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Niecy's in trouble! :o

September 21 2004 at 10:41 PM
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(exerpt from the fanfic "Don't You Dare Deny Me"--Fidget hears that his fiancee Deniece is being pursued by Ratigan's henchmice and rushes to her rescue)

Fidget: If anythin' happens to dat girl, I'll NEVER forgive myself. I just GOTTA save her! Niecy!? NIECY!!

Deniece: Please God, don't let me die ...! (Slips and falls; Ratigan's henchmice catch up to her and hold her hostage and she screams)

 
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Stop right there you fiends!

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September 22 2004, 10:47 AM 

Unhand that woman this instant!

I'm Anatasia Basil. I'm the future daughter of Sherringford Basil Of Baker Street and Princess Felicia (the queen's daughter). I'm from the future. I've been invented and using my time machine to travel back in time because I'm a scientist.

 
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The fiends won't give her up

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September 22 2004, 3:05 PM 

(one mouse points a gun at Deniece's head) Come any closer and the "nightingale" gets it!

 
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Oh no you don't!

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September 22 2004, 3:08 PM 

(fights the fiends to knock them down and saves Deniece)

 
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Saved!

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September 22 2004, 3:36 PM 

Merci beacoup, mademoiselle! How can I ever repay you?

 
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Oh.

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September 22 2004, 3:38 PM 

You're welcome madam.

calls Fidget

Fidget! I saved Deniece from Ratigan's henchmice!

 
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Fidget comes just in time

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September 22 2004, 3:43 PM 

Fidget: (rushes to Deniece and embraces her) Niecy, are you alright?

Deniece: I'm alright, Finnius. This young woman saved me.

Fidget: (approaches Deniece's rescuer and shakes her hand) T'anks for savin' my girl, Niecy.

 
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Well.

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September 22 2004, 3:46 PM 

You're welcome my dear Fidget. I suppose that you would like to tell your story, Fidget.

 
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Fidget?

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September 22 2004, 5:29 PM 

Weren't you going to tell me your story?

 
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Fidget's story

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September 22 2004, 7:11 PM 

Fidget: Well, I was thrown into the Thames River by da boss until Niecy flew over and saved me. I caught a bad cold and she was my nurse. I didn't appreciate it at da time. I thought it was embarassin' for a girl to take care of a guy, you know? In fact, I didn't even care about da lady back or anyone back den. However, I was curious to learn about her (I didn't know why). It wasn't until after Niecy's friend died that things took a great big turnaround.
Before I knew it, I ended up going with her to da Rat Trap Saloon to hear her sing AND to a masquerade ball held in Queen Mousetoria's palace (in a BARD's costume!).

Deniece: (gives him a wicked grin) I remember that one very well. You looked really cute in that outfit.

Fidget: (blushing) Well, we did talk a lot too. Da more I learned about her, da more interested I was to learn more. Da more dat happened ... well, I suppose you can guess da rest. Now I plan to marry my little "songbird" of a girlfriend.

Deniece: (playfully slaps his arm) For a pirate, you certainly have a charming way with words, cherie.

Fidget: (winks at her) Anything for my little Niecy.

 
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Well.

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September 22 2004, 7:13 PM 

That's really thoughtful of you.

 
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Fidget blushes

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September 22 2004, 7:28 PM 

Aaw, it's nothin' really ...

 
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But.

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September 22 2004, 7:33 PM 

I bet Ratigan might have poisoned toxins with madness to kill someone when he's being refered a rat. That means Ratigan will go mad and then die of toxins.

 
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Is that so?

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September 22 2004, 7:51 PM 

I'm willing to believe it.

 
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Oh.

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September 22 2004, 7:53 PM 

But it will be.

 
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Oh yeah?

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September 23 2004, 6:32 PM 

I wonder what other death punishments Ratigan uses when being refered to as a rat?

 
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September 23 2004, 6:34 PM 

To make him go mad and then die of toxins perhaps.

 
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Hhmm ...

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September 23 2004, 6:36 PM 

That doesn't surprise me ONE bit.

 
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