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Feedback: L. E. Thompson's 7 hearts... Rated:OT

January 15 2006 at 12:29 PM
Score 2.0 (1 person)
Lovless  (Login Lovless)
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from IP address 70.110.139.198

 

A good job for your first attempt. Remember, just 'cause your my girlfriend doesn't mean I'm going easy on you. You need to fix the grammer of how people talk. I know I put it in another feedback. You press "Enter" twice, then "Tab" whenever someone new talks. Also some sentences are a little confusing. Pretty nice title though, I'll give you that. Well... Nothing else really sticks out right now, so I think I'll end it here. It is pretty good!

[Hehehe... Now you people don't know why my name is Lovless!]

 
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