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I agree with the others..I don't see this as a novelty song..but I love the chorus and think you would have a great song if you used that and rewrote the rest. I hear this a sad love ballad.
making references to what the man needs outside of *being a paycheck to this woman*..which is what it sounds like even in it's present form.
Wouldn't shelve this one!
Barbara



Posted on Mar 6, 2000, 1:09 PM
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