Too much detail?May 16 2017 at 1:03 PM
|Chaochihao (Login Chaochihao)|
Response to A sample of things to come
My take on WOTD does seem simplistic to your BBB story, however there seems too much detail? IMO the story should move on (literary JKD?) and do away with unessentials. My story (again only MY opinion) gives a closer flavour of the film whereas I'm not getting that from yours Horace...but again I think it's a good read.
Re: Too much detail? - Horace on May 16, 2017, 2:52 PM