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TIME SQUARE.

May 8 2006 at 9:23 PM
  (Login JackBlanchard)
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TIME SQUARE.

The sound of the city rush hour wakes him up early.
He's been sleeping under the newspapers and cardboard,
dreaming that he's still a boy,
at his grandmother's house...
That he still has someone who gives a damn.
That he's still somebody!

Dreams and reality have been becoming blurred lately.

He drinks coffee from a Styrofoam cup
and watches the people going to work,
and then again in the afternoon
he watches them from a bench,
as they crowd the bus stop,
studying the signs on the buses,
waiting for the one that will take them home.

He never sees a bus that will take him home.

The sun goes down
and the city changes character
as the temperature drops.
The well-dressed business folks
are replaced by dangerous people.
Desperation makes you dangerous.

He's gotten some wine somewhere
and is wandering the downtown night alone.
He checks pay phone slots for change,
and finds a quarter in one.

For some reason,
after thinking about the dreams of family he's been having,
and being about half stoned,
he drops in the quarter and dials Grant 1623,
the phone number that was his grandmother's,
a lifetime ago,
when he was a child.

Somehow the wires and circuits of time get crossed,
and from across the void,
his grandmother answers the phone.

She says, "Hurry home, dear.
Supper's on the table.
I hope you're wearing your sweater...
You'll catch your death of cold".

These are the first words he's heard in an eternity
that sound like somebody cares about him.
That he really exists at all.

*

The policeman says into his radio:
"We got a homeless here. No hurry.
I think it's too late for this one".

But the policeman is wrong.
The boy is already home.

Jack Blanchard

(c) 2006.

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Now I'm blinking back tears

May 8 2006, 11:08 PM 

I'm so glad I invited you to post your work here, Jack. I love it all, and I know others here will too. This is a much better outlet for you than music message boards too, it hurts me to see how much you and your work are ignored on some of the boards. I couldn't believe how few people had said Happy Birthday to you today last time I checked. I stopped checking!

Your work is so very touching, poetry in prose almost, a lot of it. I'm sure my good friend Rusty here will really enjoy your columns, and I'm very sorry that I've deprived everyone here of them over the years. Maybe you should post your new one each day and then a couple of others, as you did tonight, every day until everyone here is kind of caught up? A lot more people visit than talk.

I'm going to send out one of my mass emails soon, once I get my Song Lyrics Index finished, the Childrens Poetry and some of my favorites moved over to alicecbateman.com, and my informational ebooklets finished, and I'll do my very best to remember to mention that your very excellent columns are hosted on Wondersmith West now. Within two and a half or three weeks, so somebody please bug me to remind me, all right? Julie maybe? My brain really isn't up to snuff, I haven't been taking much oxygen lately, I'd better up the dosage again.

Jack, do you have a space on MySpace yet? You really should if you don't. It's a good showcase - I had a guy from Universal Music Canada, in Edmonton {Alberta's other major city} ask me to join his friends list today. There are good contacts to be made, and there over 70 million people in the network - some of those would check out your music and buy your CD's, I'm sure!

Thanks again, Jack, your work always makes me think and FEEL, which are both hallmarks of an excellent writer.

Love and Blessings,

Alice

 
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Thanks very much Jack

May 9 2006, 10:33 AM 

for this touching piece. May many more eyes see and feel what you have written on the homeless and offer prayers, a helping hand and heart driven action towards this reality that goes for the most part ignored.

Care is slipping away ,yet we can praise God that Hope is always in flight and in our sight. He has a Home that we can all enter into.



I look forward to reading more of your writings and I just took a visit to your site . Thanks for sharing the links.

May your inspirational writings go where they may and offer strength and encouragement to those in need.



Abundant Blessings,


Julie


 
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