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Re: I don't know why....

May 14 2017 at 9:54 PM
Chan Fan Man  (Login Chan_Fan_Man)

Response to I don't know why....


It's actually a very accurate rendering of the events of the film, I was particularly impressed by the description of the fight. My main criticism is you haven't taken enough advantage of the opportunity to get inside Tang Lungs head - it needs more of what he's thinking and feeling. I know there are bits in your story that aren't in the film, but I feel you need more to further differentiate it. As it is, people can just watch the film instead.

*I always thought the child with the ice cream was a boy*

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  • Re: I don't know why.... - JACKY on May 15, 2017, 2:57 AM
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