Things went Well in this Song's Asemmbly Process, and the Conclusion was Well-Arrived!
But the BRIDGE seemed a "Speed Bump" for me...maybe it was the Brother-Mother Rhyme Scheme...just seemed "Off" rather than BOOSTIN' my Consciousness to its "Highest Level" in the Song, as it's Supposed to Do...
Yearned for a "Parin' Down' of the Line Length too...this Puzzle has BIG PIECES in it! So it's probably runnin' a tad "Long" when Sung, right?
Other'n those Nits, this was an Interesting Read, Good Angle, Well-though Out.
Kudos!
Stan
Posted on Mar 2, 2000, 10:21 AM from IP address 209.240.200.97