I thoroughly enjoyed the interaction between the partner, both sets. SVU surely does not utilize Fin and Munch as their talent would suggest!
The scene where Elliot is woke up was very realistic in both his confusion and his regrets. Kathy's legs thrown over his was a very nice addition bringing the realism to the reader through small everyday things.
My favorite part of the chapter was Toby watching over Chris, the comparison to a father with his child even as the horror sets in for Beecher as he realizes Keller's parents are the one's responsible for his nightmares was poignant.
~HUSSY~
"Your acting, or your writing, is not yours to judge. So saying "I'm not very good at this" is some sort of protective mechanism, and it will keep you from sharing it with people. You have to be willing to fearlessly expose yourself."
-- Lee Tergesen ~ aka ~ Tobias Beecher of OZ