now,acustomed on my own,
but i've got my fresh bone,
it slowy burns sweet,
for me a good treat,

now,happy to be with me,
since love vacated not expectedly,
do my dishonest acomplishments ever fail to shove,
total tourture of undying lost love.

now,away from our home where will i will live,
i begin to require beginings time might please give,
monsterously seeking happy and banish intimit inner fowney,
cause theres nothing as unimaginable feeling this desperately lonely.
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good stuff mate, particularly likes the last lines, "monsterously seeking happy and banish intimit inner fowney,
cause theres nothing as unimaginable feeling this desperately lonely". quality.

thanks alot fella,i was uneasy about how it would be recieved,glad now, i've read liked one or two of yours too, cheers.