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Painfull Dreams

November 23 2003 at 12:41 PM
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I stood on the stairs... ...at the door. It op... she was, the love... in the doorway with... her glowing. I was... jumping when she... crying. She smiled. ...to never leave her... I spoke in a wisper. ...down her cheek. She... my chest. It felt so... was burning inside... her eyes and I died. ...my heart in her hand. ...her smile again. I... arms around her and... like I blinked and... with my heart, to... I ran down the... the door and found... world I'd never... I decided to explore. ...to this light that seem... a silent darkness. A... spoke like a soft... to climb to the top... when I got to the top... off the edge. I stop...

 
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Escaping things

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November 23 2003, 12:47 PM 

...looking down... end and there... of my life, standing... a bright light behind... two seconds from... ran up to me... Told me to promise... again. "I promise" One last tear ran... put her hand on... hot, like fire... me. I looked into... Looked down to see... Looked up to see... went to put my... she vanished. It was... she was gone... LEAVE ME DEAD. ...stairs and out... myself in a new... seen before... I took two steps... d to appear from... wisper in my ear... wind. It told me... of this hill. I did. ...it told me to drop... ed, took two steps back... ... ...

 
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The Ending

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November 23 2003, 12:57 PM 

...and jumped. I was already dead. I landed in fire, but swam through it like water. I felt so high. Then I asked myself why I had done this? Why was I still chasing her soul? Trying to find some kind of peace, some kind of happieness...and ending. Thats what she was to me. I was still swimming when I ran into something cold. I couldn't see what it was but I could feel that it was cold. Then I felt it had a face and long hair slipped through my fingers. I felt all over her femaile body and suddenly FROZE. NO! no! I grabed her and held her naked body in my arms. So cold...so lifeless... still I could not see through the fire who it was. But some how I knew. I knew that I loved her and that I was still, so afraid to lose her. She was so cold... NO... I held so tight and couldn't move. I was just floating in the fire, giving up........... I never let her go......

 
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