A good job for your first attempt. Remember, just 'cause your my girlfriend doesn't mean I'm going easy on you. You need to fix the grammer of how people talk. I know I put it in another feedback. You press "Enter" twice, then "Tab" whenever someone new talks. Also some sentences are a little confusing. Pretty nice title though, I'll give you that. Well... Nothing else really sticks out right now, so I think I'll end it here. It is pretty good!
[Hehehe... Now you people don't know why my name is Lovless!]