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super story 2nd

October 30 2009 at 2:05 PM
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kamal  (Login kamalsalah)

Super story 2nd


William was working when he heard someone yell his name but there were to many people surrounding him luckily he had an excuse he said he needed to use the bathroom (but to tell the truth he did) and he turned into cool guy. When he went there he met static(If you don’t know who static is you better read the first story).“hi Static I never knew you lived in California” said cool man “Ya you don’t now a lot of things about me” said Static. “Ok but what happen here” said cool guy “I don’t know, one minute I was fighting a burglar then something took me here” said Static. ”Here is my walky-talky call me when it comes again, see you” said cool guy. He went back to school but no one was there, he went home still no one was there, so he thinks someone had something to do with this disappearing thing to himself. So he flew to china there was people there, so how is that there weren’t any body at California, so he flew to mars but he saw nothing until he felt the ground he heard people saying “we will respect you” they said. So he used his fast digging ability to go threw the dirt. He saw metal bars everywhere and people in them. So he used his laser vision to cut threw the metal bars. He told them to follow him, then he came to a hall when he heard someone coming so he “sh” them and when the guy came he hit him so hard that he was going to be out-cold for a few hours, he thinks. At this hour my walky-talky started to beep. I answered it “This is not a good time to be calling me ” I said. but instead of hearing static voice he heard someone else is. I told him to let go of static but he wouldn’t so he told him to take me he would take instead. But before cool guy time to do that he have to do this. “Hay wait a second so that mean’s I’ll have to scearfise my life to save someone else’s” cool guy said to me. I hate to be asked questions from my own characters. “Yes“. “But that’s not fair because it all was ends the same way. So what. “So can’t it end differently”he said O……………..k. cool guy kills the man and takes everyone to Earth even though the bad guy is still there.



 

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