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Chapter 1: Demon School
Hi, I’m James this is the story about my life. Well I live in the Demon

World; the Demon World is a world where demons and half demons live. Half

demons are half human and half demon; what I mean is that on a new moon half-

breeds change into full humans and when half-breeds get really angry they

change into full demon. Half-breed is just a fancy word for half human and

half demons. I have 3 friends Naythan, Kagome, Sango, and Shippo. Naythan is

strong and has very high defense and average speed, but doesn’t have a

weapon. Shippo is weak in strength and defense, but excels in speed, Shippo

doesn’t have a weapon. Kagome is a human girl from the human world she is

weak in strength and defense and speed, her weapon is Bows and Arrows. What

I mean by Kagome coming from the human world is that there is a secret well

in the Demon World that is connected to the human world and only humans can

use the well. Sango is also a human girl, but trained in the Demon World.

She is average in strength, defense, and speed, her weapon is a boomerang

called Hiraikotsu sometimes she also brings her cat friend named Kirara into

battle. Kirara is a small cat demon that can transform into a bigger cat

demon that can fly. My strength is about average, I have a weak defense, and

my speed is very high, my weapon is a sword called Ten Commandments. Ten

Commandments can change into 10 forms: regular, explosion, fire, water,

darkness, thunder, grass, hurricane, zombie, and soul absorption. There is

this legendary sword that everyone wants to get there claws on it is the

Tetsusaiga. In addition, everyone wants to get fragments of the Shikon

Jewel. The Shikon Jewel is rarer then any jewel in the whole entire Demon

World. Even if you get 1 fragment of the jewel, you can have infinite life




It was the first day of Demon High School. James was waiting in front of my

class for the bell to ring, but James soon got bored so James took a tour of

the school. The battletop was divided into 3 sections. In the far left part

of the battletop was a section with earth-type robot demons, in the middle

of the battletop, there were a section of thunder-type robot demons, and in

the far right corner, there was a row of classes. Only a few feet away from

the classes, there is a barrier that only half- breeds can get through. When

James was going to check the battlegrounds. James bumped into his 2 friends

Naythan and Shippo. “Oh, sorry.” said James. “It doesn’t matter………Hey it’s

you James I’m glad we’re in the same school together. Whose class are you

in”, said Shippo. “Mr.Kazuki’s class. Do you want to go see the

battlegrounds?” said James. “Sure” said Naythan and Shippo. The group got

to the battletop just before the bell rung. The group got to class just

before the teacher got to class. Everyone rushed inside the class eager to

see where they sit. James sat in the middle desk to his right was Naythan

and to his left was Sango, next to Sango was Kagome, next to Naythan was

Shippo. “Class is in session!” said the teacher. “Well my name is Mr.Kazuki.

Today’s lesson will be honing your fighting skill. This lesson is a

tournament; the first part of the tourney is the most vigorous. I will

randomly pick a half-breed to go against the whole class except your row.

The second part is when you face your row and the third part is when you go

up against 1 other champion resembling their class. Now I pick the half-


breed who is wearing the Fire Rat cloak and the Fire Rat pants and who has

long silver hair,” said Mr.Kazuki. “Who me?” answered Naythan. “Yes you…

Excuse me I don’t think I got your name” said Mr.Kazuki. “Oh it’s Naythan,”

said Naythan. Naythan fought vigorously and won the first part of the

tournament. “Naythan has won the first part of the tourney,” exclaimed

Mr.Kazuki. “Now I will pick a half-breed to go up against Naythan.I pick the

kid who is wearing the long dark blue cloak and has short- black hair” said

Mr.Kazuki. “Oh I’m James,” said James. Naythan and James put up a

treacherous fight that left bystanders gasping at every move. “It’s time to

finish this,” said James. “Fat chance” said Naythan. James then thrust his

sword forward. Naythan then quickly dodged the attack, pulled James closer,

and used the Backlash Wave Punch. James slammed into the North wall and

creating a dent in the wall. “James is unable to battle, Naythan wins the

battle” said Mr.Kazuki. “Next is the girl that has black hair and who has

the Bow and Arrows” said Mr.Kazuki. “I’m Kagome” said Kagome blissfully.

Kagome started off by shooting 5 sacred arrows at Naythan.1 of them pinned

Naythan to a wall then Kagome ran up and started punching Naythan in face a

couple times. “This is easier then I thought” said Kagome. Then Naythan

pulled the arrow out of his body and used Iron Reaver Soul Stealer on


Kagome. “Kagome is unable to battle, Naythan wins the battle” said

Mr.Kazuki. “Next up is the girl who has the large boomerang and has long

black hair. “Oh, I am Sango” said Sango cheerfully. Sango started using her

Hiraikotsu on Naythan. The boomerang hit Naythan, then Naythan used an

extraordinary attack on Sango first he smothered his claws with blood and

used his skill Blades of Blood on Sango.Before the attack hit her, Sango

quickly blocked the attack with her Hiraikotsu. Sango then took out her

sword and slashed at Naythan. Then Naythan used his Iron Reaver Soul Stealer

on Sango’s back. Sango had a deep gash in her back. “I…I surrender” said

Sango. “Naythan wins the battle, next up is the kid who is little and has a

bow in his hair” said Mr. Kazuki. “I’m not little and my name is Shippo”,

said Shippo. Shippo started off using his Fox Fire technique, but it didn’t

affect Naythan. Naythan then used Iron Reaver Soul Stealer on

Shippo. “What’s this Naythan actually K.O’Ed Shippo, Naythan wins the

battle” said Mr.Kazuki. “Before the finals there will be a 30 minute break”

said Mr.Kazuki. After Mr.Kazuki said that a crowd of girls crowded around

James asking for his autograph. “Ladies, Ladies calm down” said James. James

then stepped out of the crowd to go see Naythan. “Congratulations Naythan”

said Kagome. “Why did you have to use your Backlash Wave Punch on James!”

said Sango angrily. “Why would you even think of caring for that weakling”

said Naythan. “Hey Naythan turn around” said James. Right when Naythan

turned around James punched Naythan in the face. “I’ll never forgive you for

what you said about me being weak because I’m not” said James. “I’m with

James,” said Sango. “The final match is about to start will all participants

and spectators proceed to the battletop,” said Mr.Kazuki. “We’ll finish this

after I’m the champion,” said Naythan. Naythan, James, Sango, and Kagome all

proceeded to the arena. “It’s the final round of the tournament. Naythan

will now vs. wha... what’s this it’s Naythan vs. his older brother

Sesshoumaru” said Mr.Kazuki. Naythan started off using his Iron Reaver.

Sesshoumaru effortlessly dodged the attack and ran toward Naythan very fast

and used his Poison Claws on Naythan. Naythan then took out the Ten

Commandments and slashed at Sesshoumaru. “Thanks for the sword James.” said

Naythan. “Hey what!” said James. James then rushed into battle and used Iron

Reaver on Naythan. Naythan then dropped Ten Commandments and James picked it

up. “Ten Commandments, hurricane!” said James. James’ sword turned pure

white. “Dance of The Dragon” said James. 3 enormous hurricanes came out of

James’ sword and hit Sesshoumaru and Naythan. Sesshoumaru then took out his

sword Tokijin and slashed at Naythan. Naythan used Backlash Wave Punch on

Sesshoumaru. Sesshoumaru then turned into his demon form; a huge white dog.

Sesshoumaru then bit Naythan. Naythan then knelt down and the south wind

blew his eyes turned fiery red, his pupils became slits of purple, and his

claws became sharper than usual. “Naythan turned into a full fledged demon

everyone run!!” yelled Mr.Kazuki. Sesshoumaru reverted to his normal form

and fled. Naythan then ran into the crowd and started slaughtering innocent

half-breeds. Naythan then snuck up behind Sango and was about to use

Backlash Wave Punch on her, but right before the blast hit her James ran in

and took the full blow of the Backlash Wave Punch. Naythan then went and

slaughtered more half-breeds. “Are you okay?” asked Sango. “Yeah I’m okay”,

answered James. “Let’s go check on Kagome,” said Sango. James and Sango then

rushed over to where Kagome was hiding from Naythan. “Are you okay?” asked

James. “Yes I am. How can we stop Naythan?” asked Kagome. “You can, if you

haven’t noticed Naythan likes you,” said Sango. “Really, I never knew that”

said Kagome blushing slightly. James, Sango, and Kagome all ran to Naythan.

Kagome then slowly walked toward Naythan. “Don’t come near me Kagome”, said

Naythan. Kagome ignored Naythan’s warning; she then ran and embraced him.

Naythan then returned to his original form. “What happened?” said

Naythan. “You turned into demon”, answered Kagome. “What!!” said

Naythan? “She’s right; you did turn into a demon and slaughtered hundreds of

innocent half-breeds. You almost killed Sango too. Now you’re going to pay

with your life!!” said James. “James you are in no condition to fight” said

Sango. “But, he almost killed you and me” said James. “Yeah I know, but I


wouldn’t want you dead on my behalf” said Sango. “This time you’re lucky

Naythan “said James. James and Sango walked away. “The Winner’s Ceremony is

about to begin” said Mr.Kazuki. Naythan then rushed to the

ceremony. “Naythan for winning the tournament you get crowned toughest half-

breed in this school also you get this one of a kind Ultima Sword” said

Mr.Kazuki.





Chapter 2: The Battle
The next morning before school started James and Naythan decided to

battle each other on the field. The field is a place where half-breeds can

battle each other. “Now it’s time to finish this” said James. James then ran

toward Naythan. Then Naythan took out his sword quickly guarded against

James’ attack. “Ten Commandments fire!” yelled James. James’ sword glowed

bright red. James then charged towards Naythan. Naythan then guarded against

the attack, but James jumped over Naythan and slashed his back. After the

attack, Naythan was stunned. James then ran behind Naythan and stabbed him

in the back. “Wh…why didn’t you kill me when you had the chance” staggered

Naythan. “It would have made my victory all too easy. In addition, I get to

see you die in pain. Ten Commandments zombie!” said James. The sword turned

midnight black. “Zombies of the underworld bring pain and suffering to this

pitiful half-breed” said James. Then zombies came out of the ground and

started feeding upon Naythan’s body. “How does it feel Naythan this is the

pain you wrought upon me and Sango” jeered James. “Ten Commandments

explosion!” yelled James. The sword turned smoke gray. James then swung his

sword down hard on Naythan’s body and the zombies. The blast created an

explosion that destroyed zombies and did massive damage. “Fool, I told you

that you’d pay with your life,” said James. Then James walked away. Later in

the morning while James was waiting for Sango, Kagome walked up to James and

asked, “Where is Naythan”. “On the field” answered James. Kagome then went

to the field and saw Naythan lying there not moving at all. Kagome rushed to

Naythan. “Naythan!! Naythan!! Yelled Kagome. Tears started welling up in

Kagome’s eyes. Kagome then started sobbing uncontrollably. Meanwhile Sango

walks up to James. Then James explained everything that happened, to Sango.

Sango and James then started spying on Kagome and Naythan. While Kagome was

crying, Naythan regained consciousness and sat upright and then Kagome

hugged Naythan. “I thought you were dead. I was so worried about you” said

Kagome. “It’s okay Kagome I’m fine” said Naythan. “You’re fine. Look at

yourself, you’re drenched in blood and you have a deep gash in you’re back.

Who did this to you” asked Kagome. “James did, to avenge what I did to Sango

in the tournament. I’m going to look for him” said Naythan. “I going too”

said Kagome. “No, it’s too dangerous. James is ruthless and strong” replied

Naythan. “Well, maybe he’ll be dazed by my girlish looks” answered

Kagome. “Yeah right, I guess you can come though” said Naythan. After Sango

and James heard that, they told Kirara to transform and then they got on

her. Kirara started flying, but was struck down by an arrow. Kirara changed

back into her small form and James and Sango started falling. An arrow and

an Iron Reaver hit James. James got on the ground first and caught

Sango. “Sango are you okay?” asked James. “Yeah, I’m fine”, answered

Sango. “Sango you take Kagome and I’ll take Naythan,” said James. “Naythan,

let’s play a little game of follow the leader and I’m the leader,” asked

James. “Fine” replied Naythan. James then ran quickly and Naythan followed

him. Meanwhile Kagome and Sango were fighting one on one. Sango used here

Hiraikotsu on Kagome and successfully hit Kagome. Sango then took out her

sword and stabbed Kagome in the stomach. “I give,” said Kagome weakly.

Meanwhile James was battling Naythan. “Ten Commandments fire!” yelled James.

James’s sword turned bright red. Naythan then ran toward James, but James

dodged the move and countered with his on move Circle of Hades. A medium

sized circle of flames surrounded Naythan and James then the circle turned

into a tower of flames that engulfed Naythan and James, but didn’t affect

James. After the attack, James slashed Naythan a couple time. “Naythan you

can’t win against me I am the greatest swordsmen alive” said James. “That’s

what you think James, but one day I will be stronger and I feel that day

will come soon,” said Naythan. Then the bell rang Brrring! Brrring! “You’re

yet again lucky,” said James. James and the group went to class.





Chapter 3: The Plan
Later that night Kagome was talking to Shippo who was released from the

hospital. Kagome told Shippo everything that happened at school and asked

him for his help in getting Naythan and James back together as

friends. “Shippo the plan is that you hack into the schools computer

database and make all the robots on the battletop only target me and Sango

only. Also make their difficulty level exceedingly high,” said Kagome. “I

hack into the schools computer and make all the robots difficulty level go

exceedingly high and only attack you and Sango. Got it,” said Shippo. “Good,

I’ll call Sango and tell her the plan,” said Kagome. Then Shippo and Kagome

hung up the phone. Early the next morning at school James Naythan heard loud

cries for help. They immediately knew it was Kagome a Sango; both of them

quickly ran towards the sound. When they both arrived at the battletop, they

started fighting with each other. “James why don’t you go save your

girlfriend” sneered Naythan. “She’s not my girlfriend,” replied

James. “Guys, quit fighting and help us out!” yelled Sango. “Grr, I’m only

doing this to save Sango though,” said James. As soon as James and Naythan

started fighting the robots, they were overwhelmed by the robots

strength. “Guys you’re not defeating the robots maybe you two should work

together,” exclaimed Kagome. “No way!!” exclaimed James. After a while,

Naythan and James were losing the battle. “You guys can’t win the battle by

fighting alone. Just call a truce and become friends,” said Kagome. “Fine,

truce,” said James and Naythan in unison. Then they quickly slaughtered the

robots. “Sango, Kagome are you two okay”, asked James. “Yes we’re fine”,

answered Sango. “Those robots were exceedingly tough. I wonder what made

them go berserk,” said Naythan. Kagome and Sango exchanged glances. The

school bell rang. The four friends went to class. “I have an announcement to

make, Shippo is back from the hospital” said Mr.Kazuki. The class was dead

silent. “Okay, today’s lesson is going to be about the Demon Underworld. Now

the Demon Underworld is the place where the legendary Tetsusaiga is located.

The Tetsusaiga was once wielded by the legendary Inuyasha a legendary half-

breed and was used to slay the vile and despicable half-breed Naraku. Naraku

wanted the Shikon Jewel for power. He had most of the jewel, but he only

needed the shards that Inuyasha’s group had. Inuyasha wanted to kill Naraku

in order to get the part of the jewel that Naraku had to become a full

demon. Inuyasha led Naraku to the Demon Underworld and then Inuyasha and his

group ambushed Naraku and killed him, but in the process, the Shikon Jewel

got shattered and Inuyasha and his friends died. It is said though that

Inuyasha’s entire group including him has a reincarnation,” said Mr.Kazuki.

James’ hand shot up in the air. “Yes, James” said Mr.Kazuki. “Who were

Inuyasha’s friends?” asked James. “They were a priestess named Jazlyn, a

demon slayer named Kimberly, and a monk named Miroku”, answered Mr.Kazuki.

After Mr.Kazuki started up his discussion, about the Demon Underworld again

James, Naythan, and Shippo all fell asleep and Sango and Kagome played with

Kirara.





Chapter 4: The Demon Underworld
While walking to school, the group stumbled upon a well. “When did this

well get here?” asked Shippo. “Who knows, lets just continue to school?”

answered James. Then a gust of wind pushed the 5 friends into the

well. “Oof. That was a hard landing is everyone okay?” asked Kagome “Yes”

replied everyone. “Where are we?” asked Sango. “I don’t know”, answered

Naythan. The place was covered with blood and in one corner, there was a

heap of demon bones plus there was a river of blood that ran through the

room. “Well, I guess we’d better get going,” said Shippo. The group made

their way to the end of the room they were in and opened a door at the end

that lead to another room. In the other room, the group was greeted by a

human with an axe. “Welcome to the Demon Underworld” said??? “This is the

Demon Underworld!” said James. “Yes. To get here you must all be very

extraordinary. Let’s see how good you do in battle then shall we. By the

way, my name’s Gatenmaru. Remember it cause it will be the last name you’ll

hear,” said Gatenmaru. Then gigantic moth-like wings protruded out of

Gatenmaru’s back. “Sango you are back-up okay and protect Kagome and

Shippo. Naythan you and me will be the main attackers” said James. “Trying

to make a battle plan. Hahaha! It’s useless” said Gatenmaru. “Ten

Commandments darkness!” yelled James. The sword turned black. James and

Naythan then ran toward Gatenmaru and slashed him a couple of times. “Fools,

do you think you can win against me. Poison Powder” said Gatenmaru.

Gatenmaru flapped his moth-like wings very fast creating Poison

Powder. “Naythan use your fire rat cloak to protect Sango, Kagome, and

Shippo” said James. James then ran in front of the group. “Ten Commandments

barrier!” yelled James. A plasma barrier guarded the 5 friends. “Heh, do you

think you can beat me” said Gatenmaru. “Whirlwind of Doom!!” said Gatenmaru.

Gatenmaru’s gigantic moth-like wings flapped very fast and hard creating a

whirlwind. The 5 friends were flung around the stone room as if they were

rag dolls. The group hit the walls of the room and landed in one big pile.

They were all severely injured. Then a white light surrounded the group. The

whole group was magically teleported out of the Demon Underworld and landed

next to the well. “Wha? What happened?” asked Shippo. “I think we magically

teleported out of the Demon Underworld” answered James. “We should all talk

about the Demon Underworld after school, but know we have to get to school.

Kagome what time is it?” asked Naythan. “Wha? This can’t be right it’s 7:00

a.m.” answered Kagome. “Well, the only logical thing that happened is that

while we were in the Demon Underworld is that time stopped in the real

world” said Sango. “Well does it matter” said Naythan. “No” said Sango. The

group of friends headed to school.



Chapter 5: A New Level Of Friendship
After school the 5 kids were hanging around next to Mr. Kazuki’s classroom

on the battletop. “I think we should hone our skills and come up with battle

plans before we go back to the Demon Underworld” said Naythan. “Yes we

should, but still how could we hone our skills” said James. “Well, I think

we should practice against each other” said Kagome. “Yeah, we could but,

where?” asked Naythan. “The field and the battletop are always open to

battle after school” said Sango. “We could go there” said Naythan “About the

battle plans, I think we should always have Sango as backup and me and you

as the attackers if there is 3 or more monsters or me and you are injured

badly then Sango comes in” said James. “Possibly, what do you think about it

Sango?” asked Naythan. “Sure” answered Sango. “Well, then you are all

dismissed” said Naythan. “Naythan, what should me and Shippo do in a

battle?” asked Kagome. “You should stay near Sango and if she is in battle

stay somewhere close by but, not too close to the battle” answered

Naythan. “I better am getting home” said Sango. “Me too” said Naythan.

Naythan started jumping towards his house, Kirara transformed and Sango got

on her back and rode home. “I’ll walk you home Kagome” said James. “Okay

thanks”, said Kagome. On the way to Kagome’s house Kagome gave James a

flyer. “What’s this?” said James. “It’s a flyer for a sword training school

you could use it to train,” said Kagome. “I don’t need the training, but

I’ll take the flyer,” said James. At that note, Kagome and James arrived at

Kagome’s house. Kagome’s house was a medium-sized track house the outer

walls were peach colored and the roof was a light pink. “Thanks for walking

me home” said Kagome. “My pleasure” said James. As Kagome was walking

towards the door of her house a thought passed through here head, “What a

gentleman” thought Kagome.


Mid-afternoon after lunch, “We will now continue our discussion about the

Demon Underworld” announced Mr.Kazuki. “Mr.Kazuki you’re probably not going

to believe this, but I, Naythan, Kagome, Sango, and Shippo all ventured into

the Demon Underworld yesterday” said James. “Heh, I’m actually not

surprised. You and your friends have a lot of the characteristics of

Inuyasha and his group,” said Mr. Kazuki. “We do?” asked Kagome. “Yes, you

and your friends show a lot of Inuyasha’s group characteristics every day”

said Mr.Kazuki. “Wow” said the whole class in awe. “Well, back to the

discussion, James you said that you and your friends went to the Demon

Underworld, now what did you see in the Demon Underworld?” asked

Mr.Kazuki “Well, we saw blood everywhere and faced an extraordinarily

powerful demon named Gatenmaru, but the weirdest part about this is that

some how when all of our group was badly injured we were teleported

magically teleported out of the Demon Underworld” answered Sango. “Hmmm, I

think your group was teleported by the Underworld’s power. Now see you might

not get this, but the Demon Underworld can teleport demons at any time what

so ever, but it would only teleport you if you were worthy and strong

enough” said Mr. Kazuki. “Hmm, fascinating” said Kagome. Rinnnnnng!!!!! The

bell rang indicating that school was over. All the half-breeds piled through

the doorway of Mr. Kazuki’s classroom. After the 4 friends were out of class

Naythan asked a question that would change the group forever. “So, who is

everyone asking out to the school dance?” asked Naythan. “Hmm, actually I

haven’t thought about it” said James even though he was lying. “Umm, I and

Sango have to go do…….. Some training” said Kagome hastily. “We do?” asked

Sango. “Yes, remember the special training session” said Kagome slightly

mad. “Oh yes now I remember, Kirara transform” said Sango. The cat demon

transformed to her larger self and flew off with Sango and Kagome riding on

her back. “That was weird” said James. “Yeah” said Naythan. “Well, I got to

do some training myself” said James. “Well, then cya” said Naythan. James

stealthily ran northwards. “So, this is where the sword training is held”

said James checking the address with the flyer. James walked in to the sword

training school called Swords, Swords Everywhere. “Wow, so empty” said James

with a tinge of astonishment in his voice. “Hello kid why did you come

here?” asked a bald headed half-breed. “I came to touch up on my sword

skills” answered James. “Ah, what kind of sword you got there?” asked the

half-breed. “Ten Commandments” said James. “Wha, really THE Ten

Commandments” said the half-breed. “Yes, the real one…..” said James. James

unsheathed his sword and showed it to the half-breed. “Wow, you actually

have the Ten Commandments! By the way my name is Corbenik” said

Corbenik. “Well, then can you help me master the Ten Commandments?” asked

James. “Certainly, I’ve been studying all about the Ten Commandments all my

life” answered Corbenik. “Thanks, by the way why is this place empty?” asked

James. “Well, I don’t really know that either” answered Corbenik. “Ok, then

let’s get started training” said James. Corbenik and James walked outside to

a grassy pasture. “The first lesson about the Ten Commandments is that, even

though the Ten Commandments can hold up to 10 elements, the sword is best

when it only has 3-5 elements in its memory system” said Corbenik. “Well,

then the elements I’ll be picking are these 4 elements they are fire,

darkness, thunder, and zombie” said James. “Okay, now you have to master

these 4 elements one-by-one” said Corbenik. “Wow, that could take awhile”

said James. “Surprisingly it only takes 2 weeks to master all 4 elements”

said Corbenik. “Wow, then let’s get started” said James eagerly. “Now the

first thing you have to know is the basic fire moves” said Corbenik. James

trained with Corbenik for 2 hours. “Well, your training is done for today”

said Corbenik. “Okay, I’ll be back here tomorrow” said James as he left the

training gym. When James was outside, he quickly glanced at his watch. “Hmm,

maybe I should go see Kagome, she was acting strange today” thought James.

James quickly sped off towards Kagome’s house. When he arrived at Kagome’s

house he knocked at the door. A little boy with black hair and brown eyes

wearing an orange shirt with a black stripe that ran down the middle and

jeans opened the door. “Hello, you must be Kagome’s boyfriend, James right”

said the little boy. “Kagome’s boyfriend, now what makes you say that?” said

James eyeing the little boy. “Oh, Kagome ALWAYS is talking about you, she

mostly talks about how your so strong and cute” said the little boy. “Um,

okay nice to know kid” said James blushing a bit. “You and Kagome would make

a perfect couple, by the way I’m Sota” said Sota. Just then Kagome arrived

at the door and Kagome yelled at Sota a bit causing him to run away. “Hey

James, what’d you need?” asked Kagome. “I just came to talk about some

stuff” said James. “Okay, there’s still sunlight outside, lets take a walk”

said Kagome. “Okay” said James. “So what’d you want to talk about” asked

Kagome as James and she left the house. “Well, you were acting a little

strange today after Naythan asked that question about the dance and your

brother Sota, told me that you talk about me a lot” said James. “Well um I

can explain......” said Kagome. “ Shoot!! I’ll never be able to get outta

this one, stupid Sota!!” thought Kagome. “Okay, so explain” said

James. “Well, James I.......” said Kagome. “You what?” asked James. “I……I…..

I have a crush one you!!!” yelled Kagome as she embraced James. “Um…..This

is so sudden” said James dazed from the hug. “You like me to don’t you?”

asked Kagome. “Well, I haven’t put much thought into it” said James. “You

don’t like me” said Kagome sadly. “Hey wha….I never said I didn’t like you

Kagome” said James. “You like Sango don’t you” said Kagome ready to burst

into tears. “Well um, I think Sango likes Naythan” said James. “So, you like

me don’t you” said Kagome cheerfully. “Um, I haven’t made up my mind yet”

said James. “Well, is this all you wanted to talk about?” asked

Kagome. “Yeah I guess” said James. “Well, I’ll see you tomorrow at school”

said Kagome. “Yeah see you” said James. After school the next day, “Well,

since tomorrow is a Saturday I’m going to go to this old and abandoned

castle I heard was haunted, if anyone wants to join me its fine with me”

said Naythan. “I’m in!!” said James excitedly. “Hmm, I guess I guess I’ll

join too” said Sango. “Yep I’ll go too” said Kagome. “I’ll see you all

tomorrow, I got to go attend this sword training class I signed up for” said

James. “See you later” said everyone. “I guess I’ll be going home too” said

Kagome. “ Now that we’re all alone, Naythan I have to ask you something”

said Sango. “Yeah, what’d you need to ask me?” asked Naythan. “Well um…… Do

you like me?” asked Sango. “Wow, I didn’t see that one coming” said

Naythan. “Well do you?” asked Sango. “ I can’t answer your question now”

replied Naythan. “ Why not?” asked Sango. “ I have to ask James about this”

said Naythan. “ Well then tell me your answer as soon as possible then” said

Sango. “Yeah I’ll do that” said Naythan. “ Ok, I’ll see you tomorrow. Kirara

transform!!” said Sango. Kirara transformed into her large form and flew off

with Sango on her back.


    
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December 21 2005, 8:24 PM 

The next morning in front the old abandoned castle, “Is everyone venture in

the castle?” asked Naythan. “Yeah, I’m ready” said James. “Ready to kill

anything in sight” said Sango. “Yep, I’m ready” said Kagome. “Okay, then

onwards into the castle” said Naythan. Inside the castle, “What an odd

castle” said James while walking. “Odd!! This castle seems to have been made

by a great architect” said Kagome while walking. “Well, doesn’t matter,

hopefully we run into some demons” said Naythan while walking. “Yeah” said

James while walking. Then a strong gust of wind blew at the group. “What

the……” said James struggling to not be blown back. “ Hahaha!!! You fools are

what Naraku fear…. Pathetic” said the lady who was blowing the wind. “Who

are you?” said Naythan struggling to not be blown against the rock wall

behind him. “Fine, I’ll stop the wind, but be aware you shall face pain

afterwards” said the lady who was blowing the wind. The lady then closed her

fan that she grasped in her hand, causing the wind to stop. “Who…Who are

you?” asked James. “I am Kagura the wind mistress and I have been sent by

Naraku to destroy you” said Kagura. “Naraku!! Isn’t he supposed to be

dead!?” asked Sango. “You fool!!! Naraku shall never die, he is invincible”

said Kagura. “Well, if you work for Naraku then you must be evil!! Die now

Kagura!!” said James. “Ten Commandments, Fire!! yelled James. James and

Naythan ran toward Kagura and slashed at her; she dodged James’ slash, but

got hit with Naythan’s slash. “Dance of Blades!! yelled Kagura. Kagura made

some swift movements with her fan and then 3 white blades shot out from her

fan. 2 blades hit James and 1 hit Naythan. “Flame Sword!! yelled James.

James’ sword became engulfed in flames. James ran toward ready to slash

Kagura while Kagome shot a purified arrow at Kagura; Kagura then got

distracted by the arrow and James slashed at Kagura successfully. “ Grr,

Dance of The Dragons!!!! yelled Kagura. Kagura did more swift movements with

her fan then 3 hurricanes came out of her fan; the 3 hurricanes hit the

whole group. “ Gahh……Damn you Kagura, Half-Moon Slice” said Naythan. Naythan

then ran toward Kagura and jumped up, then Kagura got slashed by a half-moon

looking slice created by Naythan. “ Hah!! Your petty attacks are nothing to

me, this is just the beginning!! Now I bid you all an adieu” said Kagura.

Kagura then flew off on a giant feather. “ That was a hard battle” said

Sango. “ Yeah, still I can’t believe Naraku is alive” said James. “Well, I

don’t care if Naraku is alive, as long as he doesn’t attack anyone I know or

myself then I’m fine” said Naythan. “Well, I guess we should head home now”

said Kagome. The group started walking towards their town. Meanwhile, in an

abandoned castle far away……… “So those fools think they’re safe from me,

hah! I pity them” said Naraku peering into a crystal ball. “ Naraku, what if

Naythan gets his hands on the Tetsusaiga? They have been to the Demon

Underworld and faced Gatenmaru and Naythan is the splitting image of

Inuyasha himself” said Kagura. “ Well, you forget that they failed in

defeating Gatenmaru and I shall put some more of my minions in the Demon

Underworld, and if Naythan and his petty group defeat all of them they shall

be in for a surprise” said Naraku


 
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