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December 26 2004 at 11:44 AM
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OK, so this is for one of my Christmas stories in my mega-fanfic "The Baker Street Family Chronicles":

It's X-mas, 1899. The Rat Trap Family Restaurant is holding a Christmas party for all of London.

Evelyn, Auburn, the R.T. Band, & the Little Women (Olivia, Julie, Jane, Gadget, & Eliza) are holding a Holiday Concert as a part of the celebration.

Jiggy (the Juggling Octopus) wants to sing the Hannakuh Song, on account of he's Jewish. But he also has doubts, seeing that some of the British citizens don't care for Jewish animals.

As the Baker Street Family is getting ready for their own Christmas celebrations, they also have to protect Jiggy from the Jew-Haters, an anti-Semitic group who stalks the streets during the holiays, looking for Jewish people to beat up & mug.

They even have a song:

We are the Jew-haters
We're racist & mean
We don't like the Hebrews
They're very unclean

Every Yule morning,
We stalk all the streets
Lookin' for dirty Jew
Lowlives to beat!

We don't spare you mercy
So don't squawk for help
We'll beat you full sore
'Til you're limp as a kelp!

We are the Jew-haters
We hate all the Hebrews
Better run while you can
But you know it's no good!


In time, everyone learns the importance of tolerance.

And the R.T. hosts a wonderful X-mas party.

What do you think? Any suggestions or comments?

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Uh MA?

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December 28 2004, 8:45 AM 

What does that board for?

 
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December 28 2004, 3:04 PM 

If you're planning on making a fanfic, you come here to get ideas, give others suggestions, stuff like that.

Got what I'm saying?

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"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." - Oscar Wilde

"One's style is one's signature always." - Oscar Wilde

"If Irene doesn't find out the truth & forgive me for certain incidents, I'll just DIE!!" - Me

Witty Sayings By Me:

The only way to understand Asperger's Syndrome is to HAVE Asperger's Syndrome.

Fantasy & fiction are real, & reality is fiction. That is the doctrine of life as it truly is.

People who say certain things are "fictional" actually believe they exist, but don't want to admit it.

Attention is 1% nagging, & 99% bragging.

When I was 15, I didn't give a darn about school. At 16, I want to pass in everything. That is how much I have matured.

I have watched baby cartoons my whole life, & no one has laughed at me.

I like broccoli; other kids hate it. I guess I AM a tad unusual.

 
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(Login Mar3o)

Uh.

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December 28 2004, 3:05 PM 

All right.

 
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OK...

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December 29 2004, 9:10 AM 

So what do you think of my story idea?

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"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." - Oscar Wilde

"One's style is one's signature always." - Oscar Wilde

"If Irene doesn't find out the truth & forgive me for certain incidents, I'll just DIE!!" - Me

Witty Sayings By Me:

The only way to understand Asperger's Syndrome is to HAVE Asperger's Syndrome.

Fantasy & fiction are real, & reality is fiction. That is the doctrine of life as it truly is.

People who say certain things are "fictional" actually believe they exist, but don't want to admit it.

Attention is 1% nagging, & 99% bragging.

When I was 15, I didn't give a darn about school. At 16, I want to pass in everything. That is how much I have matured.

I have watched baby cartoons my whole life, & no one has laughed at me.

I like broccoli; other kids hate it. I guess I AM a tad unusual.

 
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Ok how about this for an idea.

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August 14 2007, 9:14 PM 

I have one of one of your other ones. It is they met the Mouse family the other crime fighting family. But Laura is missing but the Baker Street Family know where she is. And they all go looking for her. They find her at Mouses hideout because he took her so she could marry him. But she keeps saying now. But he tries this time by saying that he will try to hurt her family if she doesn't agree to it this time. I had thought of a song she could sing in it. Have you heard of How would I live. She is singing it while thinking of the good times she had with her family and when she first met James and how their life began. So what do you think of it M A

 
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Ok hwo about this for an idea.

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August 15 2007, 9:55 AM 

Hi did you get my message of the idea I had of the baker street family maating the Mouse family in your B S F C. If you haven't then I will tell you again.

 
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Ok hwo about this for an idea.

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August 15 2007, 10:30 AM 

Hi did you get my message of the idea I had of the baker street family maating the Mouse family in your B S F C. If you haven't then I will tell you again.

 
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