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A Blissful of Rain

February 22 2007 at 4:32 PM
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Oof, after about a month an a half of research, scrapped and rehashed ideas, writing, and more midnight oil than I'd care to describe, I finally finished that ridiculous extended essay... So here's a little something to celebrate

A Blissful of Rain

A blissful of rain,
Resting upon the melody of the sparrow's song,
Perched above great gardens of fire,
Quivers,

And only we'll know,
How everything depends upon that next note,
And the blissful of rain,
That falls like a jewel,

Down the curve of your neck,
As you fall like a jewel,
Gently, into that good night,
And blow out the candle,

Good night, and a blissful of warmth.


    
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Beautiful, Daniel!

February 23 2007, 3:53 PM 

Congratulations on getting your project finished, Daniel! And thank you very much for this beautiful poem, lovely and heart-touching.

Midnight oil is a crucial substance for writers, but I hope you get to catch up on some sleep now!

All the Very Best,

Alice

 
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A Blissful of Rain

February 25 2007, 11:55 AM 

There's only one word to describe your poem Daniel - 'Blissful'.

Where did my inspiration come from for my next posting??

Actually I wrote it some time ago and it was put to music for a heavy rock band ..........

 
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