Would you like to see MA's movie script at Microsoft Words so that we can change it just to help Mouse Avenger until Thanksgiving? Okay? It's for Disney that is to sent it and e-mail to him to make the 3D animated movie now that the 3D animated movie will be out in two years in December 2006. Okay?
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Here's the first scene of my "Ratigan's Revenge" script.
"Ratigan's Revenge"
(We fade from black into an image of Professor Ratigan falling into the Thames River; CUT TO: Ratigan falls into the river, closing his eyes for one last time...)
(Fade into black)
(We see a caption in gold that says "10 Years Later"... & another one that says, "London, 1907"...)
(Scene: Ratigan opens his eyes, only to see a tiled ceiling above him)
Ratigan (dazed, weakly): Wha...where am I? Why am I here?
Voice (from offscreen): Doctor, doctor! The patient's waking up!
Ratigan (weakly): Patient?
Doctor: Ahh...(we see an old human's head loom over the camera)...good. You're awake. And good as new!
(CUT TO: we see that Ratigan is lying in an old metal cage in a Victorian-era laboratory, with all kinds of dusty science equipment surrounding him. CUT TO: two hands come toward the cage, & undo a latch, springing the cage door open. CUT TO: Ratigan shrinks toward the back of the cage, trying to get away, but the hands catch him, & gently hold him inside them.)
(CUT TO: the two hands land on a London street, & Ratigan climbs out, gazing at his new surroundings.)
Doctor: There you go, little fellow. Run & be free! (Ratigan then rushes off, into an alley.)
(Time lapse. As it rains in torrents, Ratigan rushes through another alley, & runs into a sewer grating...)
(We fade into black, until a small circle of light pierces the darkness. And drippings of wine break the silence. We are now in Professor Ratigan's sewer lair, but it is entirely empty. The thugs & minions who used to work for their master are gone...& living new & normal lives in the Outside World.)
(CUT TO: Ratigan opens the sewer grate leading to the lair, & scurries into the lair. He scurries into his throne room-barrel, which is now empty, but the way it was before.)
(Broken chandeliers, flowing champagne fountains, & everything else that was there before.)
(CUT TO: Ratigan walks down the red carpet, looking at his old throne room.)
Ratigan (happily, to himself): (sighs deeply) It's good to be home again.
(CUT TO: Ratigan walks to his throne, & sits down in it.)
Ratigan: And after 10 long years...
(Ratigan leans back in his chair, closes his golden, glowing eyes, & sighs deeply in content. The camera pans toward his face, & finally stops at his eyes...which immediately SNAP open!)
(Ratigan's thick eyebrows furrow, & his eyes squint. A scary glower spreads across his hideous face...)
Ratigan (whispering angrily to himself): Basil.....Basil Of Baker Street....
(CUT TO: A shelf full of things. The camera pans toward the shelf, until we see a pin-poked voodoo doll of a mouse in a deerstalker cap & invertness cape...Basil Of Baker Street, The Great Mouse Detective.)
(We CUT TO black!)
Scene 2 is on the way. So hang tight.
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(Fade into a photograph of Basil Of Baker Street. The camera pans away from the photo, away from a wall [which the picture rests on], & into a bedroom. The camera pans towards a canopy bed, through the canopy bed's curtains, & toward the sleeping Basil Of Baker Street. Basil is wearing his robe, breathing gently as he cuddles up under his thick covers.)
(Basil continues to doze off, when Big Ben rings 7 o'clock. Basil jolts up in bed, then yawns, stretches his arms, & smacks his lips. Basil lifts up the covers, & gets out of bed. He opens his closet, & puts on his detective clothes. Apparently he's learned a lot about being neat & organized.)
(Basil puts on his deerstalker cap, walks out of the bedroom, goes down the stairs, & walks into the living room. He sits down in his favorite red chair, & sits across from Dr. David Q. Dawson, his "trusted associate", physician, & friend. Dr. Dawson is sitting in his green chair, eating some quick breakfast, & reading the paper.)
Dr. Dawson (happily): Good morning, Basil.
Basil (happily): Good morning, Dawson. (CUT TO: Mrs. Emily Judson comes into the living room from the kitchen, carrying some tea & cheese crumpets. Mrs. Judson is a very, very old lady now.)
Mrs. Judson (giving the tea & crumpets to Basil): Here's some quick breakfast, Mr. Basil.
Basil (taking the tea & crumpets, & eating them): Thank you very much, Mrs. Judson. (Basil eats his tea & crumpets.)
Dr. Dawson (finishing his paper & breakfast): OK, Basil, let's go find that diamond thief! (Dr. Dawson gets up, & gets ready to walk out the door)
Basil (finishing his breakfast, & getting up): I'm right behind you! (Basil & Dr. Dawson walk out the door, & into the foggy streets.)
Now's your chance. Tell Regina about the new roleplay called, Maxwell Paton the mouse at our forum. Go PM Regina about the roleplay at our forum at AL forums. OK?
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