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Hi Susan..

If you wanted to..you could by pass the hidden word by using something like :When it's over..it's over..
It's time to quit
Then use a new line that rhymes with.. it.
If this isn't country then disrgard that suggestion

Also you could make this all in 1st person which would put the singer into the song Just suggestions..I do like the song
Barbara



Posted on Mar 2, 2000, 1:28 AM
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