I totally agree on the great tension and atmosphere in the story. It's really stays exciting to the end, but that could also be because everything went really fast at the end.
I think the end at Arthur was too quick too...
My favourite is still Bloody Hands, I think.
Yeah...
defenitly..heh.
Hmm... somebody continue bloody hands 2, I can't write a new chapter (last one was mine already). I had all sorts of cool ideas that John and Eddie began a constant struggle with each other and themselves to discover who's memories about Mindy are whom.
-Rudy Nacken