monday

by s

 
Hi there,

So, I get my chance to make it up to you.

I am assuming that you mean Monday and not last night (which I haven't seen yet).

Monday begins with Marisol showing up at the mansion so that J.A. can paint her picture. Amparo sees her and goes off the deep end. J.A. comes down and Amparo is saying that she won't have Veronica in the house etc. J.A. ignores her and shows "Veronica" upstairs. Amparo is seething that she will kill her. She talks to Leonardo about this and he tries to calm her down. He can see that she is becoming unhinged.

J.A. starts to paint Veronica who has changed into one of Marisol's dresses. At some point Rossana comes up and starts to threaten J.A. about what she wants for the divorce. Marisol gets upset and leaves. Later J.A. goes to Marisol's and they have a discussion where J.A. is saying that he will be free so they can be together and again, "Veronica" brings up Marisol.

Then there is some stuff going on with Ruben and Malu. It seems that she has had another relationship in her past and can't decide whether to tell Ruben or not. Rebecca doesn't think she should, her Aunt does. Blah Blah.

Also, there is more stuff with Mario, Sulema, and Rossana. At one point, Mario and Rossana are together and Sulema knocks. Rossana hides and Mario tells off Sulema. Rossana is thrilled. Later they get in a fight at the club. and she tells him off in front of a lot of people. Rossana and Amparo have another discussion about the divorce in which Amparo tells Rossana that Mario is only interested in her money.

Then comes the main action! At night, Amparo dresses up in that white suit, sunglasses and wig. She puts the gun in her bag and heads to Marisol's. Bassilio sees her leaving and follows her. As she is fiddling with the lock on Marisol's door, Paco comes up and asks her what she is doing. She shoots him in the shoulder. Then, Bassilio comes up the stairs. He says her name and then she shoots him twice. Then she runs away. At that point Marisol comes out and finds them. She starts screaming for help, Rosita comes up along with some other people from the vecindad. Finally ambulances come and they are taken to the hospital.

Marisol calls J.A. and tells him what happened and to go get Mimi and then to pick her up. As he is leaving, he runs into Leonardo (who Amparo has told of the evening's events). Leonardo tells J.A. that his mother is in bed with a migraine.
Carmen hears the commotion and Leonardo tells her about the shooting and the migraine story.

J.A. gets Mimi and then picks up Marisol and they head to the hospital. It seems that Paco is going to be fine. They talk to him and all he knows is that he was shot by a woman in white trying to get into Marisol's apartment.

Then next morning at breakfast Amparo hears that Bassilio didn't die. She makes Leonardo come to the hospital with her (he balks but does it). They go to Bassilio's room and he is barely conscious. As she is about to cut off the oxygen to his respirator Mariano walks in. He asks Amparo what she is doing and she says "helping him die". He stops her and Amparo and Leonardo leave the room. Then Mariano asks Bassilio if it was Amparo who shot him and he nods yes.

Later, I think at Marisol's, she and Carmen are talking about what happened. She suspects Amparo but Carmen tells her Amparo was home with a headache. Then Mariano shows up. He laughs at Carmen for believing Leonardo. Then he tells what happened at the hospital. Marisol wants to call the police but Mariano has another plan.

Rossana goes to Mario's to tell him what happened. He rushes to the hospital. After seeing that Paco is o:k and hearing what happened, he suspects Sulema and says she must pay. He goes to Sulema's but she is basically passed-out with a bottle of something at her side. He just leaves her alone.

Finally, J.A. and Marisol go to see Bassilio. As J.A. is sitting next to Bassilio, B. gains enough strength to tell him that Marisol loves him. Marisol (who is behind J.A.) looks sort of stricken. J.A. is confused.

THE END.

Ooh! I got carried away. I hope this was the one you missed!

S



Posted on Sep 1, 1999, 12:21 PM
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