Sorry to be so long to comment on your work, Pam, I've been right down with the flu, still feverish but upright now. Thank God! Hopefully it will be shortlived, I get very impatient with myself when I'm sick!
This is a very good look at the mechanics of writing a poem, all right! People go about the process in different ways - with me, I hear the beginning of a poem in my mind, know that I'd better get to something I can write with, and try to keep up with the flow of the words. That's why I used to call myself 'God's Pen,' it seemed like Someone else dictated and I just wrote the words down. Sometimes I want to write something, and go about it like you've said, most often if someone asks me to match a poem to a piece of artwork or something. We're all different, and it's all good!
I'll be seeing you soon, my friend! It should be fun! Jenn and her two kids are right now stuck in the airport here, because there's a big storm in Toronto - everything all right with you and yours?
Have to go and get some catching up done around this machine.
Love and Hugs,
Alice