Wow, she really gives it to him in the first verse, lol. Good suggestions given, I feel a bit more polishing. Maybe take your title to something like "Why Are You A Fool For Love"
Maybe take your chorus:
Why are you a fool for love
Why don't you ever give up
I've tried to tell you
Begged and pleaded
But you insist, once ain't enough
Why are you a fool for love
Posted on Mar 6, 2000, 10:56 PM from IP address 207.112.213.127