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Bo
Posted Feb 2, 2000 12:52 PM
Hi,
Found your strip through Panda.
I like what I've seen so far, it certainly has the potential to be one of my favourite comic strips. 
I'm not an artist of any kind so I wont comment on your drawing, other than to say that it seems good to me. But I would like to make a few suggestions on other parts.
The text (conversation) can be a bit hard to read some times, you might want to make it a bit more distinctive or maybe slightly larger.
Also you should seriously consider putting in an archives page. You haven't drawn many strips yet, so it's not really that hard to click your way back to the beginning, but that will change when you've put in a few more strips. The sooner you do it, the better. It will help new readers and you will save some time. It's easier to use a few more seconds now, adding another link on a archive page whenever you add another strip, than it will be making an archive page when you have a lot more strips. A button on the main page that links to the very first strip would also be nice.
Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading more.
Sincerely, Bo. |
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