Keith,
I like this. I'd call it "Finding New Ways". My condensing comments belwo. Keep or sweep. Good luck with it.
VI
I wrote I love you in the steam on the mirror
No better way to make my feelings clearer
I heard you laugh when you stepped out
I love you too you said with a shout
One thing in life that never grows old
Is finding new ways to be told I love you
VII
I wrote I love you on a note on the door
(Right--delete) where you'd see it comin' home from the store
When I heard the door open (I thought--delete) I heard you cry
(And you--delete) said through your tears you'll (be--replace--stay) by my side
One thing in life that never grows old
Is finding new ways to be told I love you
BRIDGE
Then it happens one day
When your life is torn in two
Then you cry and want to die
But there's something you can do
VIII
I said I love you staring up (in--delete)to the sky
(No matter what--replace--Whatever) life brings my love (will never--condense--won't) die
With tears streaming down my (lonely)face
I swore to you (that--delete) no one will (ever--delete) take your place
One thing in life that never grows old
Is finding new ways to be told I love you
Posted on Mar 19, 2000, 12:09 PM from IP address 206.65.216.95
