TV English Comp Learning Community

This is a forum for students in the Television learning community linking The Aesthetics of Television, Television and New Media, and English Composition I, fall 1999, Columbia College of Chicago. This forum is designed specifically to provide an opportunity for students to post both informal messages and replies to questions and to post drafts of papers in progress for fellow students to respond to.

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Hey, You Guys!!. on Feb 18, 2000

Have a great break!. on Jan 21, 2000

comments on Keisha's affirming revision. on Jan 19, 2000

Chundria, here are comments on your affirming revision. on Jan 19, 2000

Lisa, here are comments on your persuasive. on Jan 19, 2000

Jeff, I've moved your posted revisions. on Jan 19, 2000

comments on this revision. on Jan 18, 2000

Lisa, Tre, Chundria, Christen and Tiffani: check for latest comments. on Jan 16, 2000

a few more comments. on Jan 12, 2000

comment. on Jan 12, 2000

Ok, those were my comments on Tre's draft. on Dec 16, 1999

christian paper. on Dec 15, 1999

Tips for Survival at the end of the term. on Dec 15, 1999

ABSOLUTE FINAL DEADLINE!. on Jan 13, 2000

Be Sure to Read!. on Dec 11, 1999

Informative draft. on Dec 8, 1999

comments on draft. on Dec 8, 1999

Informative Revised. Tre on Jan 14, 2000

comments on this revision. on Jan 16, 2000

Actually, you do incorporate a reference or two. on Jan 21, 2000

want to take English Comp/ 1. on Jul 27, 2005

a small draft. Jeff on Dec 1, 1999

Glad to see the draft!. on Dec 1, 1999
Untitled. on Dec 8, 1999
revision of informative essay. Jeff K. on Jan 19, 2000

comments on revision. on Jan 19, 2000

Rough, Rough Draft of Informative. on Dec 1, 1999

Untitled. Jeff K. on Dec 1, 1999
Good start. on Dec 1, 1999
Uh-oh!!! Go Tiff, its your birthday, Go Tiff!!!. on Dec 1, 1999
A better draft-informative. on Dec 1, 1999

good draft!. on Dec 1, 1999
An addition to the INFORMATIVE. on Dec 8, 1999

comments on revision. on Dec 8, 1999

Cleaned up the draft. Tiffani on Dec 15, 1999

let's see a more substantial revision!. on Dec 15, 1999

Last Revision of informative!. Tiffani on Jan 12, 2000

brief comment. on Jan 13, 2000

Comments for Tiff. on Dec 15, 1999

tiffani paper. on Dec 15, 1999

see comments below; please post drafts in response to appropriate calls. on Oct 31, 1999

Extremely moving and motivational!!!. on Oct 27, 1999

comments on first draft. on Oct 27, 1999

"Y-You on your way, you goin' to the top" :-). on Oct 27, 1999

repeat call for affirming essays. on Oct 26, 1999

Affirming draft. on Oct 27, 1999

comments. on Oct 30, 1999

Affirming2. on Nov 2, 1999

comments on second draft. on Nov 3, 1999
Totally Agree!!. on Nov 3, 1999

trey paper. on Dec 15, 1999

LOW DRIVE. RONI on Oct 27, 1999

comments on "Low Drive" draft. on Oct 31, 1999

Affirmative. Jeff Kowalczyk on Oct 27, 1999

comments. on Oct 31, 1999
I agree!. on Nov 3, 1999

1st draft. on Oct 27, 1999

extremely moving and motivational!. on Oct 31, 1999
comments on draft. on Oct 31, 1999
1ST DRAFT. RONI on Nov 3, 1999

this is a start to where I'm headed. on Oct 31, 1999

"Y-you on your way; you goin' to the top". on Oct 31, 1999
comments on first draft. on Oct 31, 1999
untitled. on Oct 31, 1999

comments on revision. on Jan 19, 2000

revison of 1st draft. on Nov 17, 1999

Advice to you. on Nov 17, 1999
response to second draft. on Nov 23, 1999
keisha paper. on Dec 15, 1999
2nd draft. on Jan 18, 2000

comments. on Jan 19, 2000

Affirming draft. on Jan 17, 2000
My affirming revision-hope you like it. on Jan 17, 2000

see the network54message. on Oct 22, 1999

It's Here!My revision of the Reflective.. Tiffani on Oct 20, 1999

comments on second draft. on Oct 25, 1999

thief. jeff k. on Oct 20, 1999

comments. on Oct 22, 1999
This is so great, Jeff!!!!!!! :-). on Oct 27, 1999
revision of thief. Jeff K. on Jan 19, 2000

good revision, Jeff!. on Jan 19, 2000

Affirming Essay. on Oct 20, 1999

comments on draft. on Oct 22, 1999
affirming revision. on Oct 27, 1999

brief comments. on Oct 30, 1999
right on!. on Nov 3, 1999
affirming revision revision!!. on Nov 3, 1999

good added material. on Nov 8, 1999

Rough Draft For Reflective Essay. Tiffani on Oct 20, 1999

Aww!. on Oct 20, 1999
let's see a reflective essay perhaps based on this. on Oct 22, 1999

REFLECTIVE ESSAYS, PAPER ASSIGNMENT #2. on Oct 7, 1999

reflect 1. on Oct 20, 1999

thanks for reposting the draft, but see messages below. on Oct 22, 1999

Rude Awakening. veronica woods on Oct 27, 1999

comments on Rude Awakening. on Oct 31, 1999

Reflective revised. on Oct 27, 1999

good revision; needs a bit more. on Oct 31, 1999
this is my respond to you lisa. on Dec 15, 1999

revision of wrong choice. on Oct 27, 1999

much improved!. on Oct 31, 1999
Pretty good, Keisha!! :-). on Nov 3, 1999

That Chicken!!. on Nov 3, 1999

comments on draft. on Nov 3, 1999

Revision: That Chicken!!. on Dec 1, 1999

good work!. on Jan 13, 2000

Revision Revision. on Dec 1, 1999

good revision. on Dec 8, 1999

Is This Helping or Hurting?. on Oct 6, 1999

good first draft. on Oct 7, 1999

expressiveessay#1drafts. on Sep 29, 1999

ok here's a draft. on Sep 29, 1999

good start. on Oct 2, 1999
STILL WAITING TO SEE YOUR REVISION, TRE!. on Oct 7, 1999

Scary story. on Sep 29, 1999

great details, Lisa!. on Oct 2, 1999

Cool. beau on Oct 4, 1999
Hard to Forget. on Oct 6, 1999

Untitled. on Oct 6, 1999
still a good story. on Oct 6, 1999

in an instant. on Oct 6, 1999

good revision, Tiffani!. on Oct 6, 1999

BE SURE TO READ TIFFANI's ESSAY AS AN EXAMPLE OF REVISION. on Oct 7, 1999

BEAR NECESSITY. on Oct 6, 1999

good draft. on Oct 6, 1999

Top of the World. on Oct 6, 1999

off to a great start!. on Oct 7, 1999

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