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Another image for the mind...

October 19 2010 at 12:14 AM

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and a challenge for the street photographer:

Anesthesia


Anesthesia
numbs
no answers from God--
dulls the razor sting
of a nightmare's web
entrapping his daily visions...

of raising a sniper's scope
to children playing
across the shadowy streets
of El Salvador...

of running free
to distant borders--
his dead brother
stuffed in a barrel
for retaliation...

of distancing
from his pleading wife
in obscuring hazes
of stupor--
separating pain
from her...and himself...

and of a distant father
lost--
watching his children
becoming lost
by their own methods
of anesthesia.

The jagged shards of
memory
lie about his
closed room--
the alcohol dripping
into the edges
and anesthetizing the wounds...

but never sterilizing.

October 14, 2010

And now the challenge: I gave you an image for your mind so now find me a photo to match. It doesn't matter what nationality, if it is a photo that resembles the man in the poem or the scene-- or just a street image representing your feelings. It should be whatever part of the poem conveys the strongest image to you. We have talented street photographers here that I much admire. You know, I have always wanted to do this here in this forum. I started out writing poetry long before I did photography, but they are one of the same IMO--only different expressive mediums. A good poem is a few words which creates a vivid picture in our minds. It captures a moment in life. What is a good photo? It captures a moment in life which implants a few vivid words in our head. I did not give you an easy poem with obvious and detailed images. However, there are strong emotional ones in there. I believe, if you are up to this, the results will be very interesting, compelling and very unique. Fascinating actually as it may reveal as much about the photographer as it does about the poem. Take your time. happy.gif

By the way, the above poem is based on a true story.

 
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(Login lanatir)
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This is tough... hmm but an interesting challenge! nt

October 19 2010, 1:08 AM 

nt

Regards
Kelvin

 
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Amazing...

October 19 2010, 4:10 AM 

You're right on the money with your explanation.

A series of images came to mind but i have already posted a lot of them here.

I will let this swirl in my mind's wine glass and see what kind of bouquet comes out.

You're really very talented, Pete. And very passionate as well. I thank TP for giving us the opportunity to have connected with a handful of really cool people.

Btw, some of those are quite graphic and violent. Reminds me of your drug wars with Mexico. You can have a Miami Vice type montage in there.

 
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Echi, it can be from your portfolio of images....>>>

October 19 2010, 6:56 AM 

if you think it's the best representative. I'm impressed that there is a positive response to this challenge. happy.gif

 
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Jeff Warden
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Thanks Pete >

October 19 2010, 6:21 AM 

You've picked a hard one. happy.gif

I don't know if I will be able to contribute to this but I'll give it some thought.

Jeff

 
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(Login Dooderino)

The only type of image which comes to mind - that can be easily >>

October 19 2010, 6:38 AM 

captured is ... that of a sad lonely homeless man with a bottle in his hands... or counting his change to see if he has enough for his next alcohol fix... maybe thinking, "Is there enough in here to dull the pain and the shame..."

This is an old image, I'll capture something new in the next few days

Sunday5rs.jpg

 
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Excellent Dude! It is one of the images...>>

October 19 2010, 6:52 AM 

that came to my mind too. I was thinking this morning that over the weekend I need to find a homeless alcoholic lying or sitting on the street somewhere--if I'm brave enough to shoot the scene. happy.gif A good start to the challenge. happy.gif

 
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(Login EduardoJB)

I will, but it'll probably take me some time

October 19 2010, 8:58 AM 

great idea, BTW. Somehow this post should be marked or the future posts related to it be addressed to it in their title lest we forget about it.

 
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Deniz
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Very strong poem

October 19 2010, 2:16 PM 

and very interesting challenge.

Please write more often !

Deniz.

 
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(Login wimlmg)

Wow, the images....

October 19 2010, 5:09 PM 

Very strong, oozing pain....

I will give it a try too, it will be hard I think.

Kind regards, Wim


 
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