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Esteban and Maria flew on a private jet plane going to a private island. Maria was so amazed with Esteban’s surprised. The island has a huge house facing the beach; it is similar to a Chateau in Italy. The house was designed for couples who are having their honeymoon or for a private party for rich people.
Maria: Esteban…this is wonderful.
Esteban: Did you like it?
Maria: Si, mucho…
Esteban: Let’s go inside, so that you can see my surprise.
Maria: Maybe, when we get inside I could not breathe anymore with so much happiness. I’m very much fascinated now.
At the middle of the house is a spacious living room full of red tulip flowers.
Maria: Wow!!! Mi amor…(crying with happiness) I never been happy as like this.
Maria looked around and felt a constant happiness and satisfaction.
Maria: Mi amor…gracias..it’s wonderful, but why did you buy this huge number of flowers?
Esteban moved closer to her and embraced her at her back and started to smell her hair and planted little kisses on her nape. Maria likes it whenever Esteban gradually waken up her longingness to him.
Esteban: We’ve been married for more than three years and I seldom give you flowers. I want to make up with those days that I never given you flowers.
Maria: You don’t have to mi amor…your love is enough to me.
Esteban: No..I want to give everything to you mi amor whatever it will cause me. I want to show how much I love you.
Maria: I feel very secured in your arms…you’re my everything Esteban...te amo…tanto…tanto…tanto.
He answered her with his passionate kisses.
Esteban slowly pushed Maria.
Maria: Que te pasa mi amor? You don’t like it?
Esteban: I love it! You know how much I’m addicted to your kisses, but I want to reserve it later.
Maria knew that he was planning for a more intimate one.
Esteban: This time I want to savor every minute, every hour and up to our last day here. I will do everything to make you happy and I make sure that you won’t forget this vacation.
Maria: aermm..I feel nervous for whatever activities you planned in this vacation. You are full of surprises mi amor…no wonder why lots of women are running after you.
Esteban: You just have to bear that you marry the most handsome and attractive man in Mexico.
Maria: and so you really like it when these women run after you!? (a bit annoyed)
Esteban: Si.
Maria was getting angry.
Maria: So you admit it that you like them!!!?
Esteban: No, I just like seeing you jealous, just like now.
Maria: I’m not jealous!
Esteban: Yes, you are.
Maria: No! (she closed her ears with her hands)
Esteban; Mi amor don’t be such a kid. Only Charina do it.
Maria: If you continue teasing me, better I’ll go back to the city.
Esteban broke up into a huge laugh.
Maria: Is there something funny? I mean it Esteban! I’ll go back to the city if you won’t stop!
Esteban just continue laughing and Maria got really annoyed and started to walk away.
Esteban: Don’t runaway mi amor!
Maria: Leave me alone!
Esteban: Mi amor come back. (he’s not bothered)
Maria: You just told me that you will everything for me and now you’re annoying me. Is it part of your plan!? (still walking towards the door)
Esteban sat on the couch and yawned and pretended that he was sleeping.
Maria looked at him before she opened the door.
Maria: How dare you bring me here if you just torment me Esteban San Roman!
Esteban knows when Maria is really furious-she mentions his whole name.
Esteban: Don’t take it seriously mi amor…actually I just love seeing you get angry…you look more beautiful and seductive when you are angry.
Maria: Whatever!!!! I hate you Esteban!!!
Esteban: Mi amor..come back here!
Maria: No!!! You’ll dead to me as soon as we get back to the city.
Esteban laugh again.
Maria: arrhhhhhh….
She’s really furious.
Esteban: do you think you can go back to the city?
Maria: and why not!?
Esteban laugh again- a laugh that made her really pissed of.
Esteban stood up and just try to calm Maria.
Esteban: Remember, we are the only two people in this island and no one else. The only way you can get out here is through plane or boat, but sad to say they left already. The jetplane that brought us here will come back after five days to pick us up, so you are my captive Senora San Roman. (he smiled seductively)
Maria: I hate you!
Esteban: so if you want to get back to the city start swimming now.
Maria: Ok. I’ll swim (and she run towards the beach)
Esteban knew that Maria is not joking, so he run after her.
Esteban: Mi amor come back!!! I’m so sorry it’s only a joke and beside you were the one started it. Mariaaaaa…
He ran as fast as he could to catch her.
Will this be a disaster honeymoon or full of passion? Hi hi hi
I ENJOYED YOUR STORY,HOWEVER THIS CHAPTER IS VERY SHORT!!!
DO NOT DELAY MUCH FOR PUTTING CONTINUED BECAUSE IS SUPER INTERESTING TRAVEL IN ESTEBAN AND MARIA!
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SAIOA (no login) 79.154.243.19
Re: La Madrastra Martir cap. 39
November 5 2009, 11:45 AM
ME ENCANTA SIGUELA PRONTO
Yana (no login) 124.120.7.2
Re: La Madrastra Martir cap. 39
November 5 2009, 2:05 PM
Hola, I just decided to post this one though it's quite short I don't want you to wait too long. I'm very busy nowadys due to work and studies, so I might not be able to post asap, but I'll try my best. I promise that I will finish the chapter. I won't leaving you hanging, waiting for the ending. Te lo prometo hi hi hi (i hope my grammar is correct)
MARLY (no login) 189.115.248.252
Re: La Madrastra Martir cap. 39
November 5 2009, 4:49 PM
YANA
STUDY AND WORK ALWAYS FIRST! ALSO STEP BY THIS!
WE LOOK FORWARD TO CALM HISTORY WITH GREAT PLEASURE!
GREETINGS FROM BRAZIL
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Yana (no login) 125.24.210.87
Re: La Madrastra Martir cap. 39
November 5 2009, 9:22 PM
Hola, thanks for keeping track on my imaginaria. I never know that all of you come from different place in South America. Nadia is from Argentina, Marly is from Brazil and I don't know the others. I'm so much overwelmed with your commetns and it drives me to write more, but I have loads of work to do, so I have to continue it only whenever I have time.