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Chapter 1:Demon School
Hi, I’m James this is the story about my life. Well I live in the Demon World; the Demon World is a world where demons and half demons live. Half demons are half human and half demon; what I mean is that on a new moon half-breeds change into full humans and when half-breeds get really angry they change into full demon. Half-breed is just a fancy word for half human and half demons. I have 3 friends Naythan, Kagome, Sango, and Shippo. Naythan is strong and has very high defense and average speed, but doesn’t have a weapon. Shippo is weak in strength and defense, but excels in speed, Shippo doesn’t have a weapon. Kagome is a human girl from the human world she is weak in strength and defense and speed, her weapon is Bows and Arrows. What I mean by Kagome coming from the human world is that there is a secret well in the Demon World that is connected to the human world and only humans can use the well. Sango is also a human girl, but trained in the Demon World. She is average in strength, defense, and speed, Her weapon is a boomerang called Hiraikotsu sometimes she also brings her cat friend named Kirara into battle. Kirara is a small cat demon that can transform into a bigger cat demon that can fly. My strength is about average, I have a weak defense, and my speed is very high, my weapon is a sword called Ten Commandments. Ten Commandments can change into 10 forms: regular, explosion, fire, water, darkness, thunder, grass, hurricane, zombie, and soul absorption. There is this legendary sword that everyone wants to get there claws on it is the Tetsusaiga. In addition, everyone wants to get fragments of the Shikon Jewel. The Shikon Jewel is rarer then any jewel in the whole entire Demon World. Even if you get 1 fragment of the jewel, you can have infinite life.
It was the first day of Demon High School. James was waiting in front of my class for the bell to ring, but James soon got bored so James took a tour of the school. The battletop was divided into 3 sections. In the far left part of the battletop was a section with earth-type robot demons, in the middle of the battletop, there were a section of thunder-type robot demons, and in the far right corner, there was a row of classes. Only a few feet away from the classes, there is a barrier that only half- breeds can get through. When James was going to check the battlegrounds. James bumped into his 2 friends Naythan and Shippo. “Oh, sorry.” said James. “It doesn’t matter………Hey it’s you James I’m glad we’re in the same school together. Whose class are you in”, said Shippo. “Mr.Kazuki’s class. Do you want to go see the battlegrounds?” said James. “Sure” said Naythan and Shippo. The group got to the battletop just before the bell rung. The group got to class just before the teacher got to class. Everyone rushed inside the class eager to see where they sit. James sat in the middle desk to his right was Naythan and to his left was Sango, next to Sango was Kagome, next to Naythan was Shippo. “Class is in session!” said the teacher. “Well my name is Mr.Kazuki. Today’s lesson will be honing your fighting skill. This lesson is a tournament; the first part of the tourney is the most vigorous. I will randomly pick a half-breed to go against the whole class except your row. The second part is when you face your row and the third part is when you go up against 1 other champions resembling their class. Now I pick the half-breed who is wearing the Fire Rat cloak and the Fire Rat pants and who has long silver hair,” said Mr.Kazuki. “Who me?” answered Naythan. “ Yes you… Excuse me I don’t think I got your name” said Mr.Kazuki. “Oh it’s Naythan,” said Naythan. Naythan fought vigorously and won the first part of the tournament. “Naythan has won the first part of the tourney,” exclaimed Mr.Kazuki. “Now I will pick a half-breed to go up against Naythan.I pick the kid who is wearing the long dark blue cloak and has short- black hair” said Mr.Kazuki.“Oh I’m James,” said James. Naythan and James put up a treacherous fight that left bystanders gasping at every move. “It’s time to finish this,” said James. “Fat chance” said Naythan. James then thrust his sword forward. Naythan then quickly dodged the attack, pulled James closer, and used the Backlash Wave Punch. James slammed into the North wall and creating a dent in the wall. “James is unable to battle, Naythan wins the battle” said Mr.Kazuki. “Next is the girl that has black hair and who has the Bow and Arrows” said Mr.Kazuki. “I’m Kagome” said Kagome blissfully. Kagome started off by shooting 5 sacred arrows at Naythan.1 of them pinned Naythan to a wall then Kagome ran up and started punching Naythan in face a couple times. “This is easier then I thought” said Kagome. Then Naythan pulled the arrow out of his body and used Iron Reaver Soul Stealer on Kagome. “ Kagome is unable to battle,Naythan wins the battle” said Mr.Kazuki. “Next up is the girl who has the large boomerang and has long black hair. “Oh, I am Sango” said Sango cheerfully. Sango started using her Hiraikotsu on Naythan. The boomerang hit Naythan, then Naythan used an extraordinary attack on Sango first he smothered his claws with blood and used his skill Blades of Blood on Sango.Before the attack hit her, Sango quickly blocked the attack with her Hiraikotsu. Sango then took out her sword and slashed at Naythan. Then Naythan used his Iron Reaver Soul Stealer on Sango’s back. Sango had a deep gash in her back. “I…I surrender” said Sango. “Naythan wins the battle, next up is the kid who is little and has a bow in his hair” said Mr. Kazuki. “ I’m not little and my name is Shippo”, said Shippo. Shippo started off using his Fox Fire technique, but it didn’t affect Naythan. Naythan then used Iron Reaver Soul Stealer on Shippo. “What’s this Naythan actually K.O’ed Shippo,Naythan wins the battle” said Mr.Kazuki. “Before the finals there will be a 30 minute break” said Mr.Kazuki. After Mr.Kazuki said that a crowd of girls crowded around James asking for his autograph. “Ladies, Ladies calm down” said James. James then stepped out of the crowd to go see Naythan. “Congratulations Naythan” said Kagome.“ Why did you have to use your Backlash Wave Punch on James!” said Sango angrily. “ Why would you even think of caring for that weakling” said Naythan. “Hey Naythan turn around” said James. Right when Naythan turned around James punched Naythan in the face. “ I’ll never forgive you for what you said about me being weak because I’m not” said James. “ I’m with James,” said Sango. “ The final match is about to start will all participants and spectators proceed to the battletop,” said Mr.Kazuki. “We’ll finish this after I’m the champion,” said Naythan. Naythan, James, Sango, and Kagome all proceeded to the arena. “It’s the final round of the tournament. Naythan will now vs. wha.. what’s this it’s Naythan vs. his older brother Sesshoumaru” said Mr.Kazuki. Naythan started off using his Iron Reaver. Sesshoumaru effortlessly dodged the attack and ran toward Naythan very fast and used his Poison Claws on Naythan. Naythan then took out the Ten Commandments and slashed at Sesshoumaru. “Thanks for the sword James.” said Naythan. “Hey what!” said James. James then rushed into battle and used Iron Reaver on Naythan. Naythan then dropped Ten Commandments and James picked it up. “Ten Commandments, hurricane!” said James. James’ sword turned pure white. “Dance of The Dragon” said James. 3 enormous hurricanes came out of James’ sword and hit Sesshoumaru and Naythan. Sesshoumaru then took out his sword Tokijin and slashed at Naythan. Naythan used Backlash Wave Punch on Sesshoumaru. Sesshoumaru then turned into his demon form; a huge white dog. Sesshoumaru then bit Naythan. Naythan then knelt down and the south wind blew his eyes turned fiery red, his pupils became slits of purple, and his claws became sharper than usual. “Naythan turned into a full fledged demon everyone run!!” yelled Mr.Kazuki. Sesshoumaru reverted to his normal form and fled. Naythan then ran into the crowd and started slaughtering innocent half-breeds. Naythan then snuck up behind Sango and was about to use Backlash Wave Punch on her, but right before the blast hit her James ran in and took the full blow of the Backlash Wave Punch. Naythan then went and slaughtered more half-breeds. “ Are you okay?” asked Sango. “ Yeah I’m okay”, answered James. “ Lets go check on Kagome,” said Sango. James and Sango then rushed over to where Kagome was hiding from Naythan. “ Are you okay?” asked James. “ Yes I am. How can we stop Naythan?” asked Kagome. “ You can, if you haven’t noticed Naythan likes you,” said Sango. “ Really, I never knew that” said Kagome blushing slightly. James, Sango, and Kagome all ran to Naythan. Kagome then slowly walked toward Naythan. “Don’t come near me Kagome”, said Naythan. Kagome ignored Naythan’s warning, she then ran and embraced him. Naythan then returned to his original form. “ What happened?” said Naythan. “ You turned into demon”, answered Kagome. “ What!!” said Naythan. “She’s right, you did turn into a demon and slaughtered hundreds of innocent half-breeds. You almost killed Sango too. Now you’re going to pay with your life!!” said James. “ James you are in no condition to fight” said Sango. “ But, he almost killed you and me” said James. “Yeah I know, but I wouldn’t want you dead on my behalf” said Sango. “ This time you’re lucky Naythan “said James. James and Sango walked away. “ The Winner’s Ceremony is about to begin” said Mr.Kazuki. Naythan then rushed to the ceremony. “ Naythan for winning the tournament you get crowned toughest half-breed in this school also you get this one of a kind Ultima Sword” said Mr.Kazuki.
Chapter 2: The Battle
The next morning before school started James and Naythan decided to battle each other on the field. The field is a place where half-breeds can battle each other. “ Now it’s time to finish this” said James. James then ran toward Naythan. Then Naythan took out his sword quickly guarded against James’ attack. “Ten Commandments fire!” yelled James. James’ sword glowed bright red. James then charged towards Naythan. Naythan then guarded against the attack, but James jumped over Naythan and slashed his back. After the attack, Naythan was stunned. James then ran behind Naythan and stabbed him in the back. “Wh…why didn’t you kill me when you had the chance” staggered Naythan. “It would of made my victory all too easy. In addition, I get to see you die in pain. Ten Commandments zombie!” said James. The sword turned midnight black. “ Zombies of the underworld bring pain and suffering to this pitiful half-breed” said James. Then zombies came out of the ground and started feeding upon Naythan’s body. “How does it feel Naythan this is the pain you wrought upon me and Sango” jeered James. “Ten Commandments explosion!” yelled James. The sword turned smoke gray. James then swung his sword down hard on Naythan’s body and the zombies. The blast created an explosion that destroyed zombies and did massive damage. “Fool, I told you that you’d pay with your life,” said James. Then James walked away. Later in the morning while James was waiting for Sango, Kagome walked up to James and asked, “ Where is Naythan”. “On the field” answered James. Kagome then went to the field and saw Naythan lying there not moving at all. Kagome rushed to Naythan. “ Naythan!! Naythan!! yelled Kagome. Tears started welling up in Kagome’s eyes. Kagome then started sobbing uncontrollably. Meanwhile Sango walks up to James. Then James explained everything that happened, to Sango. Sango and James then started spying on Kagome and Naythan. While Kagome was crying, Naythan regained consciousness and sat upright and then Kagome hugged Naythan. “ I thought you were dead. I was so worried about you” said Kagome. “It’s okay Kagome I’m fine” said Naythan. “You’re fine. Look at yourself, you’re drenched in blood and you have a deep gash in you’re back. Who did this to you” asked Kagome. “ James did, to avenge what I did to Sango in the tournament. I’m going to look for him” said Naythan. “ I going too” said Kagome. “No, it’s too dangerous. James is ruthless and strong” replied Naythan. “ Well, maybe he’ll be dazed by my girlish looks” answered Kagome. “ Yeah right, I guess you can come though” said Naythan. After Sango and James heard that, they told Kirara to transform and then they got on her. Kirara started flying, but was struck down by an arrow. Kirara changed back into her small form and James and Sango started falling. An arrow and an Iron Reaver hit James. James got on the ground first and caught Sango. “ Sango are you okay?” asked James. “Yeah, I’m fine”, answered Sango. “ Sango you take Kagome and I’ll take Naythan,” said James. “Naythan, let’s play a little game of follow the leader and I’m the leader,” asked James. “ Fine” replied Naythan. James then ran quickly and Naythan followed him. Meanwhile Kagome and Sango were fighting one on one. Sango used here Hiraikotsu on Kagome and successfully hit Kagome. Sango then took out her sword and stabbed Kagome in the stomach. “ I give,” said Kagome weakly. Meanwhile James was battling Naythan. “ Ten Commandments fire!” yelled James. James’s sword turned bright red. Naythan then ran toward James, but James dodged the move and countered with his on move Circle of Hades. A medium sized circle of flames surrounded Naythan and James then the circle turned into a tower of flames that engulfed Naythan and James, but didn’t affect James. After the attack, James slashed Naythan a couple time. “ Naythan you can’t win against me I am the greatest swordsmen alive” said James. “ That’s what you think James, but one day I will be stronger and I feel that day will come soon,” said Naythan. Then the bell rang Brrring! Brrring! “You’re yet again lucky,” said James. James and the group went to class.
Chapter 3: The Plan
Later that night Kagome was talking to Shippo who was released from the hospital. Kagome told Shippo everything that happened at school and asked him for his help in getting Naythan and James back together as friends. “ Shippo the plan is that you hack into the schools computer database and make all the robots on the battletop only target me and Sango only. Also make their difficulty level exceedingly high,” said Kagome. “ I hack into the schools computer and make all the robots difficulty level go exceedingly high and only attack you and Sango. Got it,” said Shippo. “ Good, I’ll call Sango and tell her the plan,” said Kagome. Then Shippo and Kagome hung up the phone. Early the next morning at school James Naythan heard loud cries for help. They immediately knew it was Kagome an Sango; both of them quickly ran towards the sound. When they both arrived at the battletop, they started fighting with each other. “ James why don’t you go save your girlfriend” sneered Naythan. “ She’s not my girlfriend,” replied James. “ Guys, quit fighting and help us out!” yelled Sango. “ Grr, I’m only doing this to save Sango though,” said James. As soon as James and Naythan started fighting the robots, they were overwhelmed by the robots strength. “Guys you’re not defeating the robots maybe you two should work together,” exclaimed Kagome. “No way!!” exclaimed James. After a while, Naythan and James were losing the battle. “ You guys can’t win the battle by fighting alone. Just call a truce and become friends,” said Kagome. “Fine, truce,” said James and Naythan in unison. Then they quickly slaughtered the robots. “ Sango, Kagome are you two okay”, asked James. “ Yes we’re fine”, answered Sango. “ Those robots were exceedingly tough. I wonder what made them go berserk,” said Naythan. Kagome and Sango exchanged glances. The school bell rang. The four friends went to class. “ I have an announcement to make, Shippo is back from the hospital” said Mr.Kazuki. The class was dead silent. “ Okay, today’s lesson is going to be about the Demon Underworld. Now the Demon Underworld is the place where the legendary Tetsusaiga is located. The Tetsusaiga was once wielded by the legendary Inuyasha a legendary half-breed and was used to slay the vile and despicable half-breed Naraku. Naraku wanted the Shikon Jewel for power. He had most of the jewel, but he only needed the shards that Inuyasha’s group had. Inuyasha wanted to kill Naraku in order to get the part of the jewel that Naraku had to become a full demon. Inuyasha led Naraku to the Demon Underworld and then Inuyasha and his group ambushed Naraku and killed him, but in the process, the Shikon Jewel got shattered and Inuyasha and his friends died. It is said though that all of Inuyasha’s group including him has a reincarnation,” said Mr.Kazuki. James’ hand shot up in the air. “ Yes, James” said Mr.Kazuki. “ Who were Inuyasha’s friends?” asked James. “ They were a priestess named Jazlyn, a demon slayer named Kimberly, and a monk named Miroku”, answered Mr.Kazuki. After Mr.Kazuki started up his discussion, about the Demon Underworld again James, Naythan, and Shippo all fell asleep and Sango and Kagome played with Kirara.
Chapter 4: The Legendary Tetsusaiga
While walking to school, the group stumbled upon a well. “ When did this well get here?” asked Shippo. “ Who knows, lets just continue to school?” answered James. Then a gust of wind pushed the 5 friends into the well. “Oof. That was a hard landing is everyone okay?” asked Kagome “Yes” replied everyone. “ Where are we?” asked Sango. “ I don’t know”, answered Naythan. The place was covered with blood and in one corner, there was a heap of demon bones plus there was a river of blood that ran through the room. “ Well, I guess we’d better get going,” said Shippo. The group made their way to the end of the room they were in and opened a door at the end that lead to another room. In the other room, the group was greeted by a human with an axe. “ Welcome to the Demon Underworld” said??? “ This is the Demon Underworld!” said James. “ Yes. To get here you must all be very extraordinary. Lets see how good you do in battle then shall we. By the way, my name’s Gatenmaru. Remember it cause it will be the last name you’ll hear,” said Gatenmaru. Then gigantic moth-like wings protruded out of Gatenmaru’s back. “Sango you be back-up okay and protect Kagome and Shippo. Naythan you and me will be the main attackers” said James. “ Trying to make a battle plan. Hahaha! It’s useless” said Gatenmaru. “ Ten Commandments darkness!” yelled James. The sword turned black. James and Naythan then ran toward Gatenmaru and slashed him a couple of times. “Fools, do you think you can win against me. Poison Powder” said Gatenmaru. Gatenmaru flapped his moth-like wings very fast creating Poison Powder. “Naythan use your fire rat cloak to protect Sango, Kagome, Shippo” said James. James then ran in front of the group. “ Ten Commandments barrier!” yelled James. A plasma barrier guarded the 5 friends. “Heh, do you think you can beat me” said Gatenmaru. “Whirlwind of Doom!!” said Gatenmaru. Gatenmaru’s gigantic moth-like wings flapped very fast and hard creating a whirlwind. The 5 friends were flung around the stone room as if they were rag dolls. The group hit the walls of the room and landed in one big pile. They were all severely injured. Then a white light surrounded the group. The whole group was magically teleported out of the Demon Underworld and landed next to the well.“ Wha? What happened?” asked Shippo. “I think we magically teleported out of the Demon Underworld” answered James. “We should all talk about the Demon Underworld after school, but know we have to get to school. Kagome what time is it?” asked Naythan. “Wha? This can’t be right it’s 7:00 a.m.” answered Kagome. “ Well, the only logical thing that happened is that while we were in the Demon Underworld is that time stopped in the real world” said Sango. “Well does it matter” said Naythan. “No” said Sango. The group of friends headed to school.
Chapter 5: Betrayal
After school the 5 kids were hanging around next to Mr. Kazuki’s classroom on the battletop. “ I think we should hone our skills and come up with battle plans before we go back to the Demon Underworld” said Naythan. “Yes we should, but still how could we hone our skills” said James. “Well, I think we should practice against each other” said Kagome. “Yeah, we could but, where?” asked Naythan. “ The field and the battletop are always open to battle after school” said Sango. “We could go there” said Naythan “About the battle plans, I think we should always have Sango as backup and me and you as the attackers if there is 3 or more monsters or me and you are injured badly then Sango comes in” said James. “Possibly, what do you think about it Sango?” asked Naythan. “ Sure” answered Sango. “Well, then you are all dismissed” said Naythan. “Naythan, what should me and Shippo do in a battle?” asked Kagome. “ You should stay near Sango and if she is in battle stay somewhere close by but, not too close to the battle” answered Naythan. “I better be getting home” said Sango. “ Me too” said Naythan. Naythan started jumping towards his house, Kirara transformed and Sango got on her back and rode home. “ I’ll walk you home Kagome” said James. “ Okay thanks”, said Kagome. On the way to Kagome’s house Kagome gave James a flyer. “What’s this?” said James. “It’s a flyer for a sword training school you could use it to train,” said Kagome. “I don’t need the training, but I’ll take the flyer,” said James. At that note, Kagome and James arrived at Kagome’s house. Kagome’s house was a medium-sized track house the outer walls were peach colored and the roof was a light pink. “Thanks for walking me home” said Kagome. “My pleasure” said James. As Kagome was walking towards the door of her house a thought passed through here head, “What a gentleman” thought Kagome.
Mid-afternoon after lunch, “We will now continue our discussion about the Demon Underworld” announced Mr.Kazuki. “Mr.Kazuki you’re probably not going to believe this, but me, Naythan, Kagome, Sango, and Shippo all ventured into the Demon Underworld yesterday” said James. “Heh, I’m actually not surprised. You and your friends have a lot of the characteristics of Inuyasha and his group,” said Mr. Kazuki. “We do?” asked Kagome. “Yes, you and your friends show a lot of Inuyasha’s group characteristics every day” said Mr.Kazuki. “Wow” said the whole class in awe. “Well, back to the discussion, James you said that you and your friends went to the Demon Underworld, now what did you see in the Demon Underworld?” asked Mr.Kazuki “Well, we saw blood everywhere and faced an extraordinarily powerful demon named Gatenmaru ,but the weirdest part about this is that some how when all of our group was badly injured we were teleported magically teleported out of the Demon Underworld” answered Sango. “Hmmm, I think your group was teleported by the Underworld’s power. Now see you might not get this, but the Demon Underworld can teleport demons at any time what so ever, but it would only teleport you if you were worthy and strong enough” said Mr. Kazuki. “Hmm, fascinating” said Kagome. Rinnnnnng!!!!! The bell rang indicating that school was over. All the half-breeds piled through the doorway or Mr. Kazuki’s classroom. After the 4 friends were out of class Naythan asked a question that would change the group forever. “So, who is everyone asking out to the school dance?” asked Naythan. “Hmm, actually I haven’t thought about it” said James even though he was lying. “Umm, me and Sango have to go do…….. some training” said Kagome hastily. “We do?” asked Sango. “Yes, remember the special training session” said Kagome slightly mad. “ Oh yes now I remember, Kirara transform” said Sango. The cat demon transformed to her larger self and flew off with Sango and Kagome riding on her back. “That was weird” said James. “Yeah” said Naythan. “Well, I got to do some training myself” said James. “Well, then cya” said Naythan. James stealthily ran northwards. “So, this is where the sword training is held” said James checking the address with the flyer. James walked in to the sword training school called Swords, Swords Everywhere. “Wow, so empty” said James with a tinge of astonishment in his voice. “Hello kid why did you come here?” asked a bald headed half-breed. “I came to touch up on my sword skills” answered James. “Ah, what kind of sword you got there?” asked the half-breed. “Ten Commandments” said James. “Wha, really THE Ten Commandments” said the half-breed. “ Yes, the real one…..” said James. James unsheathed his sword and showed it to the half-breed. “Wow, you actually have the Ten Commandments! By the way my name is Corbenik” said Corbenik. “Well, then can you help me master the Ten Commandments?” asked James. “Certainly, I’ve been studying all about the Ten Commandments all my life” answered Corbenik. “Thanks, by the way why is this place empty?” asked James. “Well, I don’t really know that either” answered Corbenik. “Ok, then let’s get started training” said James. Corbenik and James walked outside to a grassy pasture. “The first lesson about the Ten Commandments is that, even though the Ten Commandments can hold up to 10 elements, the sword is best when it only has 3-5 elements in its memory system” said Corbenik. “Well, then the elements I’ll be picking 4 elements they are fire, darkness, thunder, and zombie
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