He looked around his garden and found an empty place.
He then looked down upon his earth and saw your loving face.
He put his arm's around you and lifted you to rest.
His garden is so beautiful,he alway's take's the best.
He knew that you were suffering,he knew that you were in pain and knew that you would never fully
recover here on earth again.
He saw your path was difficult,he closed your teary eyes,he whispered to you 'peace be thine' and gave you wings to fly.
When we saw you sleeping so calm and free from pain,we would not wish you back to earth to suffer here once again.
It broke our heart's to lose you,but you did not go alone.
For part of us went with you the day you were called home.
Happy Christmas River ,love from one of your many broken hearted fansxxxxxx
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Monkey you never have anything nice to say..all you know how to do is ridicule and belittle people. Get a clue, there's more to life then being miserable. Rioslover i thought your poem was very nice. Merry Christmas!!!!!
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Yeah, lol....seriously! I think you just feel bad because you know yourself that you couldn't write a poem like that.! SHUTUP!
Nice work, my friend! Ay ay ay, I wrote a poem about River at my early River-crush stage! ONLY GOD KNOW'S WHAT HAPPENED TO IT! LOL! Yours is very good though :D
I remember ICU telling me to send it in to the local newspaper for the anniversary of his death! You remember that ICU?
xox
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I am new to the site and I really like it. This poem is was not written by you. It was a nice thought but I have seen that poem on many cards that you get from funeral.
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