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La Madrastra Martir cap. 40

November 7 2009 at 3:06 AM
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Chapter 40

Esteban and Maria chased each other along the shore. Maria was really pissed off and did not want to go back to the house. She took off her shoes so that she can run properly on a sandy soil.

Esteban: Maria por favor..don’t ruin this vacation. I was only joking please perdoname if I said silly things.

Maria: You know that I really hate when you mention your mujeres

Esteban: Mi amor…I don’t care how many women would fall inlove to me, my heart is only yours and no one can take out your place in my heart.

Maria: Can you blame me if I become sensitive with your jokes!

Maria walked slowly she was a bit tired of running away from him.

Esteban: I know…I know…but please let’s go back to the house and let’s forget about it okay. This is our vacation I want it to be special.

Maria: No…

Esteban: Maria don’t let me lose my patience…

Maria: lose your patience or not I’m not coming back unless you really mean it!

Esteban: mean what?

Maria: that you won’t find another woman and you don’t pay attention to those who are lingering around you!

Esteban: Maria por favor how many times do I need to say that I don’t care about them!!? (a bit irritated already)

Maria: You don’t mean it…

Esteban: Mariaaaaaaaa…if you don’t wanna come back then fine! I won’t ruin my vacation here. (he turned his back and walked towards the house it is his strategy to for he knows Maria will not really dare to swim)

Maria shouted in pain…

Esteban turned back to find out what happened to her.

Maria sat on the sand and cried in pain. Esteban ran towards her.

Esteban: Que pasa mi amor???

Esteban saw blood coming out of Maria’s right sole.

Maria: It really hurt I think I stepped on a dead shell.

Esteban: Let me see?

Esteban saw the shell that stuck at Maria’s sole. He took it out slowly while Maria shouted in pain.

Maria: Slowly please…it hurts a lot. (crying like Charina)

Maria did not complain anymore when Esteban carried her. He laid her on the huge and comfy bed. Maria did not notice the beauty of the room because of the pain. The wound was quite deep and bloody. Esteban cleaned it. Maria just watched Esteban while he’s cleaning her wound. He put a bandage on it to avoid infection.

Maria: Gracias mi amor…I’m so sorry..I acted like a stupid teenager.

Esteban: No…I knew how it feels when you are jealous. I’m also jealous when someone is eyeing you.

Maria covered his mouth.

Maria: Let’s not talk about it.

Esteban: Si. How do you feel now?

Maria: still hurts, but the pain is a little lesser.

Esteban: Good.

Maria yawned.

Esteban: Are you tired?

Maria: Si.

Esteban: Okay Senora. Just take a rest while I’m preparing my other surprise for you.

Maria: What is it?

Esteban: ha no…I’ll just wake you up when it’s done. (he winked and gave her a kiss)

Maria felt asleep while Esteban busied himself with his surprises. He wanted to make sure that Maria would really enjoy this vacation; he wanted to make her happy as much as he could, to make up with those days that he was really mean to her.

Maria woke up with the soft kiss of Esteban.

Esteban: Wake up mi amor…

Maria: What time is it?

Esteban: It’s time for you to wake up my queen.

Maria just looked at him and studied his face.

Esteban: Do I have dirt on my face?

Maria held his face.

Maria: Gracias mi amor…(she kissed him softly, Esteban responded to it)

Esteban: Mi amor…let’s go down I hope you will like my next surprise.

Maria: I’m so consumed with all these surprises.

Esteban: Until the last day of our vacation you will still receive surprises.

Esteban stood up and gave his hand, the moment Maria stood up she shouted in pain.

Maria: ouchhh…

Maria forgot that her right foot has a bandage.

Esteban carried him downstairs. Maria saw the table set for two, the dining room is dimlight.

Maria: What is it?

Esteban: a special dinner ala Esteban San Roman.

Maria: Did you cook all of this?

Esteban: Si…specially for you.

Maria: I didn’t know that you can cook.

Esteban: I practiced just for you.

Maria: Ohhh your so sweet mi amor. Whatever the tastes are-I will eat all f these.

Esteban: you won’t regret it.

They had a wonderful dinner. They talked about the children, their conflicts at times, their sentiments and their love for each other.

Esteban move closer to her and held her hand.

Esteban: Mi amor…I’m so consumed with your love.

Maria: Me too. I’ve never been so much in love like this in my life.

Esteban: Te amo Maria…te amor con todo mi corazon.

Maria: I know how much you tried to make up with all the pains we had before and I you don’t have to prove more how much you love me.

Esteban: I want to do everything for you. I don’t wanna see you crying, lonely and suffer. I will protect you and treat you like a delicate crystal.

Maria: hay…I don’t know what to say more mi amor…

Esteban: You don’t have to say anything…just kiss me…

Maria gave her the best kiss she could ever give him.

Since Maria couldn’t walk properly, so Esteban carried her at the middle of the spacious living room. He played the music and they danced slowly. He held her tightly and she rest on his chest. They just dance listen to each others heartbeats, until the music stopped.

Esteban looked at her.

Esteban: mi amor…you are God’s gift to me.

Maria: and so you are…

They ended up in the huge room. Esteban slowly undressed her while he planted kisses on her shoulder, nape and chest. This was how Esteban awaken her sensation. Maria did the same thing until both of them were naked. The linen curtain was blocking the rays of the moonlight that made the room more romantic. The smells of the scented candles add intimacy and the soft white bed sheets were very inviting. Esteban slowly laid her on the bed without glancing at her eyes because his lip was busy kissing her whole body. Maria’s hands explore his back and felt the little sensation that she used to have whenever they make love. Esteban was doing a new trick, Maria just let him explore for whatever it was. She just trusted herself to him and totally submerged to a new sensation that filled them both. She could not explain the feeling, their body talked and no words came out except to the moan that escaped from them, until they reached the final sensation. Maria just let him stayed on her top-listening to his heartbeats; there was a long moment of silence. Esteban held him on his chest.

Esteban: that was marvelous mi amor…

Maria: gracias mi amor…(she move closer to him and let her feel his warm body)

They slept peacefully without any worries about to the love they have to each other.

It was indeed a night full of passion and love- of two souls who became one-united with their love and bonded with promises.

Maria woke up early; she took a glanced of Esteban who comfortably sleeping like a Greek god. She move towards her and gave her a soft kiss. She covered her naked body with the thin sheet of bed sheet and stood up. She went inside the bathroom to fix herself. Then, she went downstairs carefully as she did not want to hurt her right foot due to her wound. She prepared their breakfast. She was singing her favourite love song as she done the table. Someone at her back grab her.

Maria: Ouchhh…

Esteban: Mi amor…your such a kid.

Maria: You almost step on my right foot.

Esteban: Sorry…(he embraces her and gave her little kisses while Maria finishes the pancakes)

Esteban: Hmmmppp..smells terrific, but I won’t exchange you to my breakfast.

Maria: What are you thinking?

Esteban: You and me in the kitchen…

Maria: No way…

Esteban: why not?

Maria: We just done it last night aren’t you tired?

Esteban: I don’t feel tired making love to you.

Maria: mi amor…I want to explore this place, let’s go out and enjoy the beach.

Esteban: Later after we did it here.

Maria: No! Bueno Senor San Roman have a seat and enjoy my breakfast ala Maria.

Maria served with fruits and pancakes together with the orange juice she squeezed.

Esteban: I’m lovin this breakfast ala Maria can you prepare my breakfast every morning?

Maria: No!

Esteban: Why not?

Maria: If I’ll prepare the breakfast every morning you might fired Transito in her job.

Esteban: ha ha ha …

Maria took a seat and enjoyed her breakfast, too.

Maria: I wondered how the kids doing now.

Esteban: Don’t think about them. Just enjoy our time here.

Maria: I’m just wondering why they haven’t called.

Esteban: I gave them a long talked before we left.

Maria: What did you tell them?

Esteban: I told them that I don’t wanna be disturb when I’m with my beautiful wife and if someone dared to call us he/she will get what he/she deserved.

Maria: ha ha ha..your so mean.

Esteban: I’m not mean.

Maria: yes you are.

Esteban: here we go again…

Maria: Oye mi amor vamos…be quick!

Esteban: porque?

Maria: pleaseeee…I just want to go to the beach.

Esteban: wait I’m still enjoying my breakfast ala Maria.

Maria: ha ha ha..ok I’ll just go up and take a bath.

Esteban: No espera…

Esteban quickly stood and carried her up to their bathroom. He slowly untied her bathrobe and started to touch her delicate skin. He pushed her on the bathroom wall under the shower. Maria took his pyjamas, too, they’re both naked now and slowly join their body into one. Maria just held him while Esteban did everything under the shower.

After a passionate bath the two decided to go the beach. Esteban wore a white linen polo and pants while Maria wore her long white strapless dress that really suited the weather and the place.

They were walking along the beach holding each others hands. They did not notice that they have walk that far already.

Maria: I love this place Esteban. It’s very peaceful and quite. I wish we could live here forever.

Esteban: If only we can. (he smiled seductively)

Maria: Maybe the owner of this island is romantic.

Esteban: How did you know?

Maria: because this place is very romantic even the house. Maybe the owner is so inlove with his wife and he thought of making this place an escapade for them. Whoever that woman is-she’s very lucky for having a romantic husband like him.
Estaben just held her tightly.

Esteban: I agree with you and the husband is so lucky too for having a beautiful wife, too.

Maria looked at him.

Maria: How did you know that her wife is beautiful? Do you know her, did you meet her or maybe she’s…(esteban held face and sealed her lips with a kiss)
After the long kiss, Esteban looked at her for about a minute. Maria was waiting on what he would say to her.

Maria: Why are you staring me like that?

Esteban: I know that woman and she’s really beautiful. Oh God I remembered the first time I saw her. She was really mad at me. She hated me and even cursed me to death because I force her to marry me, but she did not know that I was really madly, deeply in love to her.

Maria could not utter any words. She opened her mouth but no words came out. She was totally shock!

Esteban: and he named this island only for her…do you wanna know the name of this island?

Maria just nodded her head because she’s still speechless.

Esteban: the romantic husband named this Island “Maria’s Paradise.”

Finally, Maria was able to utter the words.

Maria: Mi amor…are you serious?

Esteban: This Island is the sign of my love for you.

Maria: te amo..te amo tea mo….mi amor

They had a long passionate kiss at the middle of the seashore. Maria was overwhelmed with Esteban’s surprises and this was the great one.

 
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SAIOA
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Re: La Madrastra Martir cap. 40

November 7 2009, 6:00 AM 

ME ENCANTA, SOLO FALTA EL BEBE
SIGUELA CUANTO ANTES

 
 

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Re: La Madrastra Martir cap. 40

November 7 2009, 7:01 AM 

Wowowo esta genial este capitulo ... y si solo falta el bebe jiji
Siguela prontoo

 
 
MARLY
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Re: La Madrastra Martir cap. 40

November 11 2009, 7:04 AM 

BEAUTFULL THE CHAPTER!!
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HOPE THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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