...the lyric - wow, I can't wait to hear it. I just love the way you treated this subject and I think it just gels together so nicely. I agree with a couple of other comments before me - and I'll know you're gonna be sifting through all. Great job Don!
The only line I didn't care for - and I think only because I can't hear it being sung as smoothly as the rest of the lyrics is the 'smothering' line. I'm sure it will work fine - but stood out (sing wise - the word is dead on what you want to say).
Keep it up - thanks for sharing - I look forward to hearing it.
chad
Posted on Mar 16, 2000, 5:54 PM from IP address 205.188.196.44