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The only man I'll really ever love.

November 14 2003 at 2:41 PM
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A little bit of happiness found inside a sweeter man,
a man who's been there every time I need a hand.

He's tall dark and handsome,
but only to my mom,
he's worked every long, hard day in his life,
to give us all a happy home.

I always thought he knew that I take his judgement first,
but falling back in with the "stupid" people must make his head just wanna burst.

But I always know my dad is here,
to help me when I'm down...
my life was crap, but I'll let you know,
It's better now that he's around.

Krisi Ferris


    
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Excellent poem, Krisi!

November 14 2003, 3:33 PM 

Your Dad must have had tears in his eyes when he read this one, or when you read it to him, or whatever! Has he seen it? What a sweet thing you are to write this for your Dad!

Love and Hugs,

Alice

 
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