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July 25 2004 at 8:42 AM
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A
soft
white
dove
loops
around
me from
above
with a
curious
eye
appearing
to search
the inner
depths
of my
soul
only to
become
cleverly
aware
that
You,
dear Lord
are the
One
to have
filled it
with
eternal
bounties
of Your
perfect
Holy
love.



Psalm 139:1
O LORD, thou hast searched me,
and known me.





Julie Pisacane © 2004


    
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rusty broadspear
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July 25 2004, 1:12 PM 

Julie

I think this is the truest, (had a job with a descriptive word, ie., nicest, most perfect and on and on ....), piece you have written.

At first glance, one thinks OK?!? I would suggest to anyone that reads it, to read it again and again and again ........

Rusty

 
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Thanks Rusty

July 31 2004, 5:04 PM 

And I took your advice to read again , myself.

I like it. It ain't bad either.


Thanks always for your kind words. Positive comments from you and other fellow writers here at Wondersmith West have a tendency to lift me up when I need it most.









Julie

 
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