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Like a Simile

September 21 2008 at 9:17 AM
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Hopefully this works,

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lip(et al.)s part

and
breaths-gasp-p-p-plosive( as; we;
un (one)
(f)r(ic)a(ti)ve
l (another)
o, u and i... yesyesouiyeswe

your heat
your nows
your waits
trembling
shivering
shuddering
soft-hard
kisses
falling
on-too new our

--bodies. breast to breast
whispering secret r(evol)ution back-forth in tongues and
sweetcoloured tensions--

the way your dimple shuts-right-me-up awestruck
(lively)eyes-perfectly-simply-saying-more-than-words(static)
like watching a butterfly, liquid-wings melting with the air as it flutters from flow-er to flow-er, dipping itself in the
swirling watercolours of bliss-full spring before arc-en-ciel-ing from me to you
and leaving in its wake the dew-smelling dream of love shared

and sometimes i'm the i in simile that keeps all of it on a page, instead of carefree
joining the everywhere-exploding-dream-reeling-smile of you
but then, you make me (feel, i see it e)x-static
and i won't let words contain me(

 

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