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  • Like a Simile
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      Posted Sep 21, 2008 9:17 AM

      Hopefully this works,

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      lip(et al.)s part

      and
      breaths-gasp-p-p-plosive( as; we;
      un (one)
      (f)r(ic)a(ti)ve
      l (another)
      o, u and i... yesyesouiyeswe

      your heat
      your nows
      your waits
      trembling
      shivering
      shuddering
      soft-hard
      kisses
      falling
      on-too new our

      --bodies. breast to breast
      whispering secret r(evol)ution back-forth in tongues and
      sweetcoloured tensions--

      the way your dimple shuts-right-me-up awestruck
      (lively)eyes-perfectly-simply-saying-more-than-words(static)
      like watching a butterfly, liquid-wings melting with the air as it flutters from flow-er to flow-er, dipping itself in the
      swirling watercolours of bliss-full spring before arc-en-ciel-ing from me to you
      and leaving in its wake the dew-smelling dream of love shared

      and sometimes i'm the i in simile that keeps all of it on a page, instead of carefree
      joining the everywhere-exploding-dream-reeling-smile of you
      but then, you make me (feel, i see it e)x-static
      and i won't let words contain me(
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