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A Love That Lasts

November 24 2003 at 5:23 PM
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A Love That Lasts


It's special when someone takes hold of your hand,

Or walks with you barefoot in the warm sand.

Walk together to a wishing well...

Thinking sweet thoughts for each other to tell.

Follow me friend!! Let's splash in the sea.

Let's go together now... just follow me.

Climb aboard a grand sunset cruise,

With a lifetime love you'll never lose.

We talk and kiss on a night so serene.

Heartbeats whisper, then start to sing.

I carelessly stumble and begin to fall.

You lift me up with no trouble at all.

There is no other place I'd rather be

Than in your arms with you next to me.

It's a true blessing to have a loved one in life.

Loneliness hurts more than being cut with a knife.

Share all the time you can with your true loving friend.

Dream and dance together to your very last day's end.


Julie Pisacane


    
This message has been edited by WondersmithWest from IP address 205.206.129.48 on Nov 24, 2003 8:57 PM


 
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Wonderful, Julie!

November 24 2003, 8:59 PM 

Beautiful poem, but you made me lonely for a special someone in my life! It's all right, I'm used to being alone with children, and can't really imagine my life any other way after all these years. Sometimes I think it would be nice to have that special someone at my side through all life's ups and downs though...

Thanks for sharing this one, Julie! Wonderful job!

Love and Hugs,

Alice

 
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Alice..you will

November 25 2003, 6:01 AM 

dance and love with a true love ...God is keeping you busy with other things at the moment.

But someone as loving, talented, caring , smart,charming, funny ...I refuse to believe will not have a very special someone at her side. If you're not now , you will someday soon. Very soon.

It's also ...not always like the poem...you know that though. We are in a fantastic place today ..but what we had to do to get here . We've had several roller coasters to hell and back!! Today we are lucky to laugh about it!

Lucky you to have had Thanksgiving already. I have a week of stress planning a small dinner, came down with a cold ,both my husband and I don't have Friday off and Turkey day is Thursday. It will be nice ,but it's not exactly easy having a one day Holiday. I can't exactly teach on Friday with the intended Hangover I am happily planning!!


WIth Love,

Julie

 
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Alice you will

November 25 2003, 9:29 AM 

Julie is so right, Alice!!! I waited a long time for my husband to come into my life, and right about the time I was ready to give up, he was just there! Now it seems like I was living in a fog before I found him. I had an Ex for eight years, and he is back there somewhere in my mind, but he doesn't seem like reality at all. YOur soul mate is waiting just like you are. When you stop expecting, Puff! He'll come from nowhere. You have a great deal coming up in your life with your book being published. You never Know!
And to Julie. YOu did it again, my friend. Poems of love seem to be right up your alley. Your kind, loving heart shows through. Have a happy Thanksgiving to you and all.
Suzanne

 
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A Love That Lasts

November 28 2003, 8:56 AM 

Lovely poem, Julie!
Reminds me of when I was young and newly married and looking at the world through the eyes of love. I also feel that the poem could refer to Spirit's love.
Love
Pam

 
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