I really like what you've got. Though I have to agree with everyone else on the need of an AABA format. In some songs I can see it as an okay thing to go with different formats, but for this song I think it will sound a lot better for commercial value if you go with the "standardized" form.
Good job!
-Ashlee
Posted on Mar 6, 2000, 6:45 PM from IP address 166.62.215.136