"I'm not 49, I'm 54"...(In "Dog Years," That's DEAD!)

Hi Bill-Buddy!

Cute, Tad LONG Song, but, hey, you got Bifocals by Now, Right?

I'd maybe Truncate this'n before the Dr Visit, Maybe...or make Secod song outta that Part, perhaps.

Otherwise, Reads pretty Smooth & has some Lines in it that Wives love to hear!

Kudos!
Stan

Posted on Mar 9, 2000, 10:38 AM
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