I didn't read the first version, but I like this VERY much. I think it's ready. Just one line kinda doesn't work for me. "Secluded fromn the town". UNcountry to me, maybe just me. But, possibly Overlooking town OR High above the town. See what others say. Good job tho....Greg
Posted on Mar 16, 2000, 8:12 AM from IP address 152.163.207.189