I have a question.

Why is the sky blue?

In the other scene. Olivia and Hiram are back from Scotland. When Olivia was 6 where she leaves London 10 years ago.

OK, I'll DEFINITELY put that in!

BTW, do you know WHY the sky is blue?

About the other scene. Hiram was shot by Ratigan and they looked at Hiram. Dr. Dawson checked Mr. Flaversham's pulse but Hiram has no pulse. Hiram was shot and now he's dead.

I'll do that, but Hiram will barely live.

I think Dr. Dawson will help him in the other scene. Hiram was healed but he has to leave London and he says goodbye to his daughter Olivia and Olivia says goodbye to her father and he tells her that she can take care of herself and then Hiram leaves.

I'll put that in.

But don't you think Hiram should stay? After all, he can't fight Ratigan & save all of mousedom in Scotland or somwhere else, can he?

How about Hiram leaves London that Olivia can stay with Brian and Darwin stays with Brian too because he doesn't have a family. Brian lives with his uncle Captain John Corg. Brian's parents died where they were eaten by a cat at the end of the scene. So, Brian, Olivia, and Darwin could be famous detectives.

Aren't you gonna respond?

I'll put that in.