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tinny tramp-tramp.... tinny n' 'is lady tut tut
May 8 2004 at 9:43 PM
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endless stares,(we know she cares!)tossing locks
strutting struts ahhhhhhh 'lady tut tuts'
'oi lady'(tobacco chewn finger nails)points
'oi tramp'(kitten heals, vanish 'no peels')
shuffle, shuffle, tap, tap,
*wink*(sequined eyes vs squinting)
a meeting smile, 'nev'r seems to sink'
the truth speaks between this 'mutual wink',
bemused, enchanted, a love emplanted
nimbles meet...a full moon 'lovers greet..the jazz man 'jingles'
eletrifying, light slowly dying 'tinny tis petrifying'
'tinny tramp-tramp n 'is lady tut tut'
hand n hand
what remains of the jazz band? magnificence...creeping in the distance...
.............lashes flutter...'take my hand' escorts lady tut tut(back to the gutter)
even the tap of her heal, tail of a rat ...''squeal'
'tinny tramp-tramp'...his queue to kneel
no more need be told, happily ever afters, times of old
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Anonymous
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81.153.231.14 Re: tinny tramp-tramp.... tinny n' 'is lady tut tut
No score for this post May 8 2004, 10:02 PM
tut tut looks like rain, tut tut looks like rain....
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kimberleena
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81.153.250.234 *takes a new course..read too late
No score for this post May 8 2004, 10:27 PM
oh how abruptly a smile can be stolen, snatched,
a warmed heart so unexpectedly unattached...
his half wrapped up, tied up, in her
'nev'r quite right how we were'
'what else arent you good at?'
smiles, shaded by a black'ed hat
meaningless, to me it is the meaning
niave, all i cannot perceive, but in (love)i must believe
blink my eyes? cross my thighs?
i weep, forgetfull sleep
secrets, intwined in my heart 'keep'
the hills of arcady, i fail? too steep?
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kimberleena
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81.153.250.234 ''rent boy on trial'
No score for this post May 8 2004, 11:27 PM
'es in the flick o'a lighter
adjustment of a belt...pulling, tighter n' tighter
on the tips of my toes
the only smell in my nose
taken over my senses
tinned all my 'tenses'
and now a confusion of 'present tenses'
the letters of the newsprint
when my nails glint
glisten..listen to the beat of my pulse..
its timing 'false'
in night n' day
in a'l the music i play..
as the note lingers
hes in the string...in my fingers
you know when your all warm and cosey in bed? and your feet are bare and suddenly your foot twitches slightly and finds a cool spot in the bed, it cools down your whole body and makes you feel all tingley...
and i cant help but smile
''rent boy on trial'
a wonderland court
outside of the albion port
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81.153.253.51 'm an infinite sided (queen of) janus
No score for this post May 9 2004, 11:12 AM
'm an infinite sided (queen of) janus...
more complex than an eight legged octupus (4 sided bus)
'oi janus each day, every hour.
second, a secret side, a new tide
excuse me driver...'on board th' rollercoaster ride' (roll up, roll up!)
Janus-like? my turn to take th' stand avec all my might, search fer m' right to tunnel light
a'ong these tracks the rails are tight
find m' wheels on that road we travelled on (once upon a time)
memories, shrink, l'k orange peels (the stench remains)
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81.153.253.51 lily manakins ...''what happened to the boy who defined my smile?''
No score for this post May 9 2004, 5:03 PM
lily manakins
life fragmented, held together avec hair pins
'what happened to the boy who defined my smile?'
narrowed my nile n' widened my tile??
my magenta, a crimson placenta
'hes been stolen m'am' by a beautiful preditor....
poor lily manakins..crippled by all his sins
life fragmented, held together avec hair pins
'what happened to the boy who defined art?'
not pablo picasso, he pulled further apart...
he exceeds the dictionary
hours n' hours of defining him in pictionary..
poor lily, lily manikins
her life, fragility, sliced with a blunted a knife
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Anonymous
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195.92.194.13 Re: lily manakins ...''what happened to the boy who defined my smile?''
No score for this post May 9 2004, 5:28 PM
everydays the same for Pat. to awake from his heavy drunken sleep. aspects such as appearance don't register highly upon his list of importance, more like 'where is my lighter', or 'i need another drink'.
to make the dismal hours of his existance more bearable he consumes litres of whatever corner shop piss can pass his lips, and passes out at the end of the day/ or into the early hours of the morning.
a friend of his is the human form of smelling salts to bring back Pat to his dark reality. Pat is reminded of what his life really is like and for this shuts his friend out with insults for his constant reminders are too sharp.
althought these reminders aren't always directed at Pat he knows what his friend is muttering is true to his life also........
kimx
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195.92.194.13 Re: lily manakins ...''what happened to the boy who defined my smile?''
No score for this post May 9 2004, 5:37 PM
'we'lll meeett againnnn'
the chords for that anyone ?
.............x
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kimberleena
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81.153.253.51 hide no more butts, just causes more lies n' ruts
No score for this post May 9 2004, 5:38 PM
'youve got pscyiatrists eyes'
as she wipes herself
leaves me to ponder...
as i enter into an empty state of wonder
crossed feet, i fail to travel deep today
'go sit in the corner, dismay'
its too light out
i fail to venture, my gasper ' sollice adventure'
a failed satisfaction, a new 'light headed' reaction
''tweet, tweets' charlie playing Franz
why pay for a matinnee? when you can lark around the park? 'for free!'
theres no sun to look back into today
hide no more butts, just causes more lies n' ruts
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195.92.194.13 Re: hide no more butts, just causes more lies n' ruts
No score for this post May 9 2004, 5:39 PM
get jimmy down
playing like a king on the guitar
never seen such passion in a young mans eyes
he entertains me
down another pint of carling
for the next half of the set will be blinding
unfortunate for him....
..is that he carn't just have the music
smack is his fuel
to keep him galloping along at 100mph
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195.92.194.13 Re: hide no more butts, just causes more lies n' ruts
No score for this post May 9 2004, 5:40 PM
pat's been lost for a while
he told me some secrets
before he left
they weren't about love
just about stealing
and what not to do
he's grown up
i liked it before
when he was wreckless
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195.92.194.13 Re: hide no more butts, just causes more lies n' ruts
No score for this post May 9 2004, 5:41 PM
fucked up
drugged up
a night of fun and laughter
what ever happened when he thought of moving away
must have forgotten to take his cap.
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195.92.194.13 Re: hide no more butts, just causes more lies n' ruts
No score for this post May 9 2004, 6:15 PM
..........your swings and roundabouts tale kim ?
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Anonymous
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81.4.145.45 rum...rumble...
No score for this post May 9 2004, 6:21 PM
kimberleena i dont know ya, and at times i dont know what yer referring to in yer poems but generally i think theyre great. really really good and not like some other shit that is sometimes posted here. just thought id finally sayeet.
xxFuck eMxx
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rachael
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62.255.64.5 Re: rum...rumble...
No score for this post May 9 2004, 6:36 PM
I, I, one agrees. Had alittle chat with you earlier, you seem like a top girl, keep the writing up kim, I love it, its very stylish, creative and to the point. Keep the good english up, a credit to you m'dear.
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kimberleena
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81.153.253.51 Re: rum...rumble...
No score for this post May 9 2004, 8:00 PM
''why in Gods name are you dressed like a woman?'
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kimberleena
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195.147.124.106 union 'uncle jacks'
No score for this post May 10 2004, 11:36 AM
union 'uncky jacks'
'what it is to be a londoner'
its all so fuckin cosmopoliton (he grunts in monotone)
all the colours of the rainbow
queued, chewd up in an image 'skull n cross bow'
kids survivin, suits (business men ) thrivin
paddle boats n man made moats
purple goats, merly words, 'wrotes'
glossy locks, hide '2 rocks'- short lived satisfaction
men and women = bad reaction
and now the test..of
'what next'?
lifes a waiting room (i tell you)
STOP! dont sit, wait, 'dangled bait'
smash the glass, refuse time to pass
''******** sofa'- swap chairs
(stirr i t up)
'who fuckin cares'
burn the houses, the flames 'erouses'
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Oscar Wilde
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194.72.162.166 If the world didn't suck...
No score for this post May 10 2004, 11:45 AM
we'd all fall off.
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kimberleena
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195.147.124.106 a bit fagged out....personal contemplation- boudou frustration
No score for this post May 10 2004, 3:38 PM
contemplating his own end
the story 'his pretend'
''a life composed of small incidents'
love, a searching coincidence
lurking in the wings, the puppeteer
controlling the maniquins strings
cups of tea- 'my battle field'
commiting crimes....his battered shield
'whip the mayor every so often'
establish a fragment of democracy
purpotrate a sea of hypocracy
''personal contemplation- boudou frustration'
all in a days work...
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195.92.194.16 Re: a bit fagged out....personal contemplation- boudou frustration
No score for this post May 10 2004, 6:08 PM
i agree too
lovely stuff
keep it reeling out kim x
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kimberleena
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81.155.243.219 this is for the poor....
No score for this post May 10 2004, 10:03 PM
ello monsieur masters...much enjoyed myself tonight...twas loverly to see you after so long.
big up to the 853 xx
kimberleena
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81.155.243.219 midnight sweepers...peepers and gatekeepers-
No score for this post May 11 2004, 4:51 PM
midnight keeper, gate sweeper, chimney peeper,
faith restored with the sifting presence of the grim reaper
silnece creeps, an awakening darkness 'peeps'
an unbuttoned corset, quickened (prompted) with a dripping forcet
''terror lurks'', a forgotten stain...murks
'burserkity'
'ohh! the infinite wailing of infinity'
___________________________________________
a vehicle of my exploration
(statement of profound religious belief)
'chesterfields'
whose lives are halted by traffic 'hooters'
energy, thrust, idiosyncricy rust, 'idiosyncratic'
unique
''so unlike'
the life boats could only take all but nine nuns- the abandonment
creator 'rhymic freedom'
lip service (her) expression of love and emotion
emote...a foreign land 'remote'
talk of the albion 'that great ship' (boat?)
generates intensity, constriction...confined to a metre
''woman beater, woman beater'' (lady eater)
stimulates the pounding of hearts avec a rush of adrenaline
'God bless our heroine'
my life...'a dramatic monologue'(occasional tea interruptions)
the ticking of my clock ' an elongated cog'
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82.42.152.109 Re: midnight sweepers...peepers and gatekeepers-
No score for this post May 11 2004, 5:42 PM
kimberleena...................so complicated, yet so simple.
Goose xxx
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82.42.152.109 Re: midnight sweepers...peepers and gatekeepers-
No score for this post May 11 2004, 5:57 PM
in a good way
Goosey xxx
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81.155.243.219 lap dancer 'ego prancer'.......hourly entrancer
No score for this post May 11 2004, 7:02 PM
as she sits on their laps 'what appears'
pockets of ''bank trips' running on taps
a pre-rehearsed gaze
detalia of hair twirls she 'plays'
saliva striken fingers,
provokes entranced lingers...
lap dancer 'ego prancer'
a helpless, tempramental 'hourly entrancer'
'lolita get ya rags off'
yells a recycled 'toff'
'come on johnny its a peep show..they all go!'
fixed painted smiles, second hand styles
little red numbers, ignored sybling hungers
''ive bin workin ere fer six years''
(numb)
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Anonymous
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195.92.168.175 Re: lap dancer 'ego prancer'.......hourly entrancer
No score for this post May 11 2004, 7:12 PM
...never lay about on msn kim ?
why so ?
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sarah
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217.42.176.97 Re: tinny tramp-tramp.... tinny n' 'is lady tut tut
No score for this post May 11 2004, 8:05 PM
Finally a face to meet I saw
Witness was I to occurences
Saw a sad heart break in two
and with knock on effect...
more hearts were sorely scarred
For it is easier to love someone
Who is less real than the real
But where is that passion there?
Resistance is the only attraction
Soon this will fall from its pedistal
x
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BUB c
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198.240.128.75 Re: sciffs n' scuffles for a 'crumpled worth'
No score for this post May 7 2004, 3:29 PM
this pedestal i jumped upon
a ride i enjoyed
where love blossomed like in a tree
autumn came and i fell off
delanygirl help me back on
i saw a glee, in a sadened eye
sarah i said, set me free
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sarah
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81.154.85.135 Re: sciffs n' scuffles for a 'crumpled worth'
No score for this post May 7 2004, 3:36 PM
This rollercoaster...
did it singe your soldered skin?
Into a scar full of regrets...?
Was it love or just lustuous disbelief?
My eyes are still a-full of glee
But I can see
the grimace in the eyes of the misfortuned
My soul does weep
Yet still joy does seep
still have belief
For hopes and dreams are what
they are cracked up to be
They are what can set you free
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81.155.243.219 Re: tinny tramp-tramp.... tinny n' 'is lady tut tut
No score for this post May 11 2004, 8:08 PM
oh how i miss...
like an evil snake i hiss
how i long him call my name 'miss....
i read his words, they disguise all the other 'byrds'
oh how i miss...a suptious kiss
how I love you? I couldn't list
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sarah
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217.42.176.97 Re: tinny tramp-tramp.... tinny n' 'is lady tut tut
No score for this post May 11 2004, 8:41 PM
Now you know, you know how I see
I do not even wish I could be...
But what can you do and...
...how on earth can you do it?
Can such things ever be done?
I am here like a sword in a stone
Always providing a comfortable home...
..for the sympathies and sorrow
Nor hasten to borrow...
..the help I can offer in
such troublesome times
Read into the lines...
What is the score?
Help me Mr dawes?
Such a gameshow
But with real life foe
Cafe de Paris...
...but will Paris be there?
And how will you bear...
..up with the feelings
the emotional dealings...
... I admire your will.......
..I'll will you along...
you'll do no wrong
to anyone else, but your kind self
but right will be done
to everyone else
On this here day
I offer one shoulder
To help on your way
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kimberleena`
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81.155.243.219 Re: tinny tramp-tramp.... tinny n' 'is lady tut tut
No score for this post May 11 2004, 8:59 PM
kissy kissy
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sarah
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217.42.176.97 Re: tinny tramp-tramp.... tinny n' 'is lady tut tut
No score for this post May 11 2004, 9:12 PM
Ginny ginny
To new found friend ships...
..new found ships of arcady
..founded by and for..
for what, for all
for all, forever
for ever, for albion
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81.155.243.219 kissy girls...
No score for this post May 11 2004, 9:17 PM
kissy girls, kissy girls
sissy twirls, dukes n' earls
satin n' pearls
(plastic beads for pearls)
she moans 'oh how my hair curls'
evil temptress eye staring swirls
''is she one of then kissy girls?''
kissy girls, kissy girls...make em blokes hurl
ah giveover..you act like a princess, duchess, earl
kiss chases..boys races
boys n' girls black and white faces
with her tongue a kiss she traces
for mary, mary x
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sarah
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217.42.176.97 Re: kissy girls...
No score for this post May 11 2004, 9:30 PM
And there it is - he leaves.. replies
alas we know he is alive..
...and well, the girl cannot sustain
to ask for you without refrain
so won't you do a favour to all
and give the cherub a courtesy call?
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sarah
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217.42.176.97 Re: kissy girls...
No score for this post May 11 2004, 9:35 PM
Dawes, flaws, endless wars
you know that feeling when you're about to cry?
I don't know why
I got it just then
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81.155.243.219 Re: kissy girls...
No score for this post May 11 2004, 9:42 PM
ive fought the wars..broken down all those cobwebbed doors
looked inside
'what did she find?'
all those things he left behind?
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sarah
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217.42.176.97 Re: kissy girls...
No score for this post May 11 2004, 9:52 PM
Hey my cherub, ya know when we stood there side by side
Did you feel the guilt? Dinnae ken why it was there...
...shouting ...shouting... too much noise
go to bed and play with your toys
"Dawes...Dawes.... give ME recognition"
Made me sad, made me empty
For there surely were a plenty
Picking, pulling, tearing apart...
..how will he ever have that much heart?
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sarah
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217.42.176.97 Re: kissy girls...
No score for this post May 11 2004, 9:57 PM
Persecution is evil thing....
...although full meaning not clearly dearly
But what have I done to deserve?
What have you?
I am not happy for happy sake
I am happy - it is what you make
I do not loathe or despise
Because I see within your eyes
So to all of you out there
My thoughts for which you have no care
Do not respond, do not complain
Do not take my stride in vein
For I will just ignore the false pain
And carry on with my merry dame
I will smile regardless
Isn't is marvellous?
How I have one soul
Thats knows where to go
No obstacles can bring me down
You will never bring a frown
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81.155.243.219 Re: kissy girls...
No score for this post May 11 2004, 9:59 PM
and how he played billie holiday..no plans were made
a thousand kisses paid..
french satin curtains
cranberry juice cartons
unanswered phone calls from foreign places
lying next to him (his lips) my finger traces
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sarah
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217.42.176.97 kissy girls, kissy curls
No score for this post May 11 2004, 10:47 PM
imberleena says:
fate?fate? were our hearts .'meant'?
Delaney girl says:
ou est mon ami?
kimberleena says:
je ne sais pas
Delaney girl says:
is it working?
kimberleena says:
no you
Delaney girl says:
i am a firm believer
Delaney girl says:
fate is what draws the world closer to our own arcady _
kimberleena says:
kimberleena says:
we must believe
kimberleena says:
believe in something
kimberleena says:
hope and faith
Delaney girl says:
my faith is my utopian dream
kimberleena says:
kimberleena says:
come on sarah wish make a wish
Delaney girl says:
sssssssshhh i wish i wish upon a star
kimberleena says:
for a flying car
Delaney girl says:
for 'you' to smile from within your heart, within your soul.... for you to dream and live today, and be so happy in every way... to live no lies, to suffer no cries, to open your eyes....x
kimberleena says:
ooooooh
Delaney girl says:
'you', not you, but you and I
Delaney girl says:
and all alive
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sarah
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217.42.176.97 Re: kissy girls, kissy curls
No score for this post May 11 2004, 11:33 PM
~Ahhh peter peter
the memories are dim
like a moth flying towards the light
flicker it does
apologies are sent
for my hell bent..
..ways...
...the days..
fuelled with killer daniels
memory lapses
"don't be sad peter"
don't be sad
you're not bad
they are angry
I smile like a child
play,play,play music
don't be sad
in my oasis...oblivious
no surroundings here
your absence brings a tear
knock knock
slurrrr... are you ok?
"are we welcome"
cheque, cheque you're okay
we'll go if you don't want us
sadness to happiness
the sun is dawning
bringing the morning
you're okay now
i hope you are okay
today...
...will be better
"i'd tell you to fuck off
if i didn't want you here"
thank you...
music when the lights go out
...
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sarah
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217.42.176.97 Re: kissy girls, kissy curls
No score for this post May 12 2004, 1:08 AM
The book will cometh
and be there you must
for tomorrow I will call you
That you can trust