Well DONE! It's been a good couple of years since I read a Blouse Ripper! And I have to say yours is shaping up to be one of the best I remember! I read for mental stimulation - and I come from a time when one took entertainment from books and listening to stories, having images drawn on the canvas of the mind inpsired by the words and tone set by the story teller. You write this tale in a seventies and eighties style, when authors had begun to evolve from the "fade to black" style in a romantic or sexual scene - and I LOVE it! Spinning the sexual encounter by setting the scene, showing JUST enough skin that we know what is coming, and bringing us to the act itself without over telling it! TEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
Seriously, Lisa - you MAKE us use our minds' eye . . . to complete the picture you painted!
As I said before, I have never pictured Kevin Nash as a pirate, or in this era - I'd always seen him . . . futuristic or like Mad Max, I guess because of the comics that were patterened after him. I now can't get enough of having him cast as he is in this tale!
What a treat you've given me!
