Jill,

You've out done yourself yet again my friend! All I've got to say is....Next! Bring on part 2 You've done your homework young lady. I'm sure the Vortexians are going to love this Story as well as the FR-AX fans. So, job well done..are you setting back with a glass of whatever relaxing? If not, pour yourself a nice glass and enjoy.

Cheers,

LeAnne

I just read parts 1 and 2 of Their Hearts Desire. Outstanding!!!!!
I love this story. Being a proud "Vortexian", I particularly enjoyed part 2.

Thanks for the great story and I am looking forward to Part 3.

TeriS

Wow, can't find a better word to describe it! keep writing I would say

Jill,

This story is very impressive. Like the others, I cannot wait for part three to be posted. I love how you have taken the characters of Maxwell, Fran, Niles and CC and placed them in a different time in history, yet kept them so true to who they are as we know them. Of course, what can be said about dear Cook. I would have loved to have seen her character in the actual TV series. Max could have used a loving mother-figure on his side from time to time. Cook is just wonderful. And trusty Paxton, always keeping Niles informed of CC and watching out for her. A wonderful job indeed. Keep up the good work. I am waiting with baited breath for part three!!!!

Dee

loved this story so much, love the setting, love the way the chacrcters are drawn to suit the time frame, if it says anything, then you are really a great writer jill :D can't wait for part three, don't keep us waiting too long ))

It's not Jill, she's had the whole thing to me since the beginning. It's me. I was out of town again this past weekend, so the update is running late. But I just posted the final part of Jill's story for you all to enjoy!



-Barb-

Jilll, those 2 parts are terrific! I love your style and the way you discribe things, we don't have the tv screen there so we need your help to picture the characters, what they do, where they are... and you bet I can picture Niles being so... himself (I guess you all know what I mean) and CC so beautiful in those huge dresses. I usually don't pay attention to other characters BUT your Paxton is also terrific (did I already use terrific?). Can't wait for the last part.
And in a more general way let me say I'm so happy with this place which keeps the nanny (for both F/M/N/CC fans) alive. Take care. Lo.

its so pleasant to have news fics to read!! especially when they are this great! i can' t wait for the third part! THANK YOU JILL!!!!!!!!!!

Jill,

Bravo! Wonderful as always. I think I'm going to my mom's to get some of her trashy romance books and send them to you to keep you going. WOW! I loved the extra detail with the clothing and surroundings. All the characters were spot on. Cook, well she is my favorite and I LOVE her!!

Well, you've done it again, kept me on the edge of my seat wondering & hoping as to what was coming next. So, BRAVO!! my friend! Bravo!

Cheers,

LeAnne

Jill,

I just finished part three yesterday. I must say, I was not disappointed. This is a wonderful story. You kept everything right within the "era" and everything worked together beautifully. I loved this story and would love to see a sequel to this as Fran and Max and CC and Niles' lives progress. The babies growing up, the older children's lives progressing. Who knows?! With your imagination and such a great foundation this story provides, I am sure you will outdo yourself if you choose to write an addition. Again, thank you for this wonderful story. It was awesome.

Dee

You need a standing ovatation for your story. It is such an outstanding read!! I agree with the other comments. I loved that you keep it relevant to the period, yet remained true to Max, Fran. Niles and CC, as well as incorporating other Nanny characters. I also fell in love with Cook and Paxton. They were wonderful original characters.
Thank you so much for such a GREAT, GREAT story!!!
TeriS

Hey there!
First of all:
Jill, you did an awesome job!
I loved this old-fashioned story! But I also liked the introduction in the present tense so I would have loved to read more about that as well. How they would awake and so on. But perhaps you didn't want that so it's all okay to me!
Keep on writing, I'm sure you have numerous ideas!
Greetings, Sarah