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HAve I posted my poem??

November 1 2000 at 8:58 PM
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well have I? heeeeeey anyone can EMail me if they want.. eheheh you know

 
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would I even dare?

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November 1 2000, 10:37 PM 

whadda you, drunk or something?
and no, you've posted no poem I'm aware of...
*big kiss* welcome back!

Sphinxmoth

 
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ok here goes...

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November 2 2000, 6:16 AM 

no I wasn't drunk just excited I have lotsa stories to tell about my trip.. and I was in a cyberry way.... blurting it all in one fell sentence.. kinda thing.. I'm still hyper about it

free Free Like a Tree
Flying through the sea

Stare Stare like a bear
like a sausage in the air

 
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LOLOLOL! !

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November 2 2000, 8:57 AM 

that's just great, you have no idea how much I
appreciated seeing that first thing this morning!
Can I write it down in my notebook to keep?
(reading it again & laughing like a dork)
I think this would be a good rhyme to use in some
kind of ritual circle. Classic & timeless..

moth

 
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well..

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November 2 2000, 8:38 PM 

it took a alot of time in the making.... the first part came ina spurt... like blammo.. all at once... and then I wanted to think of more but just couldn't.. and thn years later... blam ... the second half... maybe some time from now more will come.. but ya... take it... right it down

 
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not impressed

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November 19 2000, 9:31 AM 

The poem does not impress. Call me critical, but have you ever thought about putting some poetry in there?

As a rhyme, I can see it amusing sphynx, but timeless?
You may be aware that sausages have not been around since the beginning of time.

Now excuse me while I remove this muscle from my cheek....
!POP!

That's better.

 
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