Great job MRM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can't wait for part 4.

You have a definite feel for each character. It's as though I'm watching an episode.

KUDOS!!!!!

Donna M

Oh my goodness MRM please hurry with that fourth installment!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You left me hanging. It's an AWESOME string of fics so far and I'm loving every bit of it.

Right on MRM!!!!

Fran:I'm going to my mother's!
Max:Don't bother I'm sleeping on the couch!
Fran:If we're splitting up, I get Niles!
Max:You couldn't afford him!
Fran:Not on what you pay me!

WONDERFUL story MRM! I'm lovin it!! Keep on writing, you got the gift!!





Sylvia: "Let's go. You've gotta get out now."
Fran: "But, Ma, we have two minutes left!"
Sylvia: "Trust me, there is only one man who can satisfy a woman in two minutes: Colonel Sanders."

You've done it again my sister!! Loved, loved, loved it!

Jo<><

Max: Miss Fine, what would you think about a 5 mile hike up a mountain in Maui, then a helicopter ride over an active volcano?
Fran: Throw in a barium enema, and I'm there!!

I loved that one! Keep them coming! I can't wait until next week!

<3Danielle

"Oy Gevald I'm so Ferklempt that I could plotz!"

I loved part 3!
I thought you did a great job with the dialogue, especially between Max and the kids.