Thank you so much for the feedback. I actually have degrees in Criminal Justice and Psychology, so when I write fanfiction like this, I try to incorporate as much realism into the scenario as possible. I think that it just helps the flow of the story, and helps it seem like more of a situation you'd see actually happening. I'm also a novelist by trade, so I try to work as much detail as possible into a scene so that I know that everyone reading it is seeing it through the same eyes I am, and I know that I can provoke a reaction.
Thanks again, and Chapters IV and V will be up soon.
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