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"She Came to Me Gently"

May 1 2006 at 7:43 AM
Dave Frazier  (no login)
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I find it an absolute gift of God that I am so deeply in love with my wife after 27 years of marriage. She has such a loving and gentle spirit for people, and such a caring heart. I thank Him all the time for the passion He puts in my heart for this woman.

I was thinking of her and I wrote this.

She Came to Me Gently
5-2006 Dave Frazier

She came to me gently, as a breeze to one’s face
Was to pass by on a quiet summer’s eve.
And the clamor of my mind did fade by her grace,
Want was I that she never did leave.

Ah, so gentle was she… her smile to soothe my ill;
And a brush of her hand to my cheek…
And the rush of the world did calm, oh so still;
That calm, that peace I did seek.

From somewhere deep, dark… my spirit she did lift;
Her embrace like a warming ember.
Enrapt so, within her arms, so easily could I drift,
To that place I loved, that I could not remember.

With soft lips pressed to mine, such is her fashion,
To stir the ashes, embers burn anew, my heart to ignite;
The love she has for me, oh the passion!
My heart to soar — to take flight!

Such is the gift she gives to me, the love;
And want am I to partake.
Truly an angel from God above.
Never shall I forsake.



    
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Beautifully done, Dave!

May 1 2006, 9:40 AM 

Your wife is a very fortunate woman to have such love in her life, and so are you.

Surprisingly I don't envy you, I'm just very happy for you both - and glad to see another beautiful example of great love in the world.

Thanks for sharing this with us, Dave!

Love and Blessings,

Alice

 
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Suzanne
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She Came to Me Gently

May 1 2006, 5:53 PM 

Hello Dave,
When I read your work, my first thought was, "I hope my husband of twenty some years still feels the same way about me." Beautifully done.
YOu touched me with your poetry, and I hope to read more of your work.
Suzanne

 
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rusty broadspear
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"She Came to Me Gently"

May 7 2006, 1:22 PM 

Dave

Your poem once again highlights 'light over darkness'. Two people sharing highs and lows.
If humanity could be 'paired off' in such a way
Then what sane man or woman would stray from the light.

Rusty

 
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