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Oh, Mother Of God!

September 12 2004 at 2:55 PM
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Help! Somebody! Please help!

(breaks down & cries)

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OOC: Psst...Lavender. That's your cue!

 
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Hey!

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September 12 2004, 2:57 PM 

Hey, Bill, are you alright?

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No

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September 12 2004, 5:23 PM 

(crying)
No, I'm not all right.

My friend Olivia Flaversham has been kidnapped.

 
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(snifles)

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September 18 2004, 10:43 PM 

Notice I said Olivia Flaversham was my FRIEND.

Can you help me save her?

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OOC: Psst. Lavendar, you have to get Timothy Eliot to say Olivia Flaversham's not Bill's friend, & she's a wench, & that you won't help Bill save her,

 
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OOC: MA.

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September 19 2004, 5:29 AM 

OOC: Lavender has just left you know.

 
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OOC: OK...

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September 19 2004, 2:16 PM 

OOC: I'll wait.

 
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Oh, Please!

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September 26 2004, 5:24 PM 

(crying)
Oh, PLEASE say you'll help me find Miss Flaversham & save her from the jaws of doom!

 
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(blank stare)

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October 6 2004, 4:43 PM 

Let me guess. You think Olivia's a brat, & you're not gonna help me save her. Right?

 
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OOC: Dude?

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October 6 2004, 4:46 PM 

OOC: Aren't you gonna reply me?

 
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Moat

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October 7 2004, 1:38 AM 

Moat turns his head away from the others to the pouring rain. He had never had parents and felt a twinge of jealousy to Olivia at all of her loving familly. He only had Mouses, Ratigan and the others.
Moat:*bitterly* Why should we?

 
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Well....

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October 9 2004, 10:14 AM 

Listen, I know you're upset because you never had a real family.

But if you find Olivia, maybe the Baker Street Family will adopt you.

You like that idea?

 
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Money, money

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October 10 2004, 8:08 AM 

Moat faught back any emotion. Would they accept him? However he could relate to the little girl Olivia who had her mother snatched from her. It would be a shame for someone else to loose a familly. Moat walked up to Bill and whispered in his ear.

Moat: Well I'm sure me and the boys could be persauded to lend a hand.

Moat gestured to Bills wallet.

Moat: You well off aren't you? So lets get to work.

 
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Yes!

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October 13 2004, 8:35 PM 

Yea! We're gonna get Olivia back, & bring her home, & get the Baker Street Family to adopt you!

First things first, though.

To the place where Olivia is being held captive!

(they go to the place where Olivia is being held captive)

Now what should we do?

 
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Moat?

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October 14 2004, 5:37 PM 

Moat? Are you OK?

 
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Re: Moat?

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October 15 2004, 10:32 AM 

Moat: Never better....buddy (). I say we split up and survey the area but first who do you suspect is responsible?

 
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Um....

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October 16 2004, 11:34 AM 

That's a good idea, Moat.

And I last saw Manchester Maurice & his brother Bartholomew carry her off to their flat.

Does that help?

 
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Thinks hard

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October 16 2004, 1:12 PM 

Moat: Give me time...I can work with that. Boys!
(Motions to the thugs and whispers something)
Moat: I have a plan. Bill me and the boys can handle the work, so to speek. I want you to hide behind them there stares to their flat.
(Moat gives a cloth covered in a chemical to a thug)
Moat (to the thugs):Right we want to make a clean job of this. No killing Understodd?! We don't want our little friend Bill getting all self ritous on us.
(Looks through the flat window)

 
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(walk in)

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October 16 2004, 2:17 PM 

(Bartholomew [yes, the mouse who was "eaten"] & his twin brother, Manchester Maurice, walk into the flat)

(Olivia is sleeping on the bed. She looks like she is silently crying to herself.)

(Bartholomew sits down, & finds the bottle with the chemical inside)

BARTHOLOMEW: Oooh....soda pop!

(He guzzles it down)

(Manchester Maurice sees what it is)

MANCHESTER MAURICE: No! DON'T!

(Bartholomew faints)

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OOC: Hey, Soph, what do you think should happen next?

 
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Plan B

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October 17 2004, 5:33 AM 

After seeing what was happening inside Moat abandones the cloth. Removes his gun and rings the door bell.
Moat(pretending to be a police man): Your nicked mate.
Pulls out gun to Maurices head and police id.
Moat: We had an anonymas tip you were holding a Miss Olivia Flaversham against her will. I suggest you coaparate sir if you know what good for you. Alright boys move in. You over there. Keep an eye on him against he tries anything funny. Come on Bill, you can come out now.






 
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(he comes in)

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October 17 2004, 6:48 AM 

(He comes into the flat, & takes Olivia Flaversham, who is still crying.)

(He starts to comfort her, & he gives her a big hug.)

There, there, Olivia, don't cry, love. It'll be all right.

(to Moat) What should we do now?


    
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They get what they deserve

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October 17 2004, 11:08 AM 

Moat(to Bill): Right wait outside with Olivia and I'll handle the rest.
Moat(to the thugs): Right you say his name his Maurice.
Moat (to Muarice): I'm afraid it's bad news your friend in there wont make it.
It seemed the soda had been drugged. We can't find evidence to hold you responsible sir. The charge of kidnapping still remains but if you give Miss Flaversham generous compensation here I'm sure the matter will be settled.I am sorry about your freind though sighs

(walks off with Olivia, Bill and the thugs)

Moat: Quick before the other guy comes around. To lower 221 B!

 
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(they go to Baker Street)

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October 17 2004, 12:09 PM 

(Bill, Olivia, Moat, & the others go to Baker Street.)

(They find the Baker Street Family [Basil, Hiram, Victoria, Julie, Gadget, Eliza, Jane, Cousin Timmy, Cousin Tina, Ratigan, Fidget, Andrew, Sally, Baby Fuschia, Dr. Dawson, & Mrs. Judson] all waiting outside.)

BASIL & THE BAKER STREET FAMILY (really happy): OLIVIA! YOU'RE HOME!

(they all go to Olivia, & give her big hugs & kisses.)

(Basil & the others find Moat.)

COUSIN TIMMY: Uncle Hiram, who's he? (points at Moat)

 
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Nearly Finished

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October 19 2004, 3:12 AM 

Moat smiles at Cousin Timmy
Moat (whispers to Cousin Timmy): I am a spy .
Moat shakes Bills hand.
Moat: Well best be off. Placesz to go people to see.
Moat runs off to the distance.

OOC: Moat has gone and left without the money 0_o awwwww lol.

 
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WAIT!

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October 19 2004, 3:44 PM 

Wait!

(Moat turns around, & sees Basil)

Don't you want to join our family?

 
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October 20 2004, 10:05 AM 

OOC:It's kind of a bit late moats gone.

 
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Oh

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October 20 2004, 2:06 PM 

Oh. I see.

Well, I'm just glad Olivia's safe & sound at home.

 
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October 21 2004, 2:52 AM 

This is the first sucessfuly completed rpg I have been in so far.

 
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