I believe

by Graham

 

You need to establish they were once close earlier in the piece.
The first verse, which is looking real god by the way, sets them up as strangers.
Don't confuse the puntersin a serious song i smy belief.
Get the revalation syndrome out quick and this is not a too bad song.
Graham





Posted on Feb 28, 2000, 5:02 PM
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