you out in the field with
the Compny? What’s your name?
The voice is brawling, brash, vigorous. Prew turns slowly.
CAMERA ANGLE WIDENS to INCLUDE FIRST SERGEANT MILTON WARDEN,
almost at Prew's elbow. He is thirty-four, big and powerful,
has a neatly-trimmed moustache.
PREW
Prewitt. Transfer from Shafter.
WARDEN
Yeah. I heard about you.
PREW
I heard about you, too, Warden.
WARDEN
Well, put up that cue and come
along. This here's a rifle outfit,
Prewitt. You ain't suppose to enjoy
yourself before sundown. The Man's
very particlar about little things
like that.
Warden goes out of the Dayroom. Prew puts up the cue and
follows him.

EXT. COMPANY STREET
TRUCKING SHOT
as Prew and Warden walk along the porch, Warden a few paces
ahead. They go into the Orderly Room.
INT. ORDERLY ROOM - DAY
MEDIUM SHOT
as Prew and Warden enter. Maggio is sweeping the room.
MAZZIOLI, a bespectacled, intellectual-looking Private First
Class, is at the clerk's desk, opening it, taking out papers,
etc. Prew sits on a bench as Warden goes over to Mazzioli.
WARDEN
Mazzioli! Grant went to the
hospital yesterday. Did you make up
his sick record? Did you make a
note for the morning report?!
You're the Compny Clerk. The lousy
Sickbook is your job!
4.
MAZZIOLI
Those medics didn't get the
Sickbook back till late yesterday --
I'll tend to it right now --
WARDEN
Thanks. I already done it for you.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Maggio has swept his way over to Prew. He stops sweeping now,
stares at the other man as if still incredulous.
MAGGIO
But you the beat bugler they got
over at Shatter. You probly the
best on this whole Rock.
In b.g., Warden has turned from Mazzioli and is looking at
Prew. Prew looks back coolly, answers Maggio thoughtfully.
PREW
That's true.
Maggio wags his head, bends over to pick up wastepaper
basket.
MAGGIO
Well, friend, I feel for you. But
from my position I can't quite
reach you.
WARDEN
Ten-sh-HUT!
Prewitt, Mazzioli and Maggio spring to attention. The screen
door bangs and CAPTAIN DANA HOLMES enters shot. He wears
cavalry boots and spurs. He is about forty, unsure of
himself, therefore always too certain with his men. He nods
pleasantly.
HOLMES
At ease. Good morning, men.
Anything special this morning,
Sergeant Warden? I've only a few
minutes.
WARDEN
New man here, sir.
HOLMES
Oh, yes. Bring him in.
5.
Holmes goes into his office. Warden jerks his thumb toward
the door. Prewitt goes into the office. Warden follows him.

INT. CAPTAIN'S OFFICE - DAY
Holmes is seated at his desk as Prewitt and Warden enter. A
placard on it reads: CAPTAIN HOLMES. A smaller desk nearby
has a placard' reading: 1ST SERGEANT WARDEN. Warden seats
himself at this desk. On the walls are framed photographs of
prizefighters as well as one of a large golden trophy. On
Holmes' desk is a small framed photograph of a very
attractive blonde woman. Prewitt comes to attention in front
of Holmes' desk.
PREWITT
Sir, Private Robert E. Lee Prewitt
reporting to the Compny Commander
as ordered.
HOLMES
At ease.
(takes papers out of
drawer, glances through
them)
They sent your service record
over... Twenty-two years of age...
born in Kentucky... enlisted first
at Fort Myer, Virginia... Bugle
Corps... re-enlisted for overseas
duty... Fort Shafter... First
Bugler...
(benignly)
Prewitt, I always make it a policy
to talk to my new men. It's
important for an officer and his
men to understand each other. Now I
have a fine smooth-running outfit.
ANGLE FEATURING WARDEN
Holmes cannot see Warden who is grinning at Prewitt with
unholy glee.
HOLMES
Plenty of room for advancement for
a man who knows how to soldier. But
he's got to show me he's got it on
the ball. I don't know what you've
been used to in the Bugle Corps,
but in my outfit we run it by the
book. What kind of trouble were you
in over there?
6.
PREW
No trouble, sir.
HOLMES
What made you transfer out, then?
PREW
It's a personal matter, air.
HOLMES
Oh. I see...
He studies Prew for a moment, sees Warden on the edge of his
chair, watching hawk-like.
HOLMES
Something you wanted to ask,
Sergeant?

WARDEN
(explodes suddenly)
Who? Me? Whv, yes, air. You had
Corpral's stripes in the Bugle
Corps, Prewitt. You took a bust to
buck Private to transfer to an
Infantry Compny. Why? Because you
like to hike?
PREW
I dint have no trouble if that's
what you mean.
WARDED
(grins suddenly)
Or was it just because you couldn't
stand to bugle?
PREW
It was a personal matter.
WARDEN
That's up to the Compny Commander's
discretion to decide.
PREW
(looks straight at Warden)
All right. I was First Bugler at
Shafter for two years. The topkick
had a friend who transferred in
from the states. Next day he made
him First Bugler over me.
7.
WARDEN
And you asked out on account of
that!?
PREY
Maybe I just ain't sensible... But
that's the reason.
WARDEN
(snorts)
His feelings were hurt! Kids they
send us now!
Warden swings his chair around, absorbs himself in work at
his desk as if the Prew situation is too absurd to concern
himself with. Holmes speaks blandly, winningly.
HOLMES
I've got a mighty sour Company
Bugler here... but I suppose you
wouldn't want that job.
PREY
No, air.
HOLMES
(smiles)
Well, we'll get your stripes back
for you, maybe an extra one for
good measure. You know why you were
sent over here when you requested
transfer?
PREW
No, sir.
HOLDS
I pulled a few strings. I'm the
Regimental Boxing Coach, Prewitt. I
saw your fight with Connors in the
Bowl year before last. With any
luck you should have won it. I
thought for a while, in the second
round, you were going to knock him
out.
PREW
(tense)
Thank you, sir.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT HOLMES
8.
(MORE)
HOLMES
(bitterly)
My Regiment got beaten last year in
the finals, as you know.
(savage insistence)

But I mean to win this year. And I
will. All I've needed was a top
middleweight.
(waves at pictures)
Next year I'll hang your picture up
there with the others, my boy.
MEDIUM SHOT FEATURING PREW
PREW
I'm sorry, air. But I quit
fighting.
HOLMES.
Quit fighting? When? What for?
PREW
I just stopped, sir... After --
Maybe you heard about what
happened...
HOLMEB
You mean that fallow you hurt --
the one that went blind?
CLOSE SHOT PREW
Prew's lips are drawn tight. He nods almost imperceptibly.
MEDIUM SHOT
During this shot Maggio can be seen in b.g. through door to
Orderly Room. He pretends to be sweeping, but stops now and
then to listen.
HOLMES
Yes, it's too bad about that. I can
understand how you feel. But those
things happen in this game. A man
has got to accept that possibility
when he fights.
PREW
That's why I decided I would quit,
sir.
HOLMES
(less warmly)
But on the other hand, look at
9.
HOLMES(cont'd)
it this way. What if all fighters
felt like that?
PREW
They don't.
HOLMES
Would you have us disband our
fighting program because one man
got hurt?
PREW
No, sir. I dint say --
HOLMES
You might as well say stop war
because one man got killed. Our
fighting program is the best morale
builder we have off here away from
home.
PREW
I don't want it disbanded, sir.
(doggedly)
But I don't see why any man should
fight unless he wants to.
HOLMES
It looks to me like you're trying
to acquire a reputation as a lone
wolf, Prewitt. You should know that
in the Army it's not the individual
that counts. If a man wants to get
ahead he has certain
responsibilities to fulfill that go
beyond the regulations. It might
look as though I were a free agent,
but I'm not. Nobody is.

Holmes waits hopefully for a moment, then realizes Prew is
not going to respond further. He stands. Prew snaps to
attention.
HOLMES
Maybe you'll change your mind. In
the meantime just don't make any
mistakes in my outfit.
(to Warden)
I've got to go into town. Is there
anything else for me today,
Sergeant?
10.
(MORE)
WARDEN
(holds up papers)
Yea, sir! The Compny Pond Report's
got to be made out. It's due
tomorrow --
HOLMES
You make it out. Is that all?
WARDEN
(holds up more papers)
No, sir!
HOLMES
Well, whatever it is, you fix it.
If there's anything that has to go
in this afternoon, sign my name. I
won't be back.
He goes out, crossing Warden's desk and knocking a wire
basket filled with papers on the floor. In a moment, the
sound of the screen door slamming is heard. Warden picks up
the papers.
WARDEN
He'd strangle on his own spit if I
weren't here to swab out his throat
for him.
(to Prew)
Come on. I'll show you the Supply
Room.
Warden goes out to Orderly Room, Prew following.
INT. ORDERLY ROOM - DAY
MEDIUM SHOT
as Prew and Warden enter and walk through. Maggio bobs his
head approvingly at Prew.
EXT. COMPANY STREET - DAY
MEDIUM SHOT WARDEN AND PREW
as they come out of the Orderly Room. Prew hoists his
barracks bags to his shoulders, balancing them delicately.
CAMERA TRUCKS with him and Warden as they walk down the
porch.
WARDEN
(one of his unexpected
intense bursts)
Know what you did just now?
11.
WARDEN(cont'd)
(MORE)
When you turned down Dynanite
Holmes' boxing squad? You put your
head in a noose. Things are soft
for a boxer in his Compny.
Otherwise, you better know how to
soljer.
PHEW
I can soljer with any man.

WARDEN
This ain't the Bugle Corps -- this
is straight duty.
PREW
I'll take my chances.
A convertible, top down, drives by and pulls up outside the
Orderly Room. KAREN HOLMES, a tall, lean blonde woman, gets
out. Her skirt hikes up a little as she goes up the stairs to
the Orderly Room. Warden and Prew stop walking and watch her.
Karen stops, glances at Warden momentarily, then goes into
the Orderly Room.
WARDEN
Since when is this place gettin to
be the Royal Hawaiian?
PREW
Who's she?
WARDEN
His wife. Captain Holmes'.
They resume walking.
WARDEN
You'll fight, Prewitt. You'll fight
because Captain Holmes got a bee in
his hat he needs a winnin team to
make Mayor. And if you don't do it
for him you'll do it for me. I only
been in this outfit eight months
myself but I learned one thing. My
job is to keep him happy. The more
he's happy the less he bothers me
and the better I run his Compny. So
we know where we stand, don't we,
kid?
PREW
I know where I stand. I don't
believe that's the only way a man
can get along.
12.
PREW(cont'd)
A man's got to make up his own mind
and go his own way. It he don't,
he's nothin...
WARDEN
Maybe back in the days of the
pioneers a man could go his own
way. But not in our time, kid.
Today you got to play ball. You got
to divide it all by two.
They have reached a Dutch door, top half open. A sign over it
reads: SUPPLY ROOM.
MEDIUM SHOT SHOOTING INTO SUPPLY ROOM
SUPPLY SERGEANT LEVA is eating a candy bar with one hand and
leisurely typing up a form with the other. He is a foolishlooking
man, about thirty-five.
WARDEN
Lava! Can't I once walk by this
Supply Room and find you workin
with both hands!
LEVA

(comes up to door)
I can't do no better on what you
people pay me.
WARDEN
Draw some supplies for this man.
(to Prew)
That's G Compny barracks over
there. Get rid of your bags and
come back here, and Leva'll find
you a cart to lug your stuff over
in. Save you makin four five trips.
PREW
(surprised, pleased)
Okay.
WARDEN
I just hate to see energy wasted.
Any kind. Besides, you'll be needin
yours.
Prew walks off, toting the barracks bags. The bang of the
Orderly Room door is heard and Lava and Warden look in that
direction.
LONG SHOT KAREN HOLMES FROM WARDEN AND LEVA'S ANGLE
as she walks along porch toward them. She is at a
considerable distance. Karen is about thirty. She wears a
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sweater and skirt. She is aware the men are studying her.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT WARDEN AND LEVA
watching Karen. Leva leans over the counter.
LEVA
Her and them sweaters.
LONG SHOT KAREN FROM WARDEN AND LEVA'S POV
as she continues toward them. As much as a man can make out,
she is probably not wearing a brassiere. Warden's and Lava's
voices, loud at first, get softer and softer the nearer Karen
gets to camera. At end of the shot, as she is only a few
yards away, they are practically whispering.
WARDEN'S VOICE
Army women... They're cold,
they got no more warmth than a
diamond. There's no pleasure in
them...
LEVA'S VOICE
Yeah, but this one knows the
score... Like I been tellin you.
WARDEN'S VOICE
(sarcastic)
Is that right?
LEVA'S VOICE
Okay, not around here. But I was
back at Fort Bliss with Holmes.
When they was married only a year
or two. I heard plenty about the
lady then. Plenty.
WARDEN'S VOICE
You heard.
LEVA'S VOICE
Okay, never me. But a lot of them.
I know some of the Use she played
'around with, don't tell me.

WARDEN'S VOICE
I ain't tellin you. You're tellin
me.
Karen stops, a few paces from camera.
KAREN
Good morning, Sergeant.
MEDIUM SHOT
14.
Lava watches, listens avidly but discreetly in b.g. During
the dialogue, Karen seems irritated by Warden, who looks at
her coolly, appraisingly, physically.
KAREN
I'm looking for my husband.
WARDEN
Captain Holmes just went in town,
ma'am.
KAREN
Oh. Of course, He was to have left
some things for me.
(stumbles slightly)
That he was to have purchased. Do
you know anything about them?
WARDEN
No, ma'am, I don't. Is there
anythin I can do for you?
KAREN.
No, thanks, Sergeant.
She makes slight move to go, pauses.
KAREN
He's been telling me quite a bit
about you lately. My husband. He
says you're very efficient.
WARDEN
Yes, ma'am.
KAREN
What is it that makes you so
efficient, Sergeant?
WARDEN
I couldn't help it if I was born
smart, ma'am.
Karen laughs suddenly, loudly.
KAREN
I love that. Well, good-bye,
Sergeant.
Karen turns and walks back up the porch toward her car.
Warden and Leva watch her. When she is out of earshot Leva
speaks.
15.
(MORE)
LEVA
But man, she sure is one, ain't
she?
WARDEN
One what?
LEVA
One woman.
WARDEN
(unconvincingly)
I've seen better.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. KAREN'S BEDROOM - NIGHT
MEDIUM SHOT 22 Karen, in a negligee, is seated at a dressing
table, brushing her hair -- steadily, gracefully, enjoying
the sensual pleasure of it. Karen is a woman of moods and
tempers, spontaneous, quick to impulse. A car is heard
pulling up in the driveway, the motor stopping. Karen's brush
strokes become faster, rougher. The front door is heard
opening and Holmes' voice calling, "Karen." She does not
answer. Holmes enters. He seems to have had a few drinks.
Through the following, Karen continues brushing her hair.

HOLMES
I'm sorry I'm so late. And about
dinner, I --
KAREN
It doesn't matter.
HOLMES
-- I got tied up with General
Slater. Bumped into him at the
Officers' Club.
KAREN
Yes? What did the General have to
say?
HOLMES
Success, he said. Success in war,
success in peacetime... And not a
word about my promotion... There
are times I think the Old Man's
just waiting to ship me down...
(slumps into chair)
I've had a bad day all around...
16.
HOLMES(cont'd)
started right off this morning...
trouble with a new man...
KAREN
If you'd spend less time buttering
Generals and more time with your
Company, maybe you'd get that
promotion.
HOLDS
The Company takes care of itself.
Or my Topkick takes care of it.
KAREN
I went over there this morning
looking for you.
HOLMES
(flustered)
I had some business to attend to in
town. During the afternoon.
KAREN
(unemotionally)
From the way you look I gather your
business wasn't too successful.
HOLMES
Now what does that mean?
KAREN
Dana. Give me credit for a few
brains.
HOLMES
How many, times do I have to tell
you I haven't any other women
before you'll believe me?
CLOSE SHOT KAREN SHOOTING INTO MIRROR ON DRESSING TABLE
Karen laughs sharply, loudly, then stops suddenly as she
looks at herself in the mirror, sees the repugnance in her
face. She puts down the hairbrush, picks up a long comb.
HOLMES VOICE
If it were so, don't you think I'd
admit it? The way things are
between us now? What right have you
to always be accusing me?
KAREN
What right?
TWO SHOT
17.
They are both tense now. Holmes is out of the chair and
pacing. Karen combs her hair spasmodically.
HOLMES
That again. How long will it be, I
wonder, before I'm allowed to live
that down? After eight years, how
many times do I have to tell you It
Was An Accident?

KAREN
That makes it all right, I suppose!
HOLMES
I didn't say that. I know what it's
done to you, but --
KAREN
You know I hate to talk about it!
He moves over to her.
HOLM ES
How many times do I have to tell
you I'm sorry, about that? How many
times that I had no way of knowing -
He puts his hands on her shoulders. Karen shakes away, rises,
faces him.
KAREN
You had a way of knowing, Dana. I
want to go to bed. Please get out
of my bedroom.
Holmes looks at her sullenly, then exits to adjoining room,
closing the door behind him. There is a moment of silence,
then a sharp snap as Karen breaks the comb in two.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. DAYROOM - NIGHT
MEDIUM SHOT WARDEN
The room is fairly well filled with soldiers. The click of
pool balls is heard over shot. Warden is reading a
newspaper.. A column heading, conspicuous in shot, reads:
JAPS ADVANCE IN CHINA. Warden drops the paper on his lap,
looks toward pool table, squinting thoughtfully.
FULL SHOT AT POOL TABLE
Maggio, Prew and CHIEF CHOATE, a Corporal, are playing pool.
Choate is a full Choctaw Indian, a man of great bulk and
tolerance. He speaks in a tremendously deep bass voice. The
18.
table on one side is surrounded by the prizefighters of G
Company. They are IRE GALOVITCH, an ape-like, bent-kneed man
weighing about two twenty, with a widow's peak almost to his
eyebrows; BALDY DHOM, chunky and tough, his head as bald as
an orange; TURP THORNHILL, a stringy, chinless Mississipian;
HENDERSON, a tall, hard Texan; CHAMP WILSON, wiry and goodlooking.
They are all Sergeants except Wilson, who is a
Corporal. The men have been heckling Prew and are watching
with cold belligerence. Choate, bending over his cue, shoots
and misses.
CHOATE
I'm coldern a Idaho winter tonight.
Prew shoots, makes a brilliant shot.
MAGGIO
Man, what I would not give to have
this character in the corner
poolroom in my home town: I'd dress
him up on overhalls and a straw hat
and put a grass in his teeth, and I
would make a whole mint of ghelt
off him!

Choate laughs deeply. Prew sizes up a new shot.
WILSON
We'd of won last year if we had a
good middleweight. You box as good
as you used to over at Shatter
we're a cinch this year.
Prew doesn't respond. He bends over his cue again.
THORNHILL
You ain't forget the Division
champs get ten day furloughs, did
you, son? Ey?
GALOVITCH
You no talk now, Prewitt. But out
in field with us you sing different
song. An don't think you are tough
guy. Quickest way to stockade is
being tough
guy.
HENDERSON
You heard him. Better think it
over.
19.
MAGGIO
Lissen, it's his right not to fight
if he don't want. Without bein
kicked around. Now, we playin pool.
Whyn't you take off?
DHOM
You want a busted head, Maggio?
MAGGIO
(seriously)
No.
DHOM
Then keep your big nose out
altogether.
(turns back to Prew)
Trainin season starts next week --
Prew has been growing more and more agitated, as much by an
inner turmoil as by the men. His control snaps suddenly.
PREW
I told you I quit fightin! I'm
through! An that's all she wrote:
You guys want to put the screws on,
go ahead. I can take anything you
hand out!
DHOM
Okay, Prewitt. No halts barred.
The five men move off, file out of the Dayroom.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT WARDEN
His paper still on his lap. He has been watching. He wears a
faint smile of respect.
MEDIUM SHOT PHEW, MAGGIO, CHOATE
Prew chalks his cue, hands trembling, turns to Maggio.
PREW
Thanks.
MAGGIO
I just hate to see a good man get
it in the gut.
20.
CHOATE
You might as well get use to it,
kid. You probly be seein it often
before you die.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. SQUAD ROOM - NIGHT
MEDIUM SHOT PREW AND CHOATE
In b.g. a few of the men are moving to and from the latrine
but most of them are in their bunks. Over shot the sound of a
bugle blowing Tattoo is heard. Lights are being extinguished
in various parts of the room. Prew and Choate are lying on
adjoining bunks, smoking. Choate's voice is almost linked to
his last speech of preceding scene.

CHO ATE
... oh, sure, we got a few bad noncoms
and we got Dynamite Holmes for
a Captain. But I been around twenty
years in this Army. They even up.
In b. g. Warden and SERGEANT PETE (POP) KARELSEN come through
from the latrine. The latter is a grizzled, crumbled dogface,
about fifty.
CHOATE
Take A Compny. They got the best
Compny Commander I ever saw. But
their Topkick -- he ain't no
Warden.
Warden stops beside Prew and Karelsen moves on, going in to a
small room off the main squadroom. Warden's big, powerful
body is covered only by a towel around his loins. He smiles
at Prew.
WARDEN
Hello, kid. Everythin nice and
comfy?
PREW
Never better.
WARDEN
'at's the lull before the storm,
kid. Set yourself.
He moves off, goes into the room he shares with Karelsen.
21.
PREW
What's the deal with him, anyway? I
can't figure him.
The lights are almost all off and activity in the room has
ended.
CHOATE
The Warden? He's a wild man. He was
in the 15th when they seen their
action in the Settlement in
Shanghai. I heard about it down in
the Philippes even. He got himself
a DSC and a Purple Heart out of it
but you'd never know it if I dint
tell you. This next war comes,
Warden'll be right in there,
standin up on the skyline, trio to
get himself killed, but nothing
will ever touch him. He'll come
through maddern, wildern, craziern
ever. All I know is he's the best
soljer I ever saw...
The lights are all out now and the room is in darkness.
FADE OUT.
FADE IN:
EXT. ROAD - DAY
TRUCKING SHOT PLATOON OF MEN
carrying rifles, marching at attention. Prew is FEATURED in
shot; a light smile of pleasure as he moves along. Choate,
bringing up the rear, is singing the Regimental Marching Song
in a wonderful basso. Dhom marches on one side of the
platoon, Galovitch on the other. Dhom calls out the "huts."

CLOSE SHOT FEET OF MEN MARCHING
They are in perfect unison.
CLOSE TRUCKING SHOT PREW
DHOM'S VOICE
Prewitt! Get in step, Prewitt!
Prew frowns slightly. He hops once, changing stride, realizes
he is now out of step.
GALOVITCH’S VOICE
Prewitt! Dis a drill, not picnic!
Get in step!
22.
Prew hops again, changing step. He marches along. Dhom's
voice commands "Platoon -- Halt!" Prew and men around him
come to halt.
MEDIUM SHOT PLATOON
DHOM
Prewitt! Step out!
Prew steps to the front, still smiling faintly.
DHOM
You march like a drunk gooney bird!
Corpral Paluso! Take this man to
the track. Send him 'round seven
laps double-time rifle at high
port!
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. CINDER TRACK - DAY
Prew running around track, his rifle at high port. He wears a
slightly contemptuous smile. CORPORAL PALUSO sits on the
grass infield watching him.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. FIELD - DAY
MEDIUM SHOT THE PLATOON
kneeling over their rifles, laid out on shelter halves. Prew
is FEATURED in shot. His shirt is wet and he is sweating
heavily, as if he has just come from the run around the
track. Henderson stands in front of the group, instructing.
HENDERSON
-- rifle's your beat friend. In
case them weapons jams in combat
could mean life or death. You got
to know 'em inside out. Now I want
you to strip them weapons and put
it together again.
(holds up stop watch)
Go!
The men start taking their rifles apart as fast as they can.
Henderson walks around watching them.
MEDIUM SHOT PREW AND MAGGIO
stripping rifles. Prew is efficient and brilliantly fast,
Maggio fumbling and slow. Maggio keeps looking over at Prew,
admiring his speed.
23.
CLOSE SHOT PREW
as he strips the rifle. (This mechanical operation should be
interesting to audiences; a good man can field strip the
weapon in thirty or forty seconds.) Prew finishes the job and
CAMERA MOVES to CLOSE on shelter half where all the parts are
laid out.

HENDERSON'S VOICE
'at's fair time. Now lemma see you
put it together.
Prew's hands start to work over rifle parts, putting them
together.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. FIELD - DAY
CLOSE SHOT THE RIFLE
in Prew's hands, assembled, CAMERA PULLS BACK as Prew stands
up, holding the weapon. The rest of the men are still working
over their rifles, Maggio is staring up at Prew in awe.
Henderson grabs the rifle from Prew, turns his back to him,
pretending to squint along barrel.
CLOSE SHOT HENDERSON
looking along barrel. SHOT FEATURES his thumb as he flips the
rear sight to one side. Henderson turns around and ANGLE
WIDENS to include Prew. He throws the rifle at Prew, who
catches it, staggering back.
HENDERSON
Your rear sight's way off! You'd be
fifty feet off your target at three
hundred yards!
(to others, mockingly)
That's what comes when a soljer
don't know how to assemble a
rifle.
(to Prew)
You better get down to the track
and carry it around a few times.
Maybe that’ll teach you...
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. CINDER TRACK - DAY
MEDIUM SHOT PREW
running around track to sun, rifle held before him. The smile
is fainter but still there.
DISSOLVE TO:
24.
EXT. FIELD - DAY
GROUP SHOT BAYONET PRACTICE
The platoon is divided into teams of two. Thornhill is the
instructor. This is actual hand-to-hand training. Prew wields
his rifle, bayonet fixed, in expert thrusts. Maggio is
fighting in next lane. Thornhill walks behind Prew, trips him
quickly as he passes. Prew falls off balance. His opponent
smashes his rifle against Prew’s, knocks it to the ground.
Prew whirls on Thornhill in protest.
THORNHILL
Wide open, ey, Prewitt? Maybe seven
laps’ll teach you to watch
yourself...

Maggio, wielding his rifle madly, yells over.
MAGGIO
Hey, I saw that -- I saw what you
pulled --
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. CINDER TRACK - DAY
MEDIUM SHOT PREW AND MAGGIO
toiling around track together, holding rifles.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. COMPANY STREET - DAY
TRUCKING SHOT OUTSIDE SUPPLY ROOM
Maggio and Prew trudge wearily along the porch, rifles on
shoulders. Their sweaty uniforms are plastered to their
bodies.
MAGGIO
I use to think a shipping clerk was
a dog's life.
(sighs, shakes head)
What I would not give to be back in
Gimbel's basement!
As they come up to the Supply Room, Warden, neat and cool, is
leaning on the counter. He steps aside to let them pass,
beams at Prew.
WARDEN
Chow's almost over, men. Better
hurry up and wash. ‘less of course
you'd rather go in the way you are.
25.
(MORE)
Maggio gives Warden a dirty look. Prew's expression is
noncommittal. They carry their rifles into the Supply Room.
Leva comes up to the door as Warden turns to go back to the
Orderly Room. As he does, Karen's convertible comes down the
street. Warden stops, watches it.
LONG SHOT FROM WARDEN'S POV
as Karen drives by, turning her head slightly toward Warden.
There is the vaguest trace of i smile.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT FEATURING WARDEN
as he turns to watch the departing car.
LEVA
I'm tellin you, Top, she's trouble.
You better keep your mind off what
you're thinkin.
CAMERA MOVES TO CLOSE SHOT
of Warden, still looking after the car, thinking.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. CAPTAIN'S OFFICE - DAY
MEDIUM SHOT WARDEN AND HOLMES
It is a gloomy, rainy day and the lights are on in the
office. Warden is at his desk, working. Holmes is buckling on
his trench coat. He wears a happy smile.

HOLMES
I won't be back in time to take
Retreat.
(winks at Warden)
Or Reveille either, probably.
WARDEN
Yes, sir.
HOLMES
(strides back and forth;
jovially)
All work and no play, Sergeant. All
you do is sit around sweating over
this paper and that. There are
other things in this world beside
work.
Warden carries some official papers to Holmes' desk.
HOLMES
(bending over, tying
shoelace)
26.
HOLMES(cont'd)
You ought to get out more yourself,
Warden.
Warden is looking directly at the picture of Karen on Holmes'
desk.
WARDEN
I've been considering it.
He turns aside as Holmes straightens up.
HOLMES
Well, I'm going.
He claps Warden on the back fraternally.
HOLMES
I'm leaving it in your care,
Sergeant.
WARDEN
It'll be here when you get back.
Holmes goes out. Warden turns back to Holmes' desk. He is
still holding the papers in one hand. He looks at Karen's
picture, picks it up with his other hand, squints at it,
considering the chances very, very carefully.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. BACK PORCH OF HOLMES' HOUSE - DAY
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT WARDEN
standing on the open porch, in the rain. He wears a GI
raincoat. He is squinting at the door with the same
expression he used looking at Karen's picture. He takes a
deep breath as if he were going off a high diving board, then
knocks briskly. A shadow moves across the room behind the
curtains. Then Karen opens the door. She is in shorts and a
blouse.
KAREN
Oh. If it isn't Sergeant Warden.
You better step inside or you'll
get wet.
Warden opens the screen door and jumps in past the water
running off the eaves.
INT. SMALL PANTRY OFF KITCHEN - DAY
MEDIUM SHOT
as Warden jumps in. He takes off his rain hat.
27.
WARDEN
I am wet.
KAREN
If you're looking for my husband,
he isn't here.
WARDEN

(taking the long chance)
And if I'm not looking for him?
KAREN
(unsmiling)
He still isn't here. If that does
you any good.
WARDEN
(quickly)
Well, I'm looking for him. Do you
know where he is?
KAREN
I haven't the slightest idea.
Perhaps he's in town. I guess it
was ‘in town’ the way you put it,
wasn't it? Or perhaps he's at the
Club. Having a drink.
WARDEN
(fishes in his pocket,
brings out papers)
I got some papers it's important
for him to sign. Today.
KAREN
(turns)
I'll try phoning him at the Club
for you.
WARDEN
I never like to disturb a man
drinking.
KAREN
(turns back)
What is it you want, Sergeant?
WARDEN
I could use a drink myself right
now. Bad. Anyway, I got a faint
suspicion the Captain's ‘in town.’
Ain't you going to ask me in?
28.
Karen finally smiles, faintly. She goes into the kitchen,
leaving the door open. Warden follows her.
INT. KITCHEN HOLMES HOUSE - DAY
MEDIUM SHOT
The kitchen is small and undistinguished. Karen takes a
whisky bottle from a cabinet, pours a straight, stiff drink,
puts it on the sink. Warden puts the papers down and drinks.
Karen sits on a high kitchen stool.
KAREN
You’re taking an awful chance, you
know. My maid is liable to be home
any time.
WARDEN
No she won't. Thursday's her day
off.
He takes off his raincoat, drops it on a chair.
KAREN
You think of everything, don't you,
Sergeant?
WARDEN
I try. In my position you have to.
KAREN
(goes to sink, picks up
the papers)
Are these really important?
WARDEN
Yes. But not important they get
signed today. Tomorrow's okay.
Karen suddenly, deliberately, rips the papers in half. Then
she tears them into bits and throws them into the
wastebasket. Warden appreciates the gesture, relaxes for the
first time. He grins widely.

WARDEN
I got carbons of those back at the
office. So it won't be much work to
fix them up.
Warden's control has begun to affect Karen's now. She is
losing her poise.
29.
KAREN
That's what I like about you,
Sergeant. You have confidence. It's
also what I dislike about you.
WARDEN
It's not confidence. It's honesty.
KAREN
Honesty? How did you acquire such
an old-fashioned virtue?
WARDEN
I figgered out one day it was the
shortest distance between two
points.
KAREN
Well, he's clever as well as
virile.
WARDEN
No -- it's just that I hate to see
a beautiful woman goin all to
waste.
He moves close to Karen, is on the verge of embracing her.
Greatly tempted but greatly disturbed, she turns away. During
next she pours herself a drink, the bottle shaking in her
hand. Her tone is no longer brittle. It is bitter.
KAREN
Waste, did you say? Now that's a
subject I might tell you something
about. There's we. And then there's
waste. Positive and negative. The
negative is sometimes more
interesting... more evil. For
example -- what about the house
without a child? Tell me your
thoughts, Sergeant.
WARDEN
You're going to cry.
KAREN
Not if I can help it.
WARDEN
Please don't cry... I can't stand
to see somebody cry.
30.
Karen turns to face him as he picks up his raincoat, is about
to put it on.
KAREN
What are you doing?
WARDEN
I'm leaving. Isn't that what you
want?
KAREN
(slowly)
I don't know, Sergeant. To be
honest, I don't know.
They stare squarely at each other, both puzzled and a little
afraid of their emotions. This is something neither had
counted on.
WARDEN
I know a beach near Diamond Head.
Nobody ever goes there. The cars on
the highway pass above and they
never know it's there. You feel
like you used to feel when you were
a kid, hiding by yourself in a
cave, watching the others hunting
you.

Karen turns, goes to the sink, puts the whisky bottle back in
the cabinet.
KAREN
Maybe... why not?
WARDEN
How about Payday?
Karen is trying hard to regain her glassy composure. She is
unsmiling again.
KAREN
You don't have to spend money on
me, Sergeant.
WARDEN
I just like to have some on me when
I take out a woman. Can you get
away?
KAREN
Maybe.
31.
(MORE)
Warden grins as he puts on his raincoat. He goes to the door
to the pantry, pauses there.
WARDEN
I'll be in Kuhio Park. Say, nine
o'clock. Payday.
Karen leans back against the sink, watches him go out to the
pantry. A moment later the sound of the door is heard as he
leaves the house. She turns on the faucet, starts to rinse,
the glasses they have used. Suddenly she turns the faucet on
full force, watches it pound into the sink.
FADE OUT.
FADE IN:
EXT. QUADRANGLE - DAY
MEDIUM SHOT HOLMES GALOVITCH THORNHILL WILSON DHOM HENDERSON
The men are grouped around Holmes. He is pressing hard to
pretend equanimity. The Sergeants appear somewhat baffled but
determined.
HOLMES
-- this man Prewitt’s been here
over a month now. I expected you
mend have him around before this.
HENDERSON
We've been runnin him pretty hard.
But he don't faze.
HOLMES
Maybe he needs a good dose of The
Treatment.
The men react to the phrase; The Treatment is obviously
reserved for very special, intractable cases. They consider
it silently for a moment or two.
GALOVITCH
A double dose needs him to be
given.
THORNHILL
(nods)
The Treatment’ll bring that puppy
boy around...
HOLMES
You understand. I don't want
any rough stuff.
32.
HOLMES(cont'd)
But we all know good athletes make
good leaders. And good leaders --
The music of the forthcoming MONTAGE drowns Holmes' words as
he continues.
DISSOLVE TO:
EFFECT MONTAGE
The MONTAGE consists of a continuous stream of SUPERIMPOSURES
depicting Prew's growing humiliation and exhaustion at the
hands of the non-corns. Mingling with the background shots
are VARIOUS ANGLES of CLOSEUPS of Prew. As the speed of the
sequence increases, the stubborn smile on his face gives way
to hurt, bitterness, anger... Over shots we occasionally hear
stray shouts of the non-corns as they belabor Prew, but for
the most part these and other dialogue are obliterated by
MUSIC. The MONTAGE can be selected and created from the
following:
FLASHES ADDITIONAL ANGLES OF PRECEDING TRAINING SEQUENCES
FLASHES ADDITIONAL TRAINING SITUATIONS -- E.G. FIRING RANGE,
PATROL EXERCISES, GRENADE PRACTICE (IF NEEDED)
in all of which Prew excels.
FLASHES GALOVITCH WILSON DHOM THORNHILL HENDERSON
riding Prew, mocking him, grinning at him, thumbing him to
the track, etc. FEATURED is Galovitch, who takes particular
Joy in baiting Prew.
FLASHES PREW
running around track, staggering despite a tremendous effort
not to show his fatigue.
OBSTACLE COURSE
with the platoon going through, crouched low, live ammunition
spattering around them. Prew, nearest camera, is lower than
any man in the line. Over shot we hear a snatch of Wilson's
Voice yelling at Prew to get lower.
CLOSE FLASH WILSON AND PREW
Wilson bawling Prew out, thumbing him to one side of obstacle
course.
FLASHES PREW
chinning himself on bar setup near obstacle course; he is
near physical exhaustion.
OBSTACLE COURSE PREW
going through alone, on his belly in deep mud.

CLOSEUP PREW (CULMINATION OF SUPERIMPOSED CLOSEUPS AND END OF
MONTAGE)
33.
coming HEAD-ON into camera as he bellies through the mud of
the obstacle course. Snatch of mingled voices of non-coms
yelling "Keep it downs", “Get that nose in the mud!”, etc.
Prew is utterly spent. His face drops into the mud, which
splatters up, obscuring the screen.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. KITCHEN - DAY
CLOSE SHOT SWIRLING DISHWATER IN SINK
MEDIUM SHOT PREW
bent over the sink, scraping, washing and rinsing cooking
pans and mixing basins. He hangs the soap bucket on the hot
faucet and turns it on full force. As he does, PRIVATE
WILLARD, a fat, whining cook, dumps an additional huge pile
of pans before him. Prew looks at them ruefully. Willard says
something to him with a "hustle up" gesture. The faucet
drowns the words.
MEDIUM SHOT ANOTHER PART OF KITCHEN PREW AT SINK IN B.G.
Men are working in the steady, helpless motion of the KP.
Waiters swing in and out of the entrances leading to the mess
halls, carrying large trays.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT SERGEANT STARK
The Mesa Sergeant, a tall, gaunt man, surveys the scene
possessively. Maggio, Dining Room Orderly today, wearing a
soiled white coat, flashes by to the mess hall, almost
dropping his loaded tray in his haste.
MEDIUM SHOT PRIVATE TREADWELL
A slow, lazy, heavy man, peeling potatoes. There is a large
kettle filled with dirty water in front of him in which the
potatoes are floating. Treadwell stabs at one with a long
fork, misses it. He stabs again, almost in slow motion,
misses again. He sees Stark glowering over him.
TREADWELL
Ah+m suppose to be a automatic
rifle man, not a spud-cutter.
STARK
(disgustedly)
Rifle man, huh? All somebody’d have
to do would be holler war at you
and it'd be over the hill and far
away.
Stark walks off.
34.
(MORE)
TREADWELL
... they just give me my chance
they'll see...
He is surprised and pleased as he spears a potato this time.
He raises it triumphantly like a caught fish.

MEDIUM SHOT PREW AND WILLARD
The faucet is still on and we cannot hear what Willard says
as he dumps more pans before Prew. However, he is obviously
complaining that Prew is slow. Prew, sweating and angry,
barks something back at him and turns the faucet off.
PREW
No cook ever used that many panel
Not even for an officers, banquet,
ladies invited! Want me to grow
couple more arms?!
Stark, always alert to trouble, comes into shot. Willard sees
him and speaks with whining dignity, for Stark's benefit.
WILLARD
All I ask is that you keep the pans
washed up so they're clean when I
need them. In order that I am
allowed to cook the kind of food
required for men who work hard all
day and who need good nourishing
food to get their nourishment.
STARK
Hole up 'at noise. This man’s hot
as a forty-five shootin downhill.
WILLARD
(terribly injured)
How you think I can do my job if
the Mess Sergeant takes sides with
a goldbricking KP? What do you
think I am?
STARK
I think you're a fat cook who can't
cook.
As Willard retires, Maggio pours through from the mass hall.
Screaming joyously, he shoves two empty platters in front of
him.
MAGGIO
Comin through! Comin through! Me
and my table waiters!
35.
MAGGIO(cont'd)
We workin our tail off. They runnin
us to death. Hot stuff! Comin
through hot stuff one side!
Nobody pays any attention but Prew, who smiles at him. Maggio
winks back.
MAGGIO
Hello, Prew! Bettern being threwn
in jail, ain't it?
Maggio passes camera, leaving the shot and disclosing Warden,
who has entered from the mess hall in his wake. He carries a
dish of eggs and sausage and is leaning against a pastry
table. He is grinning lovingly toward Prew. He strolls over
to Prew. He eats through following. The smile never leaves
his face, broadens as the scene progresses.
WARDEN
You look awful tard, kid.
CLOSE SHOT PREW
working over the sink.
WARDEN'S VOICE
How do you like straight duty?.
Life in a rifle compny, eh?
Prew stops working, turns toward Warden.
PREW
What makes you think I mind it?
MEDIUM SHOT FEATURING KP'S, STARK, MAGGIO, WILLARD, TREADWELL
as something electric transmits itself and they all stop what
they are doing to look over toward Prew and Warden.
WARDEN
I didn't say you minded it, kid. I
just said you looked tard. Drawn to
a fine edge.
PREW
(smiles back)
I don't mind it, Top. It’s a great
life, this. I find a pearl, I'll
cut you in. Fifty-fifty, If you
hadn't put me here, I wouldn't have
had no chance to find it.
TWO SHOT WARDEN AND PREW
36.
WARDEN
Well, well, there's a man for you.
I'll see if I can fix you up with a
lot more since you like it so much.
How you like the garbage detail?

PREW
Thanks, Top, I've had it. You give
it to me Tuesday. Remember?
WARDEN
(nods, as if just
remembering)
Well, then, how 'bout street
cleaning detail?
PREW
That, too. Yesterday.
WARDEN
(nods)
You got a better memory than me.
Guess the best thing to do is leave
you right in the kitchen a while,
huh?
He pretends to turn away, then stops, turns back.
WARDEN
Course if you was an ath-a-leet you
wouldn't have to pull KP. Or any
fatigue duty for that matter...
PREW
(not smiling now)
If you think you can push me into
fightin, Warden, you're wrong. Not
you and Dynamite and The Treatment.
I'm twice the man you are. If you
dint have them stripes I'd take you
out on the green and beat you to a
pulp.
WARDEN
(smile growing bigger)
Don't let the stripes worry you,
kid. I can always take my shirt
off. Take it off right now.
PREW
You'd like that. You could get me a
year in the Stockade for that one,
couldn't you?
37.
CLOSE SHOT PREW'S HAND
closing around a heavy mug in the sink.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT PREW AND WARDEN
Warden looking at Prew's hand. Warden's grin broadens with
something more than sarcasm. He is 'impressed and pleased by
Prew's honest anger.
WARDEN
Don't throw it, Prewitt. It might
break on my head. And that would
cost you one thin dime next Payday.
Warden deliberately turns his back and walks off. Prew looks
after him. CAMERA MOVES IN to FEATURE his hand on the mug. He
grasps it tighter, then lets it fall back into the soapy
water,
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. QUADRANGLE - DAY
CLOSE SHOT PRIVATE FRIDAY CLARK
He is blowing the bugle, sounding Pay Call. The rays of a
blinding sun flash on its shiny surface.
INT. MESS HALL - DAY
MEDIUM SHOT
The bugle is heard over shot. A line of spruced-up men
stretches through the mess hall. A blanket is spread over a
table and behind it sits Holmes, flanked by Warden and
Mazzioli. In front of Holmes is a pile of greenbacks and a
cigar box filled with silver. He is paying out the man at the
head of the line.
HOLMES
-- and just see you don't drink all
this up in one place.
The man smiles, appreciating the whimsy, salutes, moves off.
WARDEN
Prewitt.
Prew, next in line, steps up to the table.
PREW
Robert E. Lee, RA 345071.
He is crisp, sharp, expressionless. He holds out his hands
for fingernail inspection.
38.
Holmes looks them over, then up at the perfect knot in his
tie. He stares at Prew as if trying to fathom him.
HOLMES
Have you given any thought to the
boxing team recently, Prewitt?
PREW
(tonelessly)
I feel the same way, sir.
Holmes’ hands clench. He seems about to fly into a rage when
he senses a motion at his side. He turns to see Warden
looking straight at him. Warden's face has the same
meaningfully expressionless look as Prew’s. Holmes wilts
before it, turns to Mazzioli.
HOLMES
What's this man's pay?
MAZZIOLI
(reading from Payroll)
Private Prewitt, thirty dollars
base pay. Deductions-laundry,
insurance, PX checks.
CAMERA MOVES IN to CLOSE SHOT of Holmes# hands laying money
out on blanket.
MAZZIOLI'S VOICE
Total due twelve dollars thirty
cents.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. RIVER STREET, HONOLULU - NIGHT
FULL SHOT
Payday night. A gay, noisy jamboree. Soldiers, mostly in
civilian clothes, and uniformed sailors swarm down the
street. Taxi drivers arguing with their fares as they pull up
at bars. Filipinos padding in twos and threes.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. NEW CONGRESS CLUB - NIGHT
MEDIUM SHOT AT ENTRANCE
Maggio and Prew, dressed in slacks and Aloha shirts, stand in
front of what looks like a renovated residence. They give
evidence of having already accomplished a little substantial
drinking. The sound of loud piano playing is heard from
within. A sign over the door reads: NEW CONGRESS CLUB - SOFT
DRINKS - DANCING - RECREATION - MEMBERS ONLY. The door opens
39.
and MRS. KIPFER stands at the threshold. She is a
sophisticated-looking woman with upswept hair, wears an
evening gown with a corsage of orchids. The piano music,
louder with the opening of the door, continues through all of
the following. The pianist is hammering out "I Don't Want To
Set The World On Fire" (or a similar hit of 1941).

MAGGIO
Greetings, Mrs. Kipfer.
MRS. KIPPER
(cordially)
Why, it's Angelo Maggio.
He barges past her through the door. Mrs. Kipfer frowns and
follows him. Prew shrugs and goes in after her.
INT. VESTIBULE NEW CONGRESS CLUB - NIGHT
MEDIUM SHOT
as Prew enters behind Mrs. Kipfer. The vestibule has an old
South feeling of mustiness and respectability. Maggio is
handing some bills to ANNETTE, a young, brash-looking girl,
who sits behind a reception desk.
MAGGIO
Okay... so there y'are. Dues all
paid up. Who ya got playin the
piana -- a hippo?
MRS. KIPPER
Angelo, I don’t believe I've met
your friend. And you know how I
hate to find you boys in this
condition...
MAGGIO
There. You see. Any time women see
a soldier, think he's drunk. Why?
You know why?
PREW
Because he is.
MRS. KIPPER
Heavy drinking simply doesn't mix
with the entertainment business.
Every respectable place must
consider its future.
PREW
Mrs. Kipfer, ma'am, I give you my
solemn word your future will be
safe with us.
40.
Maggio nods vigorously in agreement, then pushes through the
heavy curtains which separate the vestibule from the room
beyond. Mrs. Kipfer looks after him a little unhappily.
MRS. KIPPER
Angelo is one of my favorites.
Annette, dear, take care of this
gentleman, will you, please?
Mrs. Kipfer exits through the curtains. Annette takes a card
from file, picks up pen.
ANNETTE
It'll be eight bucks, Babyface.
Four for initiation fee, four for
April dues.
PREW
Say, what do I get for it?
ANNETTE
(rattling it off)
Members are entitled to all
privileges of the club which
includes dancing, snack bar, soft
drink bar, and gentlemanly
relaxation with the opposite gender
so long as they are gentlemen and
no hard liquor is permitted.
(takes a breath)
Got it?

Prew grins, digs in his pocket for money.
PREW
I got it.
INT. NEW CONGRESS CLUB - LARGE CLUB ROOM - NIGHT
FULL SHOT
Several rooms branch off from this main one. There are about
a dozen soldiers in civilian clothes -- and about a dozen
hostesses. Several couples are dancing. The man at the piano
is banging away, his music clashing cacophonically with a
jukebox record from an adjoining room. CAMERA PANS as Mrs.
Kipfer moves to and fro encouraging the men to enjoy
themselves. The New Congress is a sort of primitive U.S.O., a
place of well-worn merriment. It is not a house of
prostitution but the girls look available for goosing... all
but one we see at the end of the PAN. She sits alone on a
couch. This is LORENE. There is an innocent, child-like look
about her. Her hair is done demurely in a circular roll low
on her neck. She is about twenty-four. She is reading a
41.
magazine, untouched by the din around her.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT SERGEANT "FATSO" JUDSON
pounding the piano as if he is trying to knock the keys out.
He has an enormous head and a hogshead chest. He resembles
Porky Pig. His dead eyes look like two beads of caviar spaced
far apart on a great white plate.
MEDIUM SHOT NEAR CURTAINS TO VESTIBULE
Maggio is attempting some serious dancing with SANDRA, a very
tall girl. Fatso's furious tempo and tune keep drowning the
langorous tango coming from the jukebox. Maggio keeps
switching his style as he tries to get out of the range of
the piano but cannot. He is very annoyed. He and Sandra dance
out of shot, as Prew and Annette enter from the vestibule.
CAMERA PANS them to a trio of girls on a couch.
ANNETTE
... Girls, here’s some new poison.
This is Billy and Jean and Nancy.
The girls smile, ad-lib hellos. Prew is looking over the
girls' heads at someone in rear of room out of shot.

MEDIUM SHOT LORENE FROM PREW'S POV
As if she senses someone is staring at her, she looks up from
the magazine, smiles serenely across the room.
MEDIUM SHOT FEATURING PREW AND ANNETTE
as she reacts sourly to Prew's reaction to Lorene. He seems
transfixed.
ANNETTE
Don't tell me the Princess is your
style.
Annette takes his arm, moves him toward two quite goodlooking
girls talking to a soldier.
ANNETTE
Meet Suzanne and Roxanne.
The girls greet him heartily but Prew is looking back over
his shoulder at Lorene. Annette plucks his sleeve with
haughty disdain.
ANNETTE
Much as I adore your company, you
must allow me to tear myself away.
I see a few friends at the door.
(snaps)
Also I can see I will be of no use
to you much.
42.
She walks off. The other girls resume talking to the soldier.
Prew continues to gaze across the room.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT LORENE
smiling back. Her head tilts up slowly as if someone is
coming toward her. Prew comes into shot and stands before
her, tongue-tied. She pats the couch. Her voice is lowpitched,
poised.
LORENE
Would you like to sit down?
PREW
(sitting)
Oh... sure.
LORENE
I'm Lorene.
PREW
(enchanted by the name)
Lorene...
LORENE
I haven't seen you in here before.
Prew gestures with the membership card.
PREW
I dint know about this place till
now. A friend of mine brought me.
We're stationed at Schofield.
LORENE
Oh. Somehow I didn't think you were
a soldier.
PREW
(bridles a bit)
Well, I am. And I'm in for the
whole ride. I'm a thirty-year man.
LORENE
I suppose it's different when a
fellow is going to make a career of
it.
PREW
There ain't anythin wrong with a
soljer that ain't wrong with
everyone else.

Lorene smiles her fatal smile at Prew's seriousness.
43.
LORENE
I like you just the same. I liked
you the minute I saw Annette
bringing you in.
PREW
(melts)
Me, too. I mean when I came in. I
saw you over here --
There is a commotion across the room. A group of man and
girls are surrounding the piano. Fatso has stopped playing
and a shouting argument is going on between him and Maggio.
Prew looks over, concerned.
FATSO'S VOICE
I'll play loud as I want, ya little
Wop!
A babble of voices drowns out Maggio's reply.
PREW
Friend of mine.
(rises)
You wait right here for me, will
ya?
LORENE
(smiles sweetly)
Surely.
MEDIUM SHOT AT PIANO
where two men are holding Fatso and three girls are
restraining Maggio. The others are amused by the quarrel, but
Fatso and Maggio are deadly serious.
MAGGIO
Mess with me, Fatstuff, I'll pull
you apart!
FATSO
You're the kind of character I eat
for breakfast, ya little --
Maggio breaks away from the girls and rushes toward Patso but
Prew, stepping through the group, grabs him. Mrs. Kipfer
bustles into the melee.
MRS. KIPFER
Now, you gentlemen know I will not
have any of this sort of thing.
44.
MAGGIO
Shut up, you Wop, he says to me!
FATSO
Little Mussolini here tryin to tell
me what way to play the piano.
MAGGIO
Yeah, my ear drums fit to bust
already with that noise!
MRS. KIPFER
You man can simply leave if you're
not going to behave yourselves.
PREW
Come on, Angelo, come on --
MAGGIO
-- Ony my friends can call me Wop --
MEDIUM SHOT AT SIDE OF ROOM
where Prew hauls Maggio away from the piano.
SOLDIER
(has been watching)

You know who that guy is, buddy?
MAGGIO
Sure, I know who he is. Whadda I
care?
PREW
Who is he?
SOLDIER
Fatso Judson. Sergeant of the Guard
at the Post Stockade.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT FATSO JUDSON
settling down at the piano again. He glances over in
direction of Maggio with a mean smile. Then he starts to
hammer the keys viciously.
MEDIUM SHOT MAGGIO PEW SOLDIER
as the music starts, Maggio stiffens, turns as if to go back.
Prew holds tight, to his arm.
SOLDIER
-- I’m tellin you, leave him be.
Nets danger. I seen him nearly
murder a guy once. He likes it.
45.
Sandra comes over, disengages Prew's arm from Maggio's, puts
her own around him.
SANDRA
All right, bully boy, now you won
the war, let's dance.
MAGGIO
(beginning to quiet down)
First I got to calm my nerves. Come
on with me to a phone booth or some
thin.
(slaps himself on belly)
Where I will unveil this fifth of
whisky I got under this loose
flowing sports shirt.
He and Sandra start off toward an adjoining room. Prew
smiles, turns back toward Lorene. The smile fades.
MEDIUM SHOT FROM PREW’S POV
Lorene is looking at another soldier, on the couch beside
her, with her rapt, innocent expression.
TRACKING SHOT PREW
as he crosses room to Lorene, hurt and disappointed. CAMERA
HOLDS on MEDIUM SHOT as he comes up to her and the soldier, a
talkative man named BILL.
BILL
-- you go along as fast as forty
miles per through that surf and
your balance has got to be letter
perfect.
PREW
Hey, I thought you were gonna wait.
LORENE
(looks up, smiles)
Bill here was telling me about
surfboarding.
BILL
Hello, friend.
LORENE
(pats couch)
Sit down and just listen. He
describes it thrillingly.

Prew sits down, disgruntled. Bill notes his expression.
46.
BILL
You know anything about
surfboarding?
PREW
No. Nothing. Not a thing.
BILL
You must be stationed inland then.
I'm at DeRussey so I get lots of
chances.
PREW
Yeah? But then we got mountains.
You know anything about mountain
climbing?
BILL
A little bit. Are you a mountain
climber?
PREW
No. You know anything about flying
an airplane?
Lorene is frowning now.
BILL
I've had a few lessons.
PREW
Well, I can't fly either. What
do you know about deep sea diving?
LORENE
Do you want to move into another
room, Bill?
BILL
Sure. The air in here seems to have
gotten very smelly, hasn't it?
PREW
Yeah, I noticed that, too --
BILL
Listen, fellow --
LORENE
Shall we go, then?
47.
She and Bill rise. She smiles tremulously at him as she takes
his arm and they start off. She throws a severe glance over
her shoulder at Prew.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT PREW
He settles lower in the couch, the picture of frustration and
hopelessness. He pulls a cigarette from his pocket and lights
it.
EXT. KUHIO PARK - NIGHT
MEDIUM SHOT PARK BENCH
Karen sits on the bench, her ankles crosses primly, very ill
at ease. There is Payday activity here also; amorous
strolling couples; men in ones and twos looking for pickups.
Several unattached men pass Karen, ogle her. She is about to
get up and leave when Warden comes into shot, stands over
her. His civilian suit is neat and well-cut. Both are
strained, awkward, antagonistic. Now that the step has been
taken they are not at all sure it was a clever one.
KAREN
Why, hello. I didn't think you were
coming.
WARDEN
Why not? I'm not late.
KAREN
No, I guess you're not. But then I
came a little early. I must have
been overanxious. You weren't
overanxious though, were you? You
got here right on the dot.
WARDEN
Maybe I'd of been early too only I
stopped to get a drink.

KAREN
You certainly chose a savory spot
for our meeting.
WARDEN
Would you rather it'd been the
cocktail lounge of the Royal?
KAREN
No, but I've had five chances to be
picked up in the last few minutes.
48.
WARDEN
(sits beside her on the
bench)
That's par for the course around
here.
KAREN
Well, I don't care for it. I never
went in much for back-alley loving.
WARDEN
Didn’t you?
KAREN
You probably think I'm a tramp,
don't you?
WARDEN
What makes you think I'd think
that?
KAREN
Don't try to be gallant, Sergeant.
If you think this is a mistake,
come right out and say so.
WARDEN
(outrage)
Listen, what started all this,
anyway? Why'm I shakin inside like
a school kid out with teacher!
Where'd I come up with a yen for of
all things the Compny Commander's
wife! And her actin like Lady
Astor's horse all because I only
got here on time!
Warden's burst shatters the tension. Karen breaks into
laughter. After a moment, Warden joins in.
KAREN
On the other hand, I've got a
bathing suit under my dress.
WARDEN
Funny. I got one in a U-Drive-It
parked around the corner.
He takes her hand. They rise and walk away, backs to camera.
They merge with the other couples in the little park.
INT. LARGE CLUB ROOM - NEW CONGRESS - NIGHT
49.
MEDIUM SHOT COUCH
Fatso's piano music o.s. Prew is slumped on the couch. He
stubs out the cigarette, which is almost burnt down. He sees
someone coming toward him, slowly raises his eyes. Lorene
comes into shot, looks down at him.
PREW
How's the surfboard rider?
LORENE
That was a terrible way to have
acted. What you did.
PREW
I was jealous.
LORENE
(laughs)
You're a funny one.
PREW
What do you dames want? To take
the heart out of a man and tie it
up in barbed wire?
LORENE
(angry because she really
likes Prew)

Now, look here, what do you think
Mrs. Kipfer pays us for? We're
hired to be nice to all the boys.
They're all alike. Is it so
important?
PREW
(stands; urgently)
Yes, it's important. Maybe we seem
all alike but none of us is ever
all alike.
(pause)
All right, I'm sorry about before.
LORENE
(touched by his outburst)
That piano is about to drive me out
of my mind. Let's go up to Mrs.
Kipfer's suite and sit there. She
lets us use it sometimes... for
somebody special.
PREW
Are you mad?
50.
LORENE
No, I'm not mad.
PREW
Because if you're still mad I'd
just rather we called the whole
thing off.
LORENE
(takes his arm)
You certainly are a funny one.
They walk away from camera, merging with the others in-the
room.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. OCEAN AND BEACH - NIGHT
FULL SHOT WAVE
sweeping over camera, spray flying.
MEDIUM SHOT ON BEACH
A tiny beach set among rocks. The pale sand glows in the
moonlight. Warden, in a bathing suit, is lighting a fire
about ten yards from the water's edge. Karen is just stepping
out of her dress; her bathing suit is underneath. A couple of
GI blankets near the fire. Her teeth are beginning to chatter
in the chill of the night air; she raises her arms to the sky
longingly, happily.
KAREN
I hope the ocean's ice cold. I hope
I freeze in a solid chunk.
WARDEN
(sudden, intense laugh)
Just so long's you melt afterwards.
KAREN
I love the way you laugh.
He stands, moves to her. She laughs, turns and runs into the
water. He runs after her.
FULL SHOT WAVE
near shore, as Karen dives into it. Warden follows her. The
wave washes over them.
INT. NEW CONGRESS CLUB - MRS. KIPFER'S LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
51.
MEDIUM SHOT DIVAN
CAMERA ANGLED so we see only back of the divan. We hear soft
chuckles from Prew and Lorene o.s., then silence for several
moments. CAMERA MOVES as we hear a few more low, intimate
laughs, then Prew and Lorene are disclosed on the couch,
their heads close together as if they have just kissed
pleasantly but not passionately. Mrs. Kipfer's living room is
on the order of the vestibule; it, too, has a faded lavender
feeling. A door leading to another room is half open in b.g.
A door leading to a hall is closed. Prew's arm is around
Lorene's shoulder; he is very relaxed, regards her with
something like wonder. Lorene is mellower, too, making no
effort now to be "the Princess." She speaks as if resuming a
conversation.

LORENE
... I enlisted, too. I came out
here on my own. To get away from my
home town. In Oregon.
PREW
How come?
LORENE
I had a boy friend. I was a
waitress. He was from the richest
family in town. He just married the
girl suitable for his position.
After three years of going around
with me.
(pause)
It's a pretty story, isn't it?
Maybe they could make a movie of
it.
PREW
They did. Ten thousand of them.
ANOTHER ANGLE
Lorene smiles.
LORENE
So I left and went to Seattle, as a
waitress. And I met a girl just
back from Hawaii. She said she'd
made a lot of money working for
Mrs. Kipfer. I caught the first
boat. I've been here a year and two
months.
PREW
You like it much?
52.
LORENE
Oh, I don't like it. But I don't
mind it. Anyway, I won't be here
forever.
PREW
No. Sure not. I mean, why should
you?
LORENE
I have it all figured out. In
another year I'll be back home,
with a pile of bills big enough to
choke a steer. And then I will be
all set for life --
There is a sound at the door and they turn towards it.
MEDIUM SHOT DOOR TO HALL
as it opens slowly and a disembodied arm pokes through, its
hand gripping the neck of a whisky bottle. After a moment,
Maggio's head follows the arm through the door. He is
grinning like an amateur conspirator.
MAGGIO
I dint hear no sounds of combat. So
I figgered maybe you'd like a
drink.
THREE SHOT
as Maggio comes into the room.
MAGGIO
Or otherwise old Sandra would of
drank it all by herself. She's a
fine girl. But she drinks like a
fish.
There are glasses on a cupboard near the divan. Maggio sets
three of them up, starts to pour whisky into them.
LORENE
No, thanks. I never drink much.

Maggio stops short of the third glass. He takes a big gulp
from the first.
LORENE
I think it' a a weakness.
MAGGIO
(another gulp)
I grant you that.
53.
LORENE
And I don't like weakness.
(to Prew) )
Do you?
PREW
No. I don't like weakness.
(rises, takes a drink)
But I like to drink.
He comes back to the divan.
LORENE
With you it's not a weakness. With
you it's more like a virtue.
MAGGIO
That sounds like a very profound
remark. Maybe that's why I don't
get it.
LORENE
(snuggles to Prew)
Well, it's so.
MAGGIO
Hey! What you gonna do, marry this
guy? Way you grinnin at him you
look like his wife!
PREW
Get outa here!
MAGGIO
(picks up bottle)
Okay. Back to old long-legged
Sandra. I love 'em tall. Acres and
acres.
He goes out, closing door behind him. Suddenly the door opens
again and Maggio pops back in. He puts the whisky bottle on a
table next to the door.
MAGGIO
Enjoy yourself, pizon. You need it
more than me. You be back with The
Treatment tomorrow.
He pops out again, the door closing after him. Prew's gaiety
dims with the reference to The Treatment. Lorene sees this.
Prew rises, goes to whisky bottle.
54.
(MORE)
PREW
That was nice before. The way you
snuggled up. In front of him.
LORENE
What's he mean, The Treatment?
Prew doesn't answer. He pours a drink, gulps it.
LORENE
What did he mean?
PREW
Some of the guys puttin me over the
jumps because I won't fight.
LORENE
Fight?
PREW
On the boxing team. I don't want to
fight! I don't want to talk about
it! I don't want to think about it.
And they make me think about it.
Every day.
He drops down on the divan beside her.
PREW
It's a personal thing...
His dread of telling the tale crumbles before his
overwhelming need to tell it, to have someone understand.

PREW
Over at Port Shafter... I used to
fight... Middleweight. I was pretty
good. I used to work out with Dixie
Wells. He was a light-heavy, but he
was fast... And good. He loved
boxing. He was gonna come out of
the Army and go right into the
upper brackets... People on the
Outside had their eye on him.
(rises, paces)
Dixie didn't want, to use the six
ounce gloves this time. And we
neither of us wore headgear,
anyway. I was set flat on my feet
when I caught Dixie wide with this
no more than ordinary solid cross.
Dixie just happened to be standing
solid, too.
55.
PREW(cont'd)
(sits on chair)
From the way he fell I knew. Dead
weight, square on his face. He dint
roll over. He was in a coma a week.
Then he finally came out of it. The
only thing was that he was blind...
(rises, paces)
I went up to the hospital to see
him. Twice. Then I couldn't go
back. We got to talking about
fighting the second time. And Dixie
cried... Seein tears comin out of
those eyes that couldn't see...
There are tears on Prew's face. He turns away from Lorene.
ANOTHER ANGLE SHOOTING FROM BEHIND PREW
Lorene, very moved, goes to him, stands behind him, puts her
hand on his shoulder. Prew does not turn but his hand grasps
hers. CAMERA MOVES TO CLOSE SHOT of the hands.
EXT. OCEAN AND BEACH - NIGHT
MEDIUM SHOT NEAR SHORE
A wave sweeps by camera, Karen and Warden riding it into
shore. CAMERA PANS with them as they walk out of the water,
hand in hand. They stop at edge, as if by a mutual impulse.
He swings her to him and kisses her.
CLOSEUP
as they kiss. The embrace is impassioned. When their lips
separate, their arms remain around each other, holding tight
to something they find is more than sex alone.

EXTREME CLOSEUP
as Karen and Warden kiss again, a tenderness in him not seen
before and which he normally takes great pains to hide.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT
as their lips separate again.
KAREN
Nobody ever kissed me that way...
not really...
They are both disquieted by the quality of their reactions to
the kisses. The jump to banter is a quick defense.
WARDEN
Nobody?
CAMERA MOVES WITH them as they walk to the fire. Karen smiles
at him.
56.
KAREN
No. Nobody.
WARDEN
Not even one? Out of all the many
men you've been kissed by?
KAREN
Well, that will take some figuring.
How many men do you think there’ve
been?
CAMERA HOLDS as they sit, beside the fire. Karen wraps one of
the blankets around her.
WARDEN
I wouldn't know. Can't you even
make me a rough estimate?
KAREN
Not without an adding machine. Do
you have your adding machine with
you?
WARDEN
No, I forgot to bring it.
KAREN
Then I guess you won't find out,
will you?
WARDEN
Maybe I already know.
The defense has given way and there is no mirth in the
questions and answers now.
KAREN
What's the matter? What are you
hinting at?
WARDEN
Why? Is there something to hint at?
KAREN
I don't know. Maybe a lot. Or maybe
you just think there's a lot.
WARDEN
Maybe I do. Maybe there's been a
long line of beach parties --
57.
KAREN
You must be crazy -- !
WARDEN
Am I? Listen, baby, maybe not here.
But what about when you and Holmes
were at Fort Bliss?
Karen flings off the blankets, snatches her dress, stands up,
raging. She speaks as she pulls the dress over her head,
wriggles into it.
KAREN
I had to go and forget you were a
man -- with the same rotten filthy
mind the rest of them have. For a
minute I had to convince myself you
were different --

WARDEN
Only it's true, ain't it?
KAREN
Yes, it's true! A part of it, some
small part of whatever sewage
you've been listening to. Some day
perhaps you'll get all the story.
WARDEN
(yaps up)
All what story?
KAREN
You're getting to sound so much
like a typical male. So you just
sweat it out like a typical male.
She starts toward the rocks at the end of the beach, walking
fast, then almost running. Warden runs after her.
MEDIUM SHOT BEACH NEAR PATH UP ROCKS
as Warden catches up with Karen. He grasps her arm roughly,
hauls her down onto the sand. He stares at her bitterly,
waiting f or her to speak.
KAREN
All right. I've never told it to
anyone before. But I think now is
the time. I'll tell you the whole
bloody messy thing. You can take it
back to the barracks with you.
58.
She speaks rapidly, pouring it out in bursts. For much of the
story her face is in shadow, as if a cloud is passing across
the moon.
KAREN
I'd been married to Captain Dana E.
Holmes two years. Only he was a
First Lieutenant then. Back at Fort
Bliss. We lived right on a little
lake where we could fish and swim
and be alone, our 'dream
cottage'... I'm sure you must be
able to picture it. It was off on a
back road, four miles from the
highway. Two miles from a neighbor
and a telephone....
(pauses, then rushes on)
I hadn't been married long when
I knew my husband was stepping
out on me. But -- you get used
to that. Your mother tells you
that it's life, that i t happens
to a lot of women. Of course,
she doesn't tell you until after
it happens.
ANOTHER ANGLE FEATURING WARDEN
reacting with fury toward Holmes, compassion for Karen.
KAREN
Then, by that time, you're
pregnant. And at least you've
something else to hope for. I think
I was almost happy that night the
pains began. Even though they were
weeks too early, a whole month too
early. I remember Dana was putting
on that dapper silk gabardine
uniform he used to wear. He was
going to an officer's 'seminar.' He
was kidding me about false labor. I
didn't think it was humorous. I
told him to get home early, to
bring the doctor with him. He
smiled tenderly and told me about
the psychic reactions of women to
pregnancy. But never fear, he'd be
back early. And maybe he would
have... if the 'seminar' hadn't
been with the hat-check girl in one
of the night clubs.

59.
WARDEN
Listen.
TWO SHOT
KAREN
He was only a little drunk when he
came in... at five a.m. He looked
alarmed when he saw me. I guess it
was because of my screams. I was
lying there on the floor, you see --
No, don't say anything. I'm not
finished yet. Of course, the baby
was dead. It was a boy. But they
worked over me at the hospital and
fixed me up fine. They even took my
appendix out, too. They threw that
in free. It was all fine.
WARDEN
Listen. Listen. Please.
KAREN
And, of course, one more thing no
more children. Do you know what
that means? You're not a woman.
You're not anything. You're a
gutted shell... Sure, I went out
with some of the men after that. A
few months of it. I'd been made
dirty and I wanted to be clean. You
can see that, can't you?... Anyway,
I got my revenge on Dana. I kept on
living with him.
WARDEN
The hateful, miserable --
KAREN
You hunt so hungrily for love...
love, if you can find it, you
think, might give things meaning
again.
WARDEN
Listens Listen to me --
KAREN
All right. I'm listening.
Warden shakes his head, inarticulate with his rage and love.
Karen moves closer to him.
60.
KAREN
I know. Until I met you I didn't
think it was possible, either.
FADE OUT.
FADE IN:
INT. DAYROOM - NIGHT
PAN SHOT AROUND ROOM
Over shot soft strumming guitars and two voices singing a
quiet blues. There are scattered groups,about fifteen men in
all -- playing pool, ping-pong, reading, writing letters,
talking. CAMERA REACHES PRIVATE SAL ANDERSON and Friday
Clark, playing the guitars and singing. Clark plays only
passably, but Anderson is highly accomplished, effortlessly
sounding off chord progressions in diminished minors. Friday,
the bugler, is about twenty-four, with shy, trusting eyes.
Anderson is the same age, also quiet, non-aggressive. CAMERA
CONTINUES PANNING, PASSES a soldier reading a newspaper who
shakes his head and mutters, "... ain't it terrible about Lou
Gehrig dyin...", then MOVES IN to HOLD on a group at a window
seat, bulling. Prew is stretched out wearily, looks as if
he's been through another recent dose of The Treatment.
Maggio perches in the frame of the window like an aggressive
robin. Treadwell slouches at the end of the seat. Pete
Karelsen is in a chair nearby, reading a magazine.

TREADWELL
... Ah'm in the Army because Ah can
live better on the Inside than on
the Outside.
PREW
It ain't the reason I'm in.
MAGGIO
Now he's gonna give us that snow
about bein a Thirty-Year Man again.
PREW
That's right. Look at Karelsen
there. Only seven years more for
rockin chair money.
Karelsen hears his name, looks over.
MEDIUM SHOT KARELSEN
CAMERA AT ANGLE so we see he's reading a full-page
advertisement featuring a girl in a revealing negligee. He is
feeling sorry for him;elf.
61.
(MORE)
KARELSEN
The Profession wears you down,
though, young man. Down thin like a
knife what's been honed and honed.
All that good steel just rubbed
away...
He turns back sadly to study the figure of the girl.
MEDIUM SHOT FEATURING ANDERSON AND CLARK OTHERS IN B.G.
Anderson peels off a flourish as he and Clark end their song.
TREADWELL
Man, that's blues! Where'd you drag
that one up Prom?
ANDERSON
(bashfully)
Oh, just stumbled on it.
He strums aimlessly again. Prew and Treadwell come over to
listen, prop themselves on chairs. During following, several
others stroll over and a soldier writing at a desk nearby
stops, turns to listen.
CLOSE SHOT PREW
warmed by the friendliness of the music and the moment.
PREW
They got Truckdrivers’ Blues...
Sharecroppers’ Blues...
Bricklayers’ Blues... We oughta
have a Soljers’ Blues...
MEDIUM SHOT GROUP
as Anderson repeats a theme he has happened on. It has a
haunting melody.
CLARK
Hey, look... I betcha we could make
one out of what you just played. Do
that again.
Anderson repeats the melody.

ANDERSON
I could bring it down to a third
line major ending... Regular twelve
bars blues.
TREADWELL
I bet I got two hundred blues
records back home.
62.
TREADWELL(cont'd)
But there ain't one could touch
that. And that includes Saint
Louis. And it could be ours...
The men wear pleased smiles, delighted by the idea of
possessing something quite rare and truly their own. Prew
flips his cigarette into a can.
PREW
I got it. We call it the ‘Reenlistment
Blues’!
There is a chorus of approval.
PREW
Lookit, w e could start it with the
guy getting discharged.
(reaches over to desk)
Hey, fella, can I use this?
The soldier at the desk nods, and Prew takes his pencil and
paper. He writes down the words of the song as they are
composed during following.
PREW
How's this? 'Got paid out on
Monday... Not a dog soljer no
more... They gimme all that
money....'
He stops, stuck. Anderson plays the melody and Prew sings the
words to this point. Friday Clark chimes in suddenly.
CLARK
'They gimme all that money... So
much my pockets is sore...'
They laugh. Anderson sings. Prew writes furiously.
ANDERSON
'More dough than I can use. Reenlistment
Blues...'
ANGLE
Anderson plays a series of chords, then repeats the last two
lines as the whole group joins in.
GROUP
'More dough than I can use. Reenlistment
Blues...'
DISSOLVE TO:
63.
INT. GYMNASIUM - DAY
FULL SHOT
Raucous, hammering music sweeps away the melancholy blues. On
the floor of the gym Dhom is punching the bag. In a corner of
the raised ring Ike Galovitch is skipping rope. In the center
of the ring Thornhill and Henderson are sparring. Holmes
hovers beside them, issuing instructions in a strident voice.

MEDIUM SHOT PREW
He is in fatigue clothes, on his knees, scrubbing the floor.
There is an expression of stubborn hate on his face. Above
his head in the shot are Galovitch's feet jumping the rope.
In b.g. of shot is Wilson, seated near ring.
GALOVITCH’S VOICE
Some day you get sense in your dumb
head, Prewitt, you be up here
instead down there!
A fine spray of spit accompanies the words and showers over
Prew but he keeps about his work.
WILSON
Still makin out you like it, huh?
MEDIUM SHOT IN RING
There are two water buckets near Galovitch. He skips near one
of them, kicks it. The bucket falls on its side and dirty
water spills over the ring and down onto Prew.
GALOVITCH
Clean up dis mess, Prewitt!
Prew gets to his feet. Galovitch resumes skipping rope.
GALOVITCH
And look a life, hurry it up. You
on fatigue detail, not vacation.
Prew climbs into the ring, gets on his knees, starts to swab
up the canvas. He is nearly finished when Galovitch
"accidentally" kicks over the second bucket.
GALOVITCH
Clean up, Prewitt!
Prew suddenly stands, no longer able to contain his rage. He
throws his sponge and scrubbing brush on the ring floor.
PREW
Clean it up yourself!
64.
GALOVITCH
How? What!
PREW
You heard me -- rub your own nose
in it a while!
GALOVITCH
What!
Prew starts out of the ring. Holmes intercepts him.
HOLMES
What's the matter with you,
Prewitt? You know better than to
talk back to a non-commissioned
officer.
PREW
Yes, sir. But I have never liked
being spit at, sir. Even by a noncommissioned
officer.
HOLMES
I think you owe Sergeant Galovitch
an apology.
PREW
(recklessly)
I don't think I owe him no apology.
In fact, I think one's owed to me.

HOLMES
(furious)
Sergeant Galovitch, take this man
to the barracks and have him roll a
full field pack, extra shoes,
helmet and all, and then take a
bicycle and hike him up to Kole-
Kole Pass and back. And see that he
hikes all the way. And when he gets
back, bring him to me.
GALOVITCH
Yes, Sirr.
Prew climbs out of the ring, Galovitch following him.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. ROAD - DAY
LONG SHOT
65.
Par below in the shot are Prew, hiking, and Galovitch, riding
behind him on the bicycle. The dirt road is steep and the sun
pours down, steaming hot.
MOVING SHOT PREW AND GALOVITCH
Prew is hunched under the seventy-pound pack as he plods
along. He is sweat-soaked, puffing, dog-weary. Galovitch's
bicycle is just behind him; he runs the wheels up on Prew's
heels.
GALOVITCH
Move along. You not half way yet.
Three more miles to top.
A jeep rounds a curve a couple of hundred yards above and
moves down the road. It slows its speed and pulls up when it
nears Prew and Galovitch.
MEDIUM SHOT
The jeep is driven by an enlisted man. Sitting next to him is
MAJOR GENERAL SLATER. Galovitch hops off the bike and he and
Prew snap to attention. General Slater leans out of the
vehicle. He seems puzzled and interested by the odd sight of
the two men.
GENERAL SLATER
At ease. Where’re you men headed?
GALOVITCH
Top of pass, Sir. This man
insubordinate. The Captain is
teaching him lesson.
GENERAL SLATER
(frowns)
What's your outfit, Sergeant?
GALOVITCH
Company G, 219th, Sir.
The General, still frowning slightly, nods. He signals his
driver to move on. The jeep starts down the road. Galovitch
gets on his bicycle. Prew starts hiking again.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. CAPTAIN'S OFFICE - DAY

MEDIUM SHOT
Prew and Galovitch are standing in front of the Captain's
desk. Prew is at attention, the heavy pack on his back; his
face is drawn and tired; his clothes are plastered to him. He
has regained his old expressionless look. Warden has swung
his chair around and is surveying the scene. Holmes looks
66.
Prew up and down, half-smiles.
HOLMES
I take it you're ready to apologize
to Sergeant Galovitch now.
PREW
No, sir, I'm not.
Holmes' face sets; he jerks his head toward the window.
HOLMES
Take him back up there again,
Galovitch. He hasn't had enough
yet.
GALOVITCH
(nods unhappily, sick of
bicycling)
Yes, air.
Prew about-faces and goes out. Galovitch follows.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT FEATURING WARDEN HOLMES IN B.G.
Warden watches Prew go out, then looks toward Holmes whose
back is to him. Disgust is reflected on his face.
MEDIUM SHOT WARDEN AND HOLMES
Holmes slams his fist on his desk.
HOLMES
1 know that kind of man! He’s an
againster. A bitter-ender. You
can't be decent to a man like that.
You have to tame him, like an
animal!
(to Warden)
Warden, I want you to prepare court
martial papers. Insubordination and
insolence to an officer.
WARDEN
Yes, sir.
Warden swings around to his own desk. He thinks for several
moments, tries to sound quite casual.
WARDEN
Too bad you got to lose a
middleweight like that...
HOLMES
Why? Do you see any other way of
breaking him?
67.
WARDEN
I don't know... But even if he only
gets three months, he'll still be
in the Stockade when the boxing
finals come up.
He looks over at Holmes, sees him scowling, weakening.
WARDEN
How about just giving him a good
stiff Compny punishment for now?
Holmes ponders the situation unhappily, rubs his hand over
his face,. shakes his head as if the whole thing is too much
for him.

HOLMES
All right, all right. But throw the
book at him.
WARDEN
(pleased but impassive)
Yes, sir.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. WARDEN'S ROOM OFF SQUAD ROCK - NIGHT
CLOSE SHOT WARDEN SHOOTING INTO SMALL MIRROR
He is trimming his moustache.
WARDEN
I'm sick of it! They ain't got no
right to keep breakin it off in
that kid! Sooner later Holmes is
going to hound him right into the
Stockade!
CAMERA PULLS BACK, REVEALING Karelsen across the room,
undressing tiredly, achingly. Warden is sharp and blustering,
using Karelsen as an escape valve. During following he goes
to his footlocker, opens it, takes out whisky bottle, drinks.
WARDEN
I'm through! I'm turnin in my
stripes. I mean it, Pete. I could
transfer out tomorrow. In Grade --
get that? To half a dozen Compnys
in this Regmint!
68.
KARELSEN
Oh, sure. I could be Chief of
Staff, too, except I can't stand
leaving all my old buddies.
Karelsen is naked now except for a bath towel knotted around
his middle. He slips his feet into Japanese-style, wooden
clogs, starts slowly for the door.
WARDEN
Where you going, Little Sir Echo?
KARELSEN
To take my stinkin shower, if the
First Sergeant's got no objections.
Where'd you think? To the movies in
this towel?
WARDEN
(grins)
Hurry up. Let's go over to Choy's
for some beer and tear up all the
tables and chairs.
KARELSEN
(smiles, moves faster)
Okay, Okay.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. CHOY'S - NIGHT
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT OLD CHOY
An aged Chinese, at least seventy-five, OLD CHOY has a long
white beard and wears a black skull cap and an embroidered
robe. He is motionless, surveying the pandemonium which we
hear over shot: the sounds of men laughing, talking and
shouting blend with jukebox music blasting Chattanooga, Choo
Choo. YOUNG CHOP, Old Choy's son, passes; he is thirty, whiteaproned,
bustling, Americanized. CAMERA PANS WITH him,
DISCLOSING the small beer-house; it has unpainted cement
walls and a cement floor; the only thing that might be called
decorative is the jukebox. The place is crowded with men from
Schofield, a raucous assemblage; everyone is drinking beer
and the smoke hangs in thick layers. At a table near the door
sit Prew, Maggio, Clark, Anderson, Treadwell and Mazzioli. At
a corner table behind a forest of beer bottles and cans are
Warden, Stark, Karelsen and Chief Choate.
GROUP SHOT WARDEN'S TABLE
69.
(MORE)
STARK
... China's the place. Your money's
worth ten, twelves times as much.
I'm gunna ship over soon as my
time's up in this pineapple Army.
KARELSEN
(pinching beer off his
nose)
The Canal Zone for me. This girl
down there. She was a planter's
daughter, see. She lived a very
sheltered life. A very moral young
lady, Milt. I took her out to a
high class dinner and then dancing.
It was a great shock to her to
learn about life. But she took it
well. She got to like me very much
after that.
WARDEN
The last time I heard it you told
it different.
KARELSEN
Well, what did you expect? I was in
a different mood, then.
MEDIUM SHOT PREW'S TABLE
Maggio, Anderson and Treadwell are comparing snapshots from
home, spreading them out on the table. Mazzioli is talking to
Prew with great earnestness.
MAZZIOLI
... it's in regulations. You've got
a right to complain. You've got a
right to take your case to the
Inspector General. Any soldier has,
even a plain dogface.
PREW
I know it. I'm not complainin to
nobody. They ain't goin to get the
satisfaction of seein me squirm.
Clark begins to play the bugle softly along with the jukebox
music, noodling an uninspired obligato.
MAGGIO
(pointing to pictures)
... believe it nor not, this is one
soljer who's got a family -- look,
fifteen of 'em.
70.
MAGGIO(cont'd)
See that old man with the
handlebars?

(proudly)
Mr. Maggio is my father.
MAZZIOLI
Listen, Prew. I guess I ought not
to tell you but --. Warden hasn't
had you on KP much lately, has he?
PREW
Only my reglar turn.
MAZZIOLI
Well -- I was working in the
Orderly Room this afternoon and I
heard the Captain telling Warden
you're to pull KP every weekend
from now on. You know what that
means -- you can' t even go into
town --
PREW
Whadda they want? They done
everything, now they look me in
a box! What else they gonna try?
Clark hits a sour note an the bugle.
PREW
(savagely)
When you gonna learn to play a
bugle!?
In overwhelming, uncontrollable protest, Prew slaps the bugle
away from Clark's mouth. In one motion he wipes the
mouthpiece on his sleeve, raises it to his lips and blows his
own wild, violent obligato to the jukebox music.
FULL SHOT CHOY'S
as Prew plays on, the bugle's pure tone pealing through the
room. Everyone puts down his beer, stops talking and turns
toward Prew.
CLOSE SHOT WARDEN
reacting. He frowns, moved by the cry behind the music.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT PREW'S TABLE FEATURING MAGGIO
as he watches and listens, an exultation for his friend
nakedly revealed on his face.
ANOTHER ANGLE PREW'S TABLE FEATURING PREW
Hitting an almost impossibly high note, he stops as suddenly
as he has begun. He has played perhaps fifteen seconds in
71.
all. He puts the bugle down on the table, embarrassed now,
the violence gone, some of the wrath unloaded.
MEDIUM SHOT AT DOOR
The room is quiet for several moments, except for the
continuing jukebox music, which sounds pale and thin now.
Fatso Judson strolls in, stands at the door. Some of the men
see him, but no one greets him. Fatso threads his way between
tables as the room slowly begins to return to normal and the
men turn back to their beer.
MEDIUM SHOT PREW'S TABLE
as Fatso passes. He stops, leans over Anderson's shoulder to
look at the snapshots on the table. He points to one picture,
a pretty young girl of about fifteen, posing Hollywoodishly
in a bathing suit, cracks his knuckles loudly.

FATSO
Who's that? Who's that dame?
MAGGIO
(impassively)
My sister.
Fatso whistles. He picks up the photograph, stares at it,
whistles again.
FATSO
Whoever! Say, she's a real good
piece of whistle bait! I'd sure
like to get my mitts around her.
He laughs complacently at his own wit, tosses the picture on
the table, starts to move on, Maggio rises, picks up the
heavy wooden stool he's been sitting on and smashes it down
on Fatso's head with all his strength,
ANOTHER ANGLE
as again the laughing and shouting in the room stops
abruptly. Fatso reels a little with the terrible blow but
does not go down.
FATSO
Why, holy -- I You hit met You hit
me!
MAGGIO
(calmly)
You bet your life.
(raises stool)
And about to do it again.
72.
FATSO
(still blinking from the
blow)
What?! But what for? That's no way
to fight!
(reaches hand to head,
brings away blood)
Why, you dirty yellow sneaking --
Wop! You yellow little Wop! If
that's the way you want to play!
With his last sentence, Fatso whips out a knife and snaps
open the blade. The blade is at least five inches long. It
glints evilly as he raises it. There is a concerted whisking
intake of breath from the room. Murder is clear on Fat sots
face.
MEDIUM SHOT NEAR PREW'S TABLE (EXCLUDING WARDEN)
Maggio, holding the stool high, backs up a few feet as Fatso
advances toward him. Men sprawl away from them.
SOLDIER'S VOICE
Hey, it you want to fight, fight
with fists. Take it outsides
There is a murmur of agreement from the crowd. A couple of
men are about to rise. Fatso whirls toward them.
FATSO
I'm gonna cut this little Wop’s
heart out. Anybody steps in here, I
give it to him first.
MEDIUM SHOT OLD CHOY AND YOUNG CHOY
side by side. Old Choy watches, immobile, his slit eyes
almost closed. Young Choy is shaking with fright.
MEDIUM SHOT FATSO AND MAGGIO
Fatso turns toward Maggio, who circles back around the table
as the other stalks him.
MAGGIO
(scared but brave; shouts)
I'm gunna de-brain ya, Fatso!
One step closer an I'm gunna kill
ya!
Fatso has his knife poised at his shoulder, ready to strike.
Warden comes into shot suddenly. He brandishes a beer bottle
wildly, looks like an avenging spirit of authority.
73.
WARDEN
Nobody's gunna do nothin! Anybody's
killin anybody around here, it'll
be me!
Warden snatches another beer bottle from a table, now has one
in each hand. He steps between Fatso and Maggio.
FATSO
Look outs here, Warden. This a
private affair.
WARDEN
No it ain't! This man's in my
Compny an I'm responsible for him.
And you ain't makin two weeks extra
paper work for me by killin him.
Nor him you. Put that knife down!

He smashes the neck off one of the beer bottles, points the
wagged edge at Fatso, roars:
WARDEN
Put it down!
Fatso slowly lowers the knife to his waist, but keeps it
pointed towards Maggio and Warden. Warden deliberately turns
his back to Fatso, spits his words at Maggio.
WARDEN
Killer! You unweaned punk& Come on,
you want some killing, come on!
(whirls on Fatso)
Come on, barrelbelly. Ain't you
comin?
Neither Fatso nor Maggio moves.
WARDEN
(with mammoth contempt)
Killers! You’ll get plenty of
killing, all right. More than you
got the stomach for. You'll be in a
war one of these days. When you
feel that lead from a sniper's
rifle hit you between the eyes,
come and tell me how you like it.
Killers!
(turns to Maggio)
Now put down that chair.
Maggio puts down the stool. Warden turns to Fatso.
74.
WARDEN
Throw that knife on the floor.
Fatso drops the knife. It clatters on the floor. There is
another audible whoosh of breath from the room.
WARDEN
Almost scared there wasn't anybody
going to stop you for a minute,
weren't you?
(finally lowers his voice)
Is there any other little things
you punks'd like me to take care of
for you?
He drops the beer bottles on a nearby table, strides to his
own table. The room settles back, still hushed. Warden has
broken the mood of certain death, but Fatso, still facing
Maggio, bites off his words with sadistic, ominous venom.
FATSO
Tough monkey. Hard sister. Guys
like you get to the Stockade sooner
later. One day you walk in there
I'll be waitin. I'll show you a
coupla things.
He walks away, drops into a stool at the counter.
MEDIUM SHOT WARDEN'S TABLE
Warden stands beside the table, watching. He seems satisfied
as Fatso moves away from Maggio. Still standing, he raises
his half-filled bottle of beer, drinks.
MEDIUM SHOT PREW'S TABLE
Maggio drops onto the stool, sidles it over to the table. He
half-whispers to Prew.
MAGGIO
I made a mistake I guess, but I
don't see how I could of done
anything else, after that big stoop
said a thing like that.
Prew leans over and picks the knife off the floor.
PHEW
I'll tell you your mistake. You
didn't hit him hard enough to put
him out.

75.
MAGGIO
I hit him hard as I could. His head
must be solid ivory.
In b.g. Warden puts down the beer bottle and stalks towards
the door. Maggio and Prew turn to watch him pass.
MAGGIO
Anyway, I'm glad he stopped it.
He's a good man, you know it?
As if on impulse, Prew rises and follows Warden out.
EXT. CHOY’S - NIGHT
MEDIUM SHOT
as Prew carves out. Choy's is on a wide road across from the
entrance to the Post. Prew looks around for Warden, sees him
off to one side. CAMERA MOVES WITH Prew as he goes over to
him.
CLOSE SHOT WARDEN
leaning against the building, undergoing a delayed reaction
to the fierce moment in Choy's. He is white-faced, sweating
heavily. He looks as if he's going to be sick.
CLOSE SHOT PREW
astonished yet appreciative that under Warden's confidence
and control in Choy's there has been a human frailty.
PREW
... That was a near thing.
WARDEN
... Yeah.
Prew holds out Fatso's knife. Warden is beginning to get
control of himself; he manages a weak smile.
WARDEN
You keep it, kid. Keep it for a
souvenir.
Prew puts the knife in his pocket. They stare at one another
a few moments, each inarticulate, each wanting to express
some deep emotion of respect.
WARDEN
You ain't enjoying life much, are
you, kid?
76.
PREW
(thin smile)
They can kill you but they can't
eat you, Top.
Warden studies Prew thoughtfully. Prew turns to go back into
Choy's.
WARDEN
Prewitt.
Prew stops, turns back.
WARDEN
Could you stand a weekend pass?
Prew stares at him for a second, incredulously, unable to
find his voice.
PREW
I thought --
WARDEN
You thought what, kid?
PREW
How about Dynamite?
WARDEN
Leave Dynamite to me. He signs most
anything I put in front of him
‘thout readies it.
Though Prew is overjoyed he is somehow unable to say
"thanks"; Warden grins broadly at him.
WARDEN
I hear you gone dippy over some
dame you met at the New Congress
Club.
He slaps Prew on the shoulder roughly.
WARDEN
What’d you say her name was?

FREW
Lorene...
WARDEN
Pretty name.
77.
Warden walks off across the street. Prew stares after him.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. WAIKIKI BEACH - DAY
CLOSE SHOT PREW AND LORENE
Lorene is covering Prew with sand and has him almost
completely buried. Only his face remains uncovered. He is
griming up at her. She seems thoughtful.
PREW
... Lorene...
She throws a towel over his face. He chuckles under it.
LORENE
My name’s Alma.
The chuckle from under the towel dies.
LORENE
Alma Schmidt...
There is a sound as of strangling from under the towel.
LORENE
Mrs. Kipfer picked Lorene out of a
perfume ad. She thought it sounded
French...
Lorene whisks the towel away. Prew's face is comic in its
surprise and chagrin.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. COCKTAIL LOUNGE - NIGHT
MEDIUM SHOT AT BAR ALMA AND PREW
(NOTE: From this point on "ALMA" will be used instead of
"LORENE.")
A fashionable Waikiki night spot. An orchestra in b.g, is
playing "Someone's Rocking My Dream Boat." Alma and Prew are
seated at the bar. She is dressed modestly and becomingly,
might well be taken as a society girl. Prew is wearing a
civilian suit; he looks bound and choked in it.
PREW
Alma...
She smiles ruefully, realizes her real name has rubbed off
some of the enchantment.
78.
(MORE)
PREW
No, honest, I like it. Alma's a --
swell name. It was great you gettin
away today.
ALMA
I told Mrs. Kipfer I was sick. But
I bet she doesn't believe it,
PREW
There's no tellin when I'll get
into town next. The Warden gave me
a break this time. But Holmes and
those others, they got me on the
edge. I just about went off the
deep end the other day.
ALMA
You must hate the Army.
PREW
Hate the Army...?
ALMA
Sure. Look what it's doing to you.
PREW
It's not the Army that's doing it.
It's Man. I love the Army.
ALMA
Love it? Well, it sure doesn't love
you in return.
PREW
When you love something it doesn't
mean they got to love you in
return.

ALMA
Yes, but a person can stand just so
much from something --
PREW
No! A man loves a thing, he's gotta
be grateful.
(pauses, gropes for
thoughts)
I left home when I was seventeen.
Both my folks was dead, then. I
bummed around. I got all sorts of
jobs. I rode the rods.
79.
PREW(cont'd)
I landed in jails. I didn't belong
nowhere. Until I entered the
Profession.
She frowns, not understanding the last word.
PREW
The Army. I enlisted at Fort Myer
and I learned how to box and I
learned how to play a bugle. I
never had much call for the boxing -
- but if it weren't for the Army
I'd never of learned how to play a
bugle.
ALMA
A bugle?
Prew nods. He takes the mouthpiece out of his pocket, shows
it to her.
PREW
This is the mouthpiece I used to
play a Taps at Arlington.
Alma takes the mouthpiece, looks it over, seems unimpressed.
PREW
(as if saying "I was
elected President")
They picked me to play a Taps -- at
Arlington Cemetery.
She still looks dubious, hands the mouthpiece back. He tries
desperately to communicate.
PREW
Look. Think. You ever think how
strange a tree would look to one
who had never lived upon the earth?
Well, somehow that's how I feel
when I play a bugle...
There is a boisterous shouting nearby.
MAGGIO'S VOICE
Hello, citizen! I told ya I'd meet
ya, dint I?
They turn and ANGLE WIDENS to INCLUDE Maggio, who has just
come up to the bar. He is in uniform. Prew is pleased to see
him but also alarmed; there is something near-desperate under
Maggio's drunkenness.
80.
PREW
How'd you get a pass?
MAGGIO
I dint get no pass. I just took
off. I meant to bring a girl with
me but --
PREW
You better get your tail back to
the Post. Right away.
Maggio shakes his head violently in the negative.
MAGGIO
I'm out for the night. I got a
bellyfull. A nail, Prew. A stinkin
nail. I'm thirsty for a nail.

Prew gives him a cigarette. Maggio hops on an empty bar stool
a few places removed from Prew and Alma.
MAGGIO
Climb up on my shoulders, Prew. You
can see everythin from up here.
(to Bartender)
A beer. A BEER!
MEDIUM SHOT AT SIDE OF ROOM TWO MPs
watching Maggio, attracted by his voice and behavior.
MEDIUM SHOT AT BAR FEATURING MAGGIO
Maggio talks across others at the bar to Prew and Alma.
MAGGIO
I been in a crap game in the
latrine. I win twenty bucks.
PREW
How much did you lose?
MAGGIO
Lose? Oh, lose. I lost twenty-seven
bucks.
(dejectedly)
That's why I ain't got no girl.
A tray on the bar contains olives, nuts and pretzels. Maggio
snatches up two olives, shakes them in his fist beside his
ear.
81.
(MORE)
MAGGIO
COMIN OUT! THE TERROR OF GIMBEL'S
BASEMENT! COMIN OUT! SEV-EN! SEVEN!
SEV-EN!
(rolls the olives out on
bar)
Snake eyes.
MEDIUM SHOT BARTENDER SEVERAL OTHERS AT BAR
laughing.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT PREW AND ALMA
Prew is increasingly concerned for Maggio.
ALMA
You like him, don't you?
PREW
(nods)
He's such a comical little guy and
yet somehow he makes me always want
to cry while I'm laughin at him.
MEDIUM SHOT AT BAR FEATURING MAGGIO
finishing a long gulp of beer. He puts glass down on the bar,
hard.
MAGGIO
The Royal Hawaiian’s jist around
the corner. That's where them movie
stars stay. Rita Hayworth and Joan
Blondell and Maureen O'Hara... You
look like a movie star, Lorene...
yes, you do... How long 'fore we
get in the war, Prew?
PREW
I don't know. Maybe we won't get
in.
MAGGIO
Tha’s what you say.
He jumps off the bar stool suddenly, tears off his tie.
MAGGIO
Hot in here.
He throws tie on the bar, The Bartender starts to protest.
MAGGIO
Swimming It's a great night for
swimmin.

82.
MAGGIO(cont'd)
(kicks off shoes)
Goin swimmin with a movie star...
He is unbuttoning his shirt as he abruptly dashes away,
People around are laughing at him again.
MEDIUM SHOT ALMA AND PREW
as Prew watches Maggio rush out. He sees something else o.s,
which worries him.
LONG SHOT FROM PREW’S POV
The two MPs cross toward direction Maggio has taken. They are
obviously going after him.
MEDIUM SHOT ALMA AND PREW
Alma follows Prew's troubled look.
ALMA
You better go look out for him,
Prew glances at her gratefully, then slips off his stool. He
picks up Maggio's tie and shoes and hurries out after him.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. ROYAL HAWAIIAN GROUNDS - NIGHT
MEDIUM SHOT
Tall pale royal palms contrast with thick dark plants and
bushes. An ornamental lamppost alongside a walking path a
little distance away. Prew comes into shot cautiously,
carrying Maggio's tie and shoes. He moves quickly, bends
over. CAMERA PANS AND MOVES IN and we see it is Maggio's
shirt and trousers which Prew has discovered on the ground.
He looks at them wryly, picks them up, moves on.
ANGLE PREW IN F.G. AND LAMPPOST WITH BENCH NEAR IT IN B.G.
Prew, carrying Maggio's clothes, stops as he sees what looks
like a shadow lying across the bench.
PREW
(calls softly)
Is that you, Angelo?
The shadow does not move. Prew approaches the bench.
MEDIUM SHOT MAGGIO AND PREW
Maggio is stretched out on the bench, seems to be sleeping
blissfully. He is clothed only in his shorts. Despite
himself, Prew smiles. He shakes the reclining figure.
PREW
Maggio, you nut. Get up. Wake up.
83.
Maggio mumbles without opening his eyes or moving.
MAGGIO
I'm sorry, sir. I won't do it
again. Just don't lock me up, sir.
Honest, I won't.
PREW
Here's your clothes.
He throws the clothes on Maggio.

MAGGIO
(opens his eyes)
Well, give 'em back to the Indians.
The Indians need clothes. All they
wear is G strings.
PREW
Boy, are you drunk!
MAGGIO
... maybe a movie star comes outs
the hotel right now and picks us up
and takes us back to the States in
her private plane... and installs
us in her private swimming pool --
Prew pulls Maggio off the bench and starts to drag him across
the path away from the light.
MAGGIO
(yells)
Take it easy, Prew. You scrapin my
tail on the sandy sidewalk.
PREW
You'll get worse than that scraped -
- Listen!
The ominous sound of leggins brushing each other is heard,
not far away. Prew looks off.
LONG SHOT THROUGH BUSHES
The two MPs are on the street just outside the grounds. They
are still looking for Maggio, somewhat aimlessly now.
MEDIUM SHOT MAGGIO AND PREW
Prew whispers to Maggio as he pulls him to his feet.
PREW
Come on before you're in trouble --
84.
Maggio pushes him away.
MAGGIO
Stop it!
PREW
Shut up!
MAGGIO
I'm sick of its Can't a man get
drunk? Can't a man do nothin? Can't
a man put his lousy hands in his
lousy pockets on a lousy street? A
man gotta be hounded every minute
of his life? I ain't gain to take
its I ain't no cowards I ain't
yellows I ain't no bums I ain't no
scum! MPs! MPs! COME AND GET US!
HERE WE IS!
PREW
(aghast)
Now you done it.
MEDIUM SHOT END OF PATH NEAR STREET
The two MPs came running onto the path, spot Maggio and Prew
about thirty yards away.
MEDIUM SHOT PEW AND MAGGIO
Maggio picks up his shoes, suddenly whips away from Prew and
runs toward the MPs.
ANOTHER ANGLE NEAR MPs
as they stop, surprised. Maggio is shouting, "Can't a man do
nothin?!" as he hurls first one shoe, then the other,
directly at the MPs. One MP is hit in the shoulder, staggers
back. Maggio dashes between him and the second MP, but the
latter reaches out and grabs him. Maggio wrenches loose but
instead of running, suddenly wades in, arms swinging wildly.
In a moment, he is hanging crab-like on the man's back. The
first MP charges Maggio. Maggio grabs the second MP's club
and hits the first MP over the head.

MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT PREW
Horrified, he starts toward the fracas.
MEDIUM SHOT MAGGIO AND MPs IN F.G. PREW IN B.G.
The second MP has managed to get out from under Maggio. He
smashes his fist into Maggio's face as the latter continues
to wield the club. Maggio sees Prew coming toward them.
85.
MAGGIO
Get back! I'm handlin this! Take
off!
The first MP starts to intercept Prew. Maggio tackles him
around the knees and brings him to the ground.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT SECOND MP
Club gone, his partner on the ground, the second UP fishes
for his pistol, tugs to get it from the holster.
MAGGIO'S VOICE
This ain't your affair! Keep out of
this!
MEDIUM SHOT PREW IN F.G. MPs AND MAGGIO IN B.G.
Prew sees the second MP raise his pistol, point it toward
him. CAMERA PANS WITH him as he turns quickly and dives
headlong into bushes nearby.
CLOSE SHOT PREW
CAMERA MOVES WITH him close to ground as he knees and elbows
his way along deep into the bushes. He stops, breathing hard.
The sound of the MPs fighting with Maggio can be heard, the
ugly sound of fists and the uglier sound of clubs smashing
bone and flesh.
MAGGIO'S VOICE
(screaming, crazed)
Come on. Is that the best you can
do? I bet you eat Wheaties, don't
you? Come on... You can't even
knock me out -- no matter --
Maggio's voice stops suddenly. CAMERA MOVES TO CLOSEUP of
Prew on the ground, his face contorted. The voices of the MPs
are heard now, panting.
FIRST MP'S VOICE
I wonder what was wrong with this
guy. He must be same kind of
madman.
SECOND MP'S VOICE
Come on, let"s get him into a
wagon.
A convulsive sob escapes Prew as his head drops in the dirt.
DISSOLVE TO:
86.
(MORE)
INT. ORDERLY ROOM- DAY
MEDIUM SHOT PEEN WARDEN MAZZIOLI
Warden is pinning some notices on a bulletin board. Prew sits
on the bench against the wall, miserable, elbows on knees,
chin in hand. There is a quiet tenseness in the room. Warden
looks over at Prew, turns back to the bulletin board.
Mazzioli gets up from his desk, wanders aimlessly to a
window. The screen door slams and Leva enters, eating a candy
bar.
LEVA
Any word on Maggio's Court Martial?

MAZZIOLI
It's on right now. At Headquarters.
Lava sits on the bench beside Prew, shakes his head.
LEVA
He'll get the Stockade sure.
The others tense at the word "Stockade," glare at Leva as if
he had no right to mention it. Their fear of the place, now
that it is imminent even for another soldier, is shown on
their faces. There is a long pause.
MAZZIOLI
Maybe he won't get it. All h